Maaneet--Mere Ajnabee..PART 14 on PAGE 27&IMP NOTE PG28 - Page 7

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Posted: 12 years ago
#61
maan ke prank ne toh jaan hi nikal di
hope ab phir se koi prank na ho
loved the flashback wah maan babu pheli meet main hi kiss

waiting for next part
n thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#62
Awesme update.srry main pahle 3 parts pe comment.plz pm me frm next time.I dnt want to miss this stry.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#63
part 5
nice part...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART 6
Nxt day morning.. geet cm to her rum aftr breakfast.. ..feeling little pain in her stomach.. frst she thought itz nothng..bt gradually pain got stronger..she bite hr lips..hlding hr belly..she screamd in pain..
GEET--ANYAAA..DADIMAA...she bgn to sweat wid pain..anya nd dadi cm running hearing hr scream ..
ANYA --Di..kya hua..geet just crying wid pain..
DADI--anya jaldi driver ko car bahar krneko boliye bete..tym nehi hai..geet,brave rakho beta..anya immidietly told driver..she z bgn to feel so helpless..as no male person of family z here..dadi nd anya helpd geet to get in car..anya tuk sit by her..dadi couldnt go as sur ll cm frm school..
DADI--beta ap phn krna..anya nodded..driver started the car..
geets breathe raisd wid pain..tears flowing dwn..anya hld hr hand..
ANYA-- bas di abhi pauch jayenge..
GEET--Anya..tere..veerji ko phn kr..ane k liye bl..bt anya already tried..still no respnse..thn she calld mihika tld hr to cm in hosp..
GEET--anya..plzz..maan ko bula..
ANYA--di veerji ajenge..ap samvaliye..
Aftr 15 min they reachd hosp..doctor checkd her immidietly..tuk her in delivery rum.. anya just sit thr on chair..hlding hr head..she agn calld maan..no use.. she calld dev..he z nt recieving phn..
ANYA--ho kya raha hai ye..just thn mihika nd nishan cm thr..
MIHIKA--anya geet kaha hai..
ANYA--Di ko andar legaye..mihika di mujhe bht ghavrahat horahi hai.. mihika sit by her side..Nishan went to do hospitals formalities..
MIHIKA --maan ko phn ki?..anya tld her evrythng..hearing all mihika got tensd ..
MIHIKA--maan to kabhi phn off nehi rakhta..aur dev kal rat nikal gayi ..ab tak nehi aya..nishan cm thr already..doctor cm out from rum..
DOC--congratulation,beta hua hai..patient ko cabin pe shift krneki bad mil lijiye..he went..smild formd on evry1s face..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#65
CONTINUED
ANYA--mihika Di..ap buaji bangayi ho..jiju ap fufaji..mihika nd nishan smild..
MIHIKA--ha..baby ki chotima..bth laughd..
NISHAN-- tm log jawo mil lo geet se..main janake ata hu sabko..aur..
ANYA- -jiju veerji ko frse phn kr k dekhna.. shayed ab phn on hai..
NISHAN --are kaise on nehi karega..phn to krne do..anya mihika smild..went to geet..
IN geets cabin..she holding the little bundle of joy in hr arms..she z luking at hm widout blinking..she kissd hs nose..hs tiny leg..hs tiny hand..smild wid happiness,content.. mihika,anya came..smild..geet saw them..smild..mihika tuk baby..
MIHIKA--ale..iski hath aur lips to bilkul maan pe gaya hai..she kissd the baby..anya tuk hm..
ANYA--par ankhen di pe..shona..welcome..geet smild..nishan cm thr..carresd babys head..
NISHAN--woh ghr me bata dia..dadi ne kaha buaji v agayi.nd dev se bat hua..woh bas pauch raha hai..
GEET--jiju..maan se bat hui.. nishan sighd..geet bcm little sad..whr z he..why hz phn z off?..
MIHIKA--are geet..mere 2 bhai k ek ka v akal nehi hai..aur maan to pura ka pura pagal hai..ab ane k bad kch bolunga to dekhna..bolega..dekh main tujhse 2 min ka bada hu,respect se bat kr..evry1 laughd..
NISHAN --vaise ye chote janab ka nam thk ki kya..
GEET--ha..GRIHITH.. kyuki isse hamne paya hai..
MIHIKA-- bht pyara hai..vaise mere baby ka nam thk kr dena tmlog ..anya nd geet lukd at surprisingly.. mihika nd nishan shily smild..
ANYA--Sachchi?..fr usdin kyu nehi kaha..
MIHIKA--ye news pane k bad main ne decide kr lithi..ki jis din geet ka baby hoga usdin hi bataungi..
GEET--di sachme aj to khushiya jaise baras rahi hai..all smild..just thn dev cm..all surprized luking at hm..he z luking devasted..
ANYA--dev..ap aise kyu lag reho. rat var soye nehi..he shakd head to no..caressd babys head..smild..bt tension on hz face nt going..nd evry1 noticed tht..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#66
Guyzz..thanx who lykd and cmnt...bt i m nt feeling cntent by my writing..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome updates...just read all...i hope maan is all well...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: shabnam22


Hey dont feel sad...you are doing good...i just read dis story and i liked it...keep it up...

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Posted: 12 years ago
#69
dear please u r wrting just awsome conceptsss

please dnt be sad
love the update
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Posted: 12 years ago
#70
geret delivered baby boy
all happy
bt where is my maanu
hope he is finer
no hope he should b fine
waiting 4 more


n dear me lv ur ff n dare u think abt discontinue any of ur work got that😳

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