Maaneet--Mere Ajnabee..PART 14 on PAGE 27&IMP NOTE PG28

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Nasioush

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

...UMMM...ME NOT FEELING HAPPPY...THANX WHO GAVE LYKs ND COMMENTs...

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tia

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

maanu gone 4 his business trip
n geet feeling uneasy babaji
geet remebering her past
their first meet
waiting to know wt she planned
lvd it

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angelic_cute

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

HAPPY NEW YEAR

hoping nothing will happen to maan

n geet goes back to days when maan came to see her

thanks for pm

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suhaaana

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Super cool update plz plz aage likho na

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snehapriya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

Flashback was unexpected & interesting.
Hope nothing happens to maaneet.

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Nasioush

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

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Maaneet reachd on terrece..itz full moon night..geet made herself ready for her mission of fireing hm..thn trned to hm..tld hm polietly to sit..maan lukd at her..she z luking more preety in moonlight..he never believe in love at first sight thng..bt nw thz z happening to hm..he saw geet z sitting luking dwn..the silence felt so awkard to maan..he tried to talk..bt geet brk the silence..
GEET--Dekhiye main apko pehle mere vare me sab kch blna chati hu..(she lukd at hm..)main janti hu mami mami ne ye kaha ki main kitni shant hu..par aisa kch v nehi..main itni gussewali hu ki koi mere samne tik nehi sakta..he shockd..well he didnt expect it..
MAAN--Par tm to..
GEET--Haww..apke himmat kaise hui mujhe tm blne ki..she smild to her own drama..he coughd..
MAAN--Sry..par ap lagti to nehi..
GEET--are..lagne pe kya hai..bata hai apke pehle jo aya tha uspe main ne pani fake mari..dekhiye ap yahase jayie nehi to..(she stood up)..kya hua..apko meri batope yakeen nehi hua?..to suniye..maine kya kya kia..ek to mere gusse ko undekha kr hat pakad ne ki kaushish ki thi..use to aise piti stick se ki bach k vage..maan z luking at her widout blinking..She z still talking cntinuously..he knw, everythng she said nd saying are lie..coz he noticed a tension for telling lie on her face although she want to make it up..he felt so irritated..here he liked hr nd she z showing drama..he stood up..went to her..hlding hr hand ..shut her mouth wid a Action kiss!!!.her eyes poppd out..she never fell into thz situation..she bgn to wriggle..bt no use..he kissd her wid passion.. tasting evry bit of hr lips..he left her lips aftr sme tym..geet bcm fully dumbstuck..
MAAN--oops..main ne to tmhe kiss krdia..ab kya karogi..mera khun?..she z nt in position to talk..
GEET--mujhe chodiye..
MAAN--uhuuu..ek bat bolo geet itne jhoot kyt kaha tmne..she lukd at hm surpizingly..how did he knw..
GEET--ap..apko kisne kaha.. main..jhoot..(he lukd at hr sternly..) Woh woh..mujhe nehi krni shadi..

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Nasioush

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Posted: 12 years ago

#47

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MAAN--uhuu..dulhan to tm meri hi banogi..he hld hr mre cls..her breath get choked..
GEET--ap ap..
MAAN--ap ap kya..vaise geet tmne baki ladkeko aise nautanki dekha k vaga dia haina..acha kia..she knotted brow..still wrigling..
GEET --ab lag rahi hai woh log apse ache the..
MAAN--geet usse mera kya ..par itna mujhe pata hai..unlogose tmhare jodi nehi ban sakti thi..kyuki tm maan sing khurana k kismat me likh k ayi ho..she lukd at hm..
GEET--ap mere hat chodiye,duk rahe hai..he left hr hand..
MAAN--sry main woh nehi krta..tm itni ulti sidhi bl rahithi to..par jitna tm blti ho..usse kahi jiada tmhare chehera blte hai.. aur..baki cmpliment shadi ki bad dunga..geet bcm awe..he trnd to go..
GEET-- par ap kaise soche main ha karungi..
MAAN--main janti hu tm na nehi karogi..he went..
GEET--ye kaisa admi hai.. ye to mujhse v bade pagal hai..
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Anya came to rum with choc cake..saw geets smiling shy face..she coughd..geet startld..
ANYA--di kya soch k itne lal horahi ho..
GEET-anya tu v na..she shyd mre..anya smiled..
ANYA--ok nehi puchti..ap ye khaiye..main thodi kitchen jati hu..geet nodded..she went..she agn bgn to think abt maan ..
GEET--sachme pagal hai woh.. par pata hi nehi chala..kab iss pagal se pyar kr beithi..she smiled..thn carresed hr belly..baby z moving..kicking..
GEET--baby chinta mat krna..apke papa apk ane se pehle ajayenge..agn felt hz kick..she smild..
At night..anya came to sleep in geets rum as she dont want to keep her alone..sur also came..
SUR-- mujhe v rehna hai badima k pass..umm..
ANYA--sur jid nehi krte..
GEET--rehena dena ..aja shona badima k pass..sur smild.. huggd hr..lied dwn by hr side..anya too lied dwn..tld geet to wake hr up if she need..bth sleep dwn soon..bt geet z awake..no phn frm maan.. she sighd..jst thn her phn rang..itz hm ..she recievd it
GEET--to yad aye apko hamari..(bt no sound frm othr side..she knotted hr brow..) maan..maan?..she felt so tensed..