maneet with difference(poem)new poem pg 134 4/5/13 - Page 35

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

poem :7


its for INNOCENT LOVE by tellyme
its about their present situation


mai patter dil to nahi
jaisa kah rahe hai sabhi
aur na karuga tujh se kabhi bewafaai
jaanta hu ,hai na tujhe is baat par yaki
na ho tu
apni maasumiyat se parrayi
is liye seh luga mai haas kar ye zudaai


nahi chaahiye
haan nahi chaahiye mujhe ye zudaai
mai tayaar hu ,ek tere liye
hone ko baki sab se paraayi
mai is duniya mai
bas teri hone ke liye hu aayi
sang le chal mujhe
kyoki nahi sah paayugi mai ye zudaai


sun meri zindagi
tu aise baat na kar
kyoki nahi ho paauga , mai apne faisle se mukar
aur sun...
tu mujh se kabhi baat na karna
mere waqt se pahle aane ki aas na rakhna
mai waqt se pahle nahi aauga , isliye meri raha na takna

kya kafi nahi thi ,milo ki zudaai
jo tumne mujhe baat na karne ki sazaa bhi hai sunaai

ek tu apna saath dede mujhe
saath tere chal saku,apna haath dede mujhe
mai de rahi hu tujhe apne pyaar ki duhaai
kyoki darr hai mujhe
waqt karega hum se bewafai


tu mere dur jaane se na darr
bas apne pyaar par yaki kar
ek tere liye hi to mai ,
har riti tiwaaz se raha hu mukar

mujhe darr duniya ka nahi
bas tere pass rah kar bhi rahu tujhse dur
is baat ka yaki , ab mujhe khud par nahi
bas tu ye meri aakhiri baat maan le
phir jeeuga har pal tere liye
yeh bhi tu jaan le


ye sab jaanti hu mai
teri har baat manti hu mai
par phir bhi dil baar baar de rah hai duhaai
na jaa dur yu mujhse , yeh kah raha hai
waqt karega is baar hum se bewafaai
is liye phir se de rahi hu
mai tujhe mere pyaar ki duhaai
saath le chal mujhe
ek teri hu mai
baaki sab se hui hu paraayi




nishu di, , loved it completely, , every word depicts their emotions, the inner pain and turmoil, what they are feeling right now for this separation... so intensity there...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Poem for Innocent LoveThe pain of seperation from a loved one for any amount of time is heartbreaking and you have written it so beautifully.
The insecurity that one feels, the doubts that creep in the restlessness that one feels. The vast void of emptiness you see lying before you. The helplessness at your inability to change the situation and the desperation that it causes. Sab kuch bayan kiya hai tumne iss kavita mein.
Painfully beautiful.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey neha hw r u ?wen r u updtng PLL?
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: BULBUL.A


AND I FEEL U R TOO GOOD

I CAN NEVER BE ABLE TO WRITE LIKE U

😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: lovesia

happy new year

nd about poem
i love it like always


thaxxx

please increase the line dear for comment😉😆😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey dear u write super .poem cmpletly depicts the emotions of chrectrs.deir pain ,sorow,restlessness,insecurties evrythig👏
happy new year 4 u nd ur family😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Tanya-K...

That was lovely... Though I haven't read the ff the present situation is clear from your poem... Loved it.. Honestly u could become a poet by profession I'm sure u'd do very well, the way u explain thru poems is outstanding, each pov, situation is described very well of each ff u've done so far. Brilliant!!!

I liked the pretty little liars one, it had the comedy streak to it which was lighthearted, and The Escort Business, you made me tear... Thank you once again for writing it... Now I know who to turn for poems 😆... Watch out dear I may start stalking you.. 😆

thaxxx dear
for reading all the poems

yes liars one is different😆😆
and my personal favourite😉


Watch out dear I may start stalking you.. 😆 saachi
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: LILY111144

hey neha hw r u ?wen r u updtng PLL?


ooye mera comment kaha hai
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: love2_soma

wonderful poem...

loved it very much...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt one...

continue soon plz...

n

HAPPY NEW YEAR


😃

HAPPY NEW YEAR
same to you dear
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sona-rai

awww my exam went very well yar😃i'm proud of myself😆😆😆.
hope abb job mil jayae😃


even me too proud of you dear😉

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