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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: reachsky2011

Good 😃

pls pls jaldi jaldi

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Dhundlae aks

Part 212
Maan stood mum when Yash dragged him out of the Hawali after pleading sorry to every one. Maan was already all time low with his guilt from earlier conversation with Geet in her room & now again one of his silly zid has led to lose him everything he ever desired. It was all so easy & simple for him until now. He got everything in his life without much fight. Though he made it a fight. He was a topper with his hard work still he wanted to fight his way out in outer IT world. He had his love right with him all the while but he did every thing to hurt her, ruin it, push her away even though they were bond by the most strongest relation of love & marriage. Still he did nothing to keep it safe.
He sadly looked back only to feel himself slipping away when her eyes pierced his. Barely slits now as they peered down into his soul pleading. He could feel his existence convulse as she stared at him with her painfully broken hazels. He felt his already sinking heart under the immense weight of her grief. His steps froze as Yash continued to drag him out the Hawali's huge doors that led to the main hall. He couldn't tear his eyes away from her plead.
He stood their not responding to the tug on his arm, just like that forgetting everything that he had ever known. He probably heard a frustrating groan from his dad and a disappointedly turning away, holding that pallu against her lips to muffle her cry. The pale painful expression on her face was the last thing he ever wanted to see & in that moment he just snapped his hand off his dads hard grip firmly yet respectfully.
Yash opened his mouth to say something was instantly silenced by Maans raised hand as he spoke. Nahi hain Geet bilkul bhi prachi jaisen.
Geets leg froze at the steps.
Rano & other family members looked at Maan keenly. Probably Yash wanted to kill him already.
Suit nahi pehen thi,
nahi lethi pallu sar pe,
gussen tho isken nak pe rahta hain
Geet glared at him in disbelieve,
ziddi tho itni hain ki iska zid ke samne kisi ki nahi chalthi
pata nahi aapne aap ko kya samjthi hain, mano puri duniya isken kadmo main ho

he walked slowly & sat on his knees in front of Rano. Phir bhi na isen jane, na ise phechane mujhe itna bechan karti hian.
Uski low line jeans ho yah uski cricket ki deewangi.
Everyone smiled at Geet. She snorted her nose with tears pouring her eyes.
Rano looked at him at awe.
Mujhe tho iski us dhundlae se aks se ne bhi nahi choda aunty.
Shayad issliyen kyun ki.. yeh wo sab itni aasni se karti hain jo main shayad sirf chata ra jatha hoon.. chahen wo duniya ko apni jooten ke nok main rahkna ho, yah fir dad ki dil main jagah banana.
He took rano's hand in his pulled her closer
Geet blushed & stood behind thai ji as Maan looked at her & then at rano
meri pasand tho apki wo aks hain jo aapne se jayada apno ki khusi chathi hain
apno ke khushi ke samne aur kuch nahi soch thi
he rested his head on the back of Rano's hand, jo khusi khusi apne mama-papa ki har baat manjayegi
aur main zid karon tho meren baat bhi nahi taal gi
every body was stunned with the truth, lekin ek pal bhi khus nahi rahegi iss ehsaas se ki uski mama ko lagtha hain uska puchki Geet gasped & hid her cherry red face behind thai ji
Maan corrected himself uska Maan is not right for her.
Rano disbelievingly asked him caressing his head puttur u really love Geet? She looked stunned at her husband & then at Maan Kab se?
Every one looked at him curiously
mujhe nahi pata aunty,
every one was little taken a back with his response
shayad humesa se
every shied in relief & yash smiled at his son finally doing something sensible
main tho yah bhi jantha tha ki yeh Geet hain
everyone looked at Geet .. she made a innocent face like she didn't know wat is talking abt.
Haan mujhe lagtha tha ki suit phen ke, simple simple dihkne wali ladki hi meri pasand hain aur sab ki bhi
& she just proved me wrong
proved my thought as well as my own understanding of my feelings wrong
issen mujhe se jayda mujhe pe yekin hian, she believes in me more than even I believe in myself.
Isken issen yekin mujhe majbor kar diya ki main apni sari haden par kardon
he looked more than confidently into Rano's eyes
main tho yeh bhi nahi pata main Geet se kitna pyar karta hoon
mera pas labz hi nahi hain
Rano smiled cupping his face labz bhi kam padjayengen.. tumhari aanken kafi hain.
He smiled cutely.. with naughtiness taking over as he got the desired approval from all
waisen aunty aap ko pata hain prachi tho aaj kal suti nahi phen thi.. he pouted ever so cutely for which Geet made a big O face & Rano cutely patted his cheek.. chal badmash now knowing how damad had been causal with his relations until now.
Precap
Yash's condition for marriage😆
- PART 211 PREV NEXT LINK THREAD 36 -
thanks for the lovely comments & likes
muchkins r little down with cold & cough
improved since last night, thanks for ur love & wishes
better leave me vada vada comment & likes
love
muskan & muchkins
Edited by muskanp - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi,

Meee Firrrssst

After long time, me first

Vow Maan, how beautifully described of him being in love with Geet though she is diif than what type of girl he would prefer to have as his better half

beautifully wriiten in one part (Roothna n Mannana)

ab maans dads ka kya condition hai,

something related to Geet i suppose

ha ha ha , Bechara Maan

nice part, very senti


Edited by mishtib - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago


di hope cutie pies are fine now..
Edited by --aarthi-- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update di :)
Edited by aparnapoduri - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wah mazaa aa gaya
well Maan confessed before all
loved it
waiting for next damakedaar update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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THUD!!!!

OMG...OMG...OMG!!! Totally Unexpected Di


ufff Finally Puckhi spoke ...hyeee me Faint in Puckhi's arms ..LOl

Loved Maans confession infant of all...Beautiful dialogs

hahha...that last pout ws so cute...hyeee Dreamy

can't wait for next update...continue super soon

Thank u for Update..n luv for muchkins :)




Edited by Ru_21 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Haiyee!!!
😳
Mera buddhu right time pe bola!
So sweet update Muskan...
Love this story so much!
Thanks for updating!
Love to bacha party!
You also be careful with this cold weather and sick babies, take care.🤗
Edited by had2bu - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Jhatke pe jhatka..going crazy..madly loving it...was so down with the last part thinking that maybe maneet might get separated but alas they aren't..so so very happy

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