Maaneet--Mere Ajnabee..PART 14 on PAGE 27&IMP NOTE PG28 - Page 8

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Posted: 12 years ago
#71
Yar where is Maan????
Boy baby!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72
awesome part
so they got a baby boy wow
n mihika is also pregnant

but where is maan? plz usse kuch na huva ho
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73
part 6
nice part...
where is Maan?
hope hes fine...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART 7
Geet luking at dev..she just nw knw.. he was nt at home last nyt..
GEET--dev tm kal bahar the?.he startled..trnd hs gaze frm hr..
DEV--ha..woh..woh ek jaruri kam..k liye jana pada..he hesitating in talk.. smthng making hm uneasy..
MIHIKA--bat kya hai..jab se aya hai.. pareshan lag raha hai..dev lowerd hs face..
DEV--di main..ekbar doc se bat krleta hu..bhavi ko kab..woh discharge karenge..saying thz he went out..mihika tell anya by eyes to go behind hm..anya gave baby to hr.. went out excusing..here everythng nw bgn to make geet mre tense..
outside dev standing..dnt knw wht to do..hw to do..feeling so restless..anya came..placed hr hand on hs shoulder.. he trnd..
ANYA--kya hua dev..ap kyu aise..he lukd wid vacant eyes which made anya more worried..
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at nyt..evry1 went frm hosp..as none allow to be here at nyt. geet ll get dischrge tomorrow noon.. baby z sleeping in cradle..she lukd at hm..smild..thn agn calld maan..may b nw he switchd on the phn..bt agn same matter..she sighd..at one side she feeling so worried..nd at othr side feeling so angry..obviously cute angr..
GEET --ye kya bat hai..chaddo..baby..ap k dad na kabhi nehi sudhrenge..ane do.. bht mar padegi..she made a face wid fake anger..thn agn get worried..
GEET--bata nehi..unka phn ab tak kyu bandh hai..woh v na..ye nehi sochte main pareshan hota hu..bass babaji unhe jaldi mere aur baby k pass ap vej do..thk hai..she sighd..lied on bed to sleep..
NXT day at noon..geet get ready to go home..she just feeling so much joy,happiness fr going home ..wid hr baby..anya came thr..
ANYA--di ap..taiar..hogyae..geet kotted hr brow..
GEET--tu akeli ayi hai.?anya checking if everythng z taken..nt luking at geet..
ANYA-- ha di..bt geet nticed..anya stealing hr gaze frm hr..hiding smethng..
GEET--anya,ghr me sab thk hai na.. she just nodded..
ANYA--di.. grihith ko main leta hu..ap..aram se ayie..saman gadi me pauch jayega.. she tuk baby nd went out wid geet..
CONT BELOW
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Posted: 12 years ago
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CONTINUED
they got into the car..driver started it..anya sitting hlding baby..luking at hm silently.. geet knw anya..she never bcm ths much silent..
GEET--koi problem hui kya,anya..tu jab se aya hai..tabse chupsi baithi hai..anya shaked hr head to no..
ANYA--nehi di..bas..kch nehi hua..she agn got silent..geet sighd..she dnt knw wht z going on.. the car stoppd aftr smetym at KM.. she came out from car..bfr anya..tuk steps to the house..she cant wait anymre nw..Anya saw..hr heart tld hr to stop hr..bt nw thr z no way..she clsd eyes..trs rolld dwn..hlding baby clsly..she went behind hr..
geet enterd into home..bt hr happiness shatterd lyk glass seeing the atmsphere..every1 z wid a sad face.. mihika cring hr heart out..nishan hlding hr..dev z sitting..cring silently.. thr buaji,akash,anyas mom, adi,evry1 of office z hre..hr heart frget to beat when she nticed a body coverd in white cloths..nd behind tht thr was a pic of...Maan!!!..she tuk 2 step bck.. she felt lyk it just a nightmare..anya enterd..stood near her..sheding trs..geet came to dev..he stood..nt able to luk at hr..
GEET--ye sab kya hai..(he remaind silent..cring..she shaked hm hlding hs coller..)dev,main tmse kch puch rahi hu..jawab do..
DEV--bha..bhavi..parsu rat..ratko.. bhai..ca..car k ac..accident..bfr he could finish..geet slappd hm tight..dev clsd hs eyes..she agn shaked hm hlding hs hand..
GEET--Tmhe bata v hai hai tm kya blrahe ho..di,jiju ap log chup kyu ho..boliyena ye jhoot hai ..she shouted..mihika break dwn to mre cry..nishan trnd hs gaze in pain..
ANYA--Di,ap smvaliye..she tried to ease hr into sobbing..
GEET-- are ye maan nehi ho sakta..kabhi nehi..un hone mujhse wada kiya,woh ajaenge..fr..buaji cm to hr..silently gave hr the cloths nd othr thngs which found on body..she lukd at those wid out blink..cloths,ring,moneybag..she opend it wid shaky hand..thr z her photo..evrythng fallen dwn frm hr hand..she just sat thr..feeling numb..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76
r

hell noo...you killed maan...

omg..now what will geet do..

no no maan ko wapas lao...

please please dont do this
Edited by suhaaana - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77
omgf no my maanu cant die😲😭
oye how dre u kill my maanu
mujhe maanu vapis chahiye 😭😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
#78
Thnx who lykd...part 6 till nw...hre z part 7...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#79
oh no maan dead

please dont do this

feeling terrible for geet

please do some miracle

thanks for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#80
part 6 n 7
awesome.
maan died!!!!!!!!! no plzz

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