Dil ka rishta...Part 3/ pg 71

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sobia4maaneet

@sobia4maaneet

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

Okie read it now n I am actually flat over the title
Good job meri darling sana mosi ...what a concept
N what narration ...lovely piece of writing ..
Kahab thi itne time se ...n ... Khud kyun post nahi kya pagalu mosi it soo fav. But chaddo meri 1st SS par mene bhi 1month ke baad kuch bataya tha Papa ko
Chalo good ab aap bhi hum bechare writers ka dard samajhne lagoge ...
All the v.best mosi
Do well ...jaldi update karna me waiting

N yup Banner buhat acha hai ...I LOVE IT
N lines thr ...were actually V.much defining the SS

But still the line ..
With the longing wali ...

Me wondering if its going to be a saddy type of an ss .. Hope nt but still I kind of having a liking 2wards sad stories ...
But then u better update frequently ...MERE PAPA SE INSPIRE MAT HONA

LUV YA
Sobia ..

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sobia4maaneet

@sobia4maaneet

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

N moni mosi acha huya aapne post kiya ...luv ya too
Muuaahhh

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sobia4maaneet

@sobia4maaneet

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#63

But mujhe bola bhi nahi ...uhh gandi Mosi..s meri
But fir bhi thank u meri list mien ek aur SS add karne ke liye ..
LUV YA BOTH

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preeti.1

@preeti.1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#64

sana waiting for this ss dear...cant believe u also become a writer sweety😳...dher saara congrats👍🏼

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Brown-Eyes

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Posted: 12 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: sobia4maaneet
Okie read it now n I am actually flat over the title
Good job meri darling sana mosi ...what a concept
N what narration ...lovely piece of writing ..
Kahab thi itne time se ...n ... Khud kyun post nahi kya pagalu mosi it soo fav. But chaddo meri 1st SS par mene bhi 1month ke baad kuch bataya tha Papa ko
Chalo good ab aap bhi hum bechare writers ka dard samajhne lagoge ...
All the v.best mosi
Do well ...jaldi update karna me waiting

N yup Banner buhat acha hai ...I LOVE IT
N lines thr ...were actually V.much defining the SS

But still the line ..
With the longing wali ...

Me wondering if its going to be a saddy type of an ss .. Hope nt but still I kind of having a liking 2wards sad stories ...
But then u better update frequently ...MERE PAPA SE INSPIRE MAT HONA

LUV YA
Sobia ..

aweee sobi bhanje 😃
thank you for the lovely comment 😳
sachi wala acha laga ss ?
n haan all credit goes to my sis MONI DI 😃 unhone hi mujhe likhe ko bola n bohot matlab bohot sari help ki :*

HAAN AAPKE PAPA N MERE JIJU SE INSPIRE NI HoUNGI 😉
n aapke liye friday se pehle update kar dungi :*

love u sooo sooo much ❤️

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

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Posted: 12 years ago

#66

prologue
awesome dear...
cont soon and pm me...
do post the link int his thread
FF Daily Updates 4

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Brown-Eyes

@Brown-Eyes

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Posted: 12 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: preeti.1
sana waiting for this ss dear...cant believe u also become a writer sweety😳...dher saara congrats👍🏼

sooo much preeti di

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Brown-Eyes

@Brown-Eyes

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Posted: 12 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: spvd
prologue
awesome dear...
cont soon and pm me...
do post the link int his thread
FF Daily Updates 4

n will surely pm u

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Eza_analyst

@Eza_analyst

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#69

Dil ka rishta...

This ss is specially dedicated to our family...🤗...

and hmari mumma (deepali) for turning an IF rockerz😳

and more specially to eza dii(for passing her 5th sem) and dazzaling divz dii (for getting admission in her dream uni) from SANA(brown-eyes)...

CONGRATS to three of you👍🏼

yeh kyaa ho gaya oyeee
matlab apni sana bhi writer

haayee mera soni beta mereko and apni Mumma ko dedicate kiyaa with padosi ke bache ke papa ke saath ...
haayela yeh toh apni family FF huiii

the idea and updates will be totally by her...thoda sa credit mera b hoga...

so if u love the updates, whole credit goes to sana...

and if u don't(jo thoda mushkil hai...😳)to bhi sana ko pakdana😉...

wo to baby likhne ke baad thoda darr gayi thi,to maine post kar dii😆

bas itna hi role hai mera...😛 otherwise m busy in exams😆

and its our contribution to keep the forum alive as maaneet will be always there...they are FOREVER😳

Kya hoga jab pehli nazar me kisi se pyaar ho jaye...

aur usse hamara dil ka rishta jud jaaye...

kya hoga jab dil ke rishte ko ghar waloon ki manzoori na mile..

us haalat me kya dil ka rishta kamzoor ho jayega...

ya phir wo rishta in hadon ko paar kar dega...

Okhh firstly a bada wala for the very first FF of urs ...
must say heart touching lines and I wanna say SOMEBODY REALLY WAITING FOR UR STORY TO UNFOLD ACTUALLY MUCH MORE EXCITED THAN ME when I told him about the concept and actually asked me to keep updated wd ds update of urs okhh ab zyada sar pe naa chado sana betaa zameen pe aao as IM ANGRY WD U

waise mujeh bataao kyaa hogha jab sach me pyaar ho jaye ...
Itna pyaar itna pyaar
ke pyara lagne laghey woh yaar
doori ki chaht na rahe paas
aur phir bass woh ho..
bass woh ho ...
aur bass rahe hamesh usska saath..
koi parwaah nahi ke paas ho woh hamesh mere ...
ke dil me jab hai woh toh aankho me ghar uskaa hi haiii...
wh chahta hai mujhe be intehaa
iss baat kaa hai ehsaas
kisi ki marzi mile naa mile me hu uski
aur uski mohabbat hai mere paas

bass teri lines padh kar kucch ines mere mind me bhi aagayi

Love at first sight
Is a fit made right
God, making it strong
Yes, the two belong!

There is so much to say
As two hearts cleave
And at the end of the day
Neither wants to leave

With this longing it is clear
True love is meant to stay
Each memory more dear
Completes another day

Oweome poem loved it...
going very well with prologue ...

Dil se dil ka rishta juda hai tera mera...
kabhi na chodenge ye saath..
chahe aa jaye mushkile hazaar😳

haaye must say tere dil ke rishtey ne mere dil se sach me rishtaa jod liyaa hehehe

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Brown-Eyes

@Brown-Eyes

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Posted: 12 years ago

#70

Originally posted by: moni6262
koi hai😒

mai hu

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