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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: simrancuty

waooo di😛

a new story
hayee abhi mne purani nhi read ki..
really luv the explanation u did.. each n evry single line tht u describe is jst fab..
👏👏👏
kamina kutta brij.. isme bhi villan hi hai😡😡
maan got married.
bt di he said geet.. usse geet ka name kaise pta????

n maan was toh happy with marraige 4 daadi dn suddenly vo car vaala scene???
explain haan.
abhi read 1st prt.
2nd read kr k btaugi.
😉😉


Thanks Sim 😃
bt di he said geet.. usse geet ka name kaise pta????
Qki geet ne bataya tha apna naam when he first saw her and asked her name


n maan was toh happy with marraige 4 daadi dn suddenly vo car vaala scene???
Haa he was guessing dadi will be happy with marriage.. but Maan had to explain her na.. he can't go infront of dadi and say this is Geet and we had Kidnapped Marriage.. so Maan is worrying how to introduce geet in Mansion
Edited by MonaSWrites - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice part. ufff read it for 2more tyms
okayyzzz not dat i.dint understand fr first tym
but i loved the concept soo much so now comes the original comment 😉
poor maaneet soo uncomfy wid each other :(
maan wanna talk but geet is hell scared about him n its not her fault.. the situation she stuck is lyk dat 🤢
hope maan usse thek se samjhaye dat he wanna give a chance to this relation.and his concern for daadi..
[wid out scaring the poor soul]
now wen he asked if she is hungry
she said "JI" Right???
abhi vo ghadi se bahar aane k liye mane kare tho maan aese kese chodke jaa skta hy 😡
he should ask her wats bothering her right?? 😕
and the precap!!!!
Omg usse maan ka naam b nhi pata...
ummm can we expect a hug plzzz *puppy face*
not like passionate one may be hug wid fear 😉
like geet feels maan left her
or maan thinks she is lost sumwer
hug frm anyone of dem i dont mind it 😉😳
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Posted: 12 years ago



Maan wants to give chance to this marriage and Geet is scared that he may leave her...

her upbringing gave her so inferiority complex...

awesome update...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: MonaSWrites


Thanks Sim 😃
bt di he said geet.. usse geet ka name kaise pta????
Qki geet ne bataya tha apna naam when he first saw her and asked her name


n maan was toh happy with marraige 4 daadi dn suddenly vo car vaala scene???
Haa he was guessing dadi will be happy with marriage.. but Maan had to explain her na.. he can't go infront of dadi and say this is Geet and we had Kidnapped Marriage.. so Maan is worrying how to introduce geet in Mansion


okkk😛😛
unki intro kb hui thi???
avhlo bta dia oga name.😆😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: simrancuty


okkk😛😛
unki intro kb hui thi???
avhlo bta dia oga name.😆😆


intro hui thi na when maan had got consious and then had dev call and then he saw geet .. in guesthouse
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ramyayuppy

nice part. ufff read it for 2more tyms
okayyzzz not dat i.dint understand fr first tym
but i loved the concept soo much so now comes the original comment 😉
poor maaneet soo uncomfy wid each other :(
maan wanna talk but geet is hell scared about him n its not her fault.. the situation she stuck is lyk dat 🤢
hope maan usse thek se samjhaye dat he wanna give a chance to this relation.and his concern for daadi..
[wid out scaring the poor soul]
now wen he asked if she is hungry
she said "JI" Right???
abhi vo ghadi se bahar aane k liye mane kare tho maan aese kese chodke jaa skta hy 😡
he should ask her wats bothering her right?? 😕
and the precap!!!!
Omg usse maan ka naam b nhi pata...
ummm can we expect a hug plzzz *puppy face*
not like passionate one may be hug wid fear 😉
like geet feels maan left her
or maan thinks she is lost sumwer
hug frm anyone of dem i dont mind it 😉😳


lolzzz poor souls dont even know each othetr.. how can they hug 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago


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Posted: 12 years ago



Part 3


"will you be okay here, alone?'' Maan asked, not deciding what to do. He really wanted some time to think about all happenings. His mind would blast otherwise, he was feeling. Finding she will not come, he nodded, went to nearby Dhaba to have something for him and her, leaving her alone, saying he will be back, very soon.

##

Geet was waiting for him. It became minutes to hour when he did not come yet. She was being impatient. One side, the biggest unusual event of life and little less, her heavy attire, were giving her so much pain. It was increasing with each passing time that sitting alone and statue-like there, was going impossible for her to bear more. Her throat was drying as well. She peeped out, from window. He was no where. "where is he?'' she self- asked. She let her eyes roam all around but, could not locate Maan. She decided to find herself.



She came out, covered her face with little veil, as her learned tradition. She looked, a family like group were sitting and chatting at some far. She stepped to them, stopped before and called "Suniye bhai sahab'''


Male of that family turned to her along with two ladies. They amazed to see a new bride there, alone, stood like this. "Ji kahiye bahanji'' man replied.


"wo aapne unko dekha hai kya?'' Geet asked, with feeble voice, little shying little scared.


"Kon bahanji'' man asked.


"Wo... '' Geet became more nervous. She could not remember Maan name. Seemed, she had heard but could not remembered. She started little sweating in nervousness.


"Wo.. I dont know his..'' She was going to speak when


"humaare yaha larkiya apne pati ka naam nahi leti '' lady chuckled saying.


Geet didn't know what to feel, what to do. It all was new and total unknown for her. Her shyness on husband' word, making her shiver yet, it was unusually strange feeling for her. It was scaring her heart and in consequence, it started pacing fast. They felt her nervousness, asked further.


"By the way how he does he look like ?''


Now she went more hesitate. To think about a man, whom she had met just few hours before, was not in her moral book. Yet she tried to think. His height "Ji mujhse itne lambe honge'' She showed her hand above head to show his height. Still she could not guess his proper height.


"Beta yaha toh har aadmi tumse lamba hai . Thik se batao'' Lady came to her, to make her relax. Geet looked her from under of her veil. "Ji wo .. '' after tried hundreds time she was not able to guess his features. Only one thing she could remember and that, was his big, black and dark eyes, which was impossible for her to explain to others. She could say he was handsome but, she felt butterflies in stomach to voice it out and so, she went quite.


Looking her flushed lady spoke " nayi shaadi hui hai , isiliye sharma rahi ho. But beta we can't help you until you will not tell us about him''


Geet nodded, prayed her Babaji to help her. And seemed, her Babaji was sitting over there, watching only her and sent Maan, in no time.


"Geet, what are you doing here?''


Geet jumped with his sudden rough voice. She turned back, her veil slipped down from head, exposing her beautiful face to him which was red, due to fear or may say, with blush. It was difficult to define her condition. She found a strange peace finding him back. Her lips gasped, signed, exhaled jammed breaths out. Maan looked her, read her expressions which was changing every second, tensed to calm, red to pink. "Is it blush?'' He thought.


Their trance broke with giggles of people around. "Kitni soni jori hai'' lady claimed which brought both, back in sense. "chalo'' Maan looked all then her and turned to leave while Geet, followed him quietly, scared with her own feels.


##


Maan wanted to talk her, eagerly. He had to know about her and let her know, about him. He had very less time to think all about as they were to reach Delhi very soon. And the thought of Dadi reaction, making him worried. For that, he had to start their convo.


"Geet, what was you doing there?'' He asked. His voice was straight which was scaring her little.


"Nahi wo.. I was looking for you'' She replied.


He felt nice. "Was she missing me? But it can't be happen. Why would she miss me? But she said right now Maan!'' he was self talking when Geet asked


"Aap kaha gaye thy?'' she didnt know why, she wanted to know. Was it because she wanted to be confirm he was not thinking to leave her. "But he came back Geet!'' she pacified her heart.


"Wo I had a call but network was very low there. Toh thora dur nikal gaya'' She nodded.


Maan- Geet actually we need to talk. I think we should know about each-other.


Geet (st)- do he really want to accept me, this marriage?


Maan- So that when my family matlab my dadi asks you something, you could face her.


Geet (sf)- is he really taking me to meet his family ? Is he really not going to leave me? This marriage. Per ase kase koi iis tarah ki shaadi ko apna sakta hai. No, I must be thinking wrong.


Maan- Geet!! are you listening me.. geet!! '' he patted her shoulder, not seeing her to response and looking him without blink. She startled. "haan?''


"did you hear what I said?''


she nodded no and looked down.


"Geet I was saying that you should know about me. I have very small family. Me, my small brother Dev and my Dadi ma. She is very nice. But she may ask you about me and this marriage and so you should remember everything what I'm saying. Samjhi!''


She nodded. He asked her about her life and she told. There time passed very fast and car stopped on Mansion gate.



Precap : "Now where will she stay?'' Maan got worried



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Edited by MonaSWrites - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
so i am no one 😛nice update poor geet dont know husband name ,please make them understand each other both should accept there marriage with hart and soal
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome,amazing part
loved it
geet didn't know maan's name and it's cause problem
Thank GOD maan came back
maaneet need to communicate with each other, talky with each other but the situation
continue soon
Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 12 years ago

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