maneet with difference(poem)new poem pg 134 4/5/13 - Page 36

Originally posted by: LILY111144

hey dear u write super .poem cmpletly depicts the emotions of chrectrs.deir pain ,sorow,restlessness,insecurties evrythig👏

happy new year 4 u nd ur family😊

Originally posted by: sona-rai

POEM N0 7.

god nishu u put whole FF in ur 1 poem.

amazingly suitable for maaneet's situation.

i loved maan's these words a lot,

"tu mere dur jaane se na darr

bas apne pyaar par yaki kar

ek tere liye hi to mai ,

har riti tiwaaz se raha hu mukar"

and u make me cry with ur these lines from geet to maan,

and my personal favourite arebas tu ye meri aakhiri baat maan le

phir jeeuga har pal tere liye

yeh bhi tu jaan le

"ye sab jaanti hu mai

teri har baat manti hu mai

par phir bhi dil baar baar de rah hai duhaai

na jaa dur yu mujhse , yeh kah raha hai

waqt karega is baar hum se bewafaai

is liye phir se de rahi hu

mai tujhe mere pyaar ki duhaai

saath le chal mujhe

ek teri hu mai

baaki sab se hui hu paraay"

LOVED IT ALOT nishu muahhh🤗

Originally posted by: LILY111144

mera coment rd nehi kia

Originally posted by: ronojoy_ria

hi

the poem is really good'

plz cont with more and pm me

Originally posted by: Susegad

Poem for Innocent LoveThe pain of seperation from a loved one for any amount of time is heartbreaking and you have written it so beautifully.

The insecurity that one feels, the doubts that creep in the restlessness that one feels. The vast void of emptiness you see lying before you. The helplessness at your inability to change the situation and the desperation that it causes. Sab kuch bayan kiya hai tumne iss kavita mein.

Painfully beautiful.😊

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

@Neha 5058 :thanksss dear

for your comment

and me ear catch karke

sorry,sorry

sorry

sorry

sorry

dear,i knew

i have to write poem for you

but after reading that update

i can't able to stop myself