Maaneet--Mere Ajnabee..PART 14 on PAGE 27&IMP NOTE PG28

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simran

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

part 3 n 4

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Posted: 12 years ago

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part 3
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Deepa

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Posted: 12 years ago

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part 4
nice...
my God he kissed her...
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Nasioush

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Part 5
Geets heart beating fast wid fear..
GEET--hello maan ap..ap..sun rahe na..nw she heard hz gigleing..
MAAN--geet 2 sec k liye chup raha to itni dar gayi..she felt relievd..thn get angry at hz prank..
GEET--maan..apko kaunsi khushi milte hai mujhe tang kr k..she whisperd..
MAAN--geet aise kyu bat kr rahi ho..
GEET--maan yaha sur aur anya so rahi..jorse bat karungi to uth jayenge na..aur ap v na..rat k 11 baje phn kia..
MAAN--kya karu bolo..yaha sare kam ulajha hua hai..resort ayi evening pe..aur ake so gaya tha..thodi der pehle utha..she felt so bad hearing it..
GEET-- Maan ap ne khaya v nehi..dekhiye ye kam k chakkr me khud k dhan rakhna mat bhulna..
MAAN--dhan to rakhna hi padega..ye bande ki sab kch tmhari amanat hai..tmhe to woh thk thak lautana padegana..(she smild shyly..)..ab geet mere babyse..bolo dad use bht sari kissy aur pyar dia hai..
GEET--baby ne apki bate sunliya aur return kissy v de dia..ab jaldi khana khaiye aur so jayie..
MAAN--ha baba..adi gaya hai dinner ordr krne..aaa..geet aur ek bat ..
GEET--kya bat hai..
MAAN --baby ne to dad k liye return kissy di..ab baby k mumma kch..
GEET --bilkul nehi..ye apki saza hai..mujhe sataya thana..ab vugtie..
MAAN-- leo..ye kya bat hai..ek ki..(he stopped seeing adi cming..he coughd..)ha woh geet adi agaya..rakhta hu abhi..take care..geet smild silently..cut the phn..
GEET--ekdum thk hua.. haina baby..she lied dwn to sleep..
Thr maan felt so irritated at adis cming..
MAAN--ADIII...koi kam tmse hota hai..he scold hm to cool hz anger..adi didnt undrstand why actually he scold hm..he just nodded..
ADI--he he he..Ji..ji.. sir ..ryt..

After 4 days..
Maan finishd all work of 10 days in thz 5 days..working really hard..he just want to go bck to hz geet..thz 5 days felt lyk 5 years to hm..itz already evening..he didnt call at home..as he want to give thm surprise..bt reminding smthng of thz days,he sighd..get into car..strted it..
CONT BELOW

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Nasioush

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Posted: 12 years ago

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CONTINUED..
AT KHURNA MANSION..itz already bcm night..geet z reading a book..and between that, staring at hr phn..made a face..
GEET--aj v phn nehi derahe..aur main dungi to bolenge i m bg..jarur der rat phn denge..aur vaise v geet..in 5 dino me kaunse pehle phn dia tha jo aj denge..chaddo. mujhe v na krni bat.. she put the phn aside..bt agn bgn to staring at it..anya cm to hr rum..saw hr grumpy face..she smild..
ANYA --di fr se veerji k phn k intezar kr k mu fula rahi ho..
GEET--chup kr.. teri veerji k sath meri koi bat nehi hai..
ANYA--di ap v janteho ap k ye gussa nehi tikegi veerji phn karenge to..(geet made a face)..o di jo blne ayi thi..buaji arahi hai..may b kal..
GEET--o..to unke kamra thk kr rakhna..kch ulti sidhi hui to khair nehi..bth laughd..thn anya went to see dev if he need anythng..
MEANWHILE..at devnyas rum..dev luking throuh the file..hz phn rang.. he pickd it up.
DEV--hello..bt hearing other side talk..he stood up..luk at clock..itz 10pm..he z silently hearing otherside..dnt know wht to say..hz face changed wid fear..hs voice got dry.
DEV--main ...main abhi..pau..pauch raha hu..he managed to say..cut the phn..wore shirt pant hurridly..just thn anya cm thr..she got surprized seeing hm..
ANYA--ap kahi jarehe dev..
DEV --ha woh..woh..kch kam hai jarury.. abhi jana padega..
ANYA--itni rat ko..aisa kaunsa kam hai?..he felt so miserable..he cant tell her the true matter..
DEV--anya,main ake sab bataunga..abhi jana hai mujhe..
ANYA--dev,mujhe kyu lagrahi ap kch chupa rahe hai mujhse..he hld hr face ..
DEV--anya bas tm bhavi ka khayal rakho..hmm..bye..he went out ..anya lukd at hz going worridly..
here geet got totally restless nw..she called maan..bt tht was switchd off..
GEET--Lo..ye kya bat hai..huhh.. she made a face thn got tensed.maan never switch off hz phn.. anya came in room..geet tld it to hr..she trid to calm hr..didnt tell anythng abt devs going seeing hr tense..bt she still thnking why he went lyk tht?