maneet with difference(poem)new poem pg 134 4/5/13 - Page 102

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

poem : 27

its for Bandhan new ff by tellyme

kyu hota hai aisa ,

koi chu jaata hai dil ko

bas ik pal main ! like my maanu n geet b😆

kyu hoti hai halchal ,

is dil main

jab hoti hai woh mushkil main ! ye dil hai ye dil hai ye dil haii
sab iss dil ki hi toh mushkil haii😳

kuch toh baat hai ,

kuch toh usme khaas hai !

kyu woh hokar hum jaisi ,

phir bhi hum se alag hai ! uff ye dushman zamana n bereham log

kya yeh sach hai ,

par phir kyu yeh dil har pal ,

dekhta hai ussme us chupe hue bachpan ko

jisse ab bhi kahi ,

jindagi jeene ki aas hai !

kahi kuch to aisa hai ,

jo main jaanta nahi !mai btau she is ur soul mate yaar😉

tabhi toh ,

jab sab kahte hai undekha kar usse ,

toh yeh dil maanta nahi !

abhi abhi to milla hu usse

phir kyu lagta hai ,

kuch to mera juda hai usse !

kyu yeh dil chahta hai

sun na usse

aisa kya hai usski hasi main

ke jab woh muskurai to laga

hai bahaar aayi

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

poem 25

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its for slow poison by Mrs. msk

<font size="4"> <font color="#9933cc">sukhe patte(leaves)</font></font>

<font size="4"><font color="#9933cc"> daal se tut kar</font></font>

<font size="4"><font color="#9933cc"> kahi kissi ka toh ghar banaate hai !</font></font>

<font size="4"><font color="#9933cc"> aur mar kar bhi ,</font></font>

<font size="4"><font color="#9933cc"> kissi ke sapno ke ghar main zinda rah jaate hai !</font></font>

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<font size="4"><font color="#9933cc"> kami toh ,un patto main hai</font></font>

<font size="4"><font color="#9933cc"> jo shaakh(stem) par rah kar bhi,</font></font>

<font size="4"><font color="#9933cc"> sukh(dry) jaate hai !</font></font>

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<font size="4"><font color="#9933cc"> pata nahi ,</font></font>

<font size="4"><font color="#9933cc"> unhe kyu zindagi raas nahi aayi !</font></font>

<font size="4"><font color="#9933cc"> par unhone maut bhi toh ,</font></font>

<font size="4"><font color="#9933cc"> gale nahi lagaayi !</font></font>

<font size="4"><font color="#9933cc"> woh jaane kyu ,</font></font>

<font size="4"><font color="#9933cc"> is tarah se khud se hi tut rahe hai ,</font></font>

<font size="4"><font color="#9933cc"> na haasil hoga unhe kuch ,</font></font>

<font size="4"><font color="#9933cc"> na haail kar sake unhe koi ,</font></font>

<font size="4"><font color="#9933cc"> woh to ,uss mod se apna daaman tod rahe hai!</font></font>

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<font size="4"><font color="#9933cc"> maana ke ,</font></font>

<font size="4"><font color="#9933cc"> zinadgi sab ke liye aasaan nahi hoti !</font></font>

<font size="4"><font color="#9933cc"> par mar jaayo khud ke liye aacha hai ,</font></font>

<font size="4"><font color="#9933cc"> usse ke ,</font></font>

<font size="4"><font color="#9933cc"> aap jiyoo kissi ko barbaad karne ke liye !</font></font>

<font size="4"><font color="#9933cc"> kyoki kissi ko barbaad karke toh ,</font></font>

<font size="4"><font color="#9933cc"> zindagi apni bhi aabaad nahi hoti !</font></font>

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<font size="4"><font color="#9933cc"> koi khoj raha tha ,usse ek dushman ko !</font></font>

<font size="4"><font color="#9933cc"> toh koi kar raha tha ,uske aane ka intezaar !</font></font>

<font size="4"><font color="#9933cc"> yeh bhram tha ,un dono ka</font></font>

<font size="4"><font color="#9933cc"> ki milke ek baar ,</font></font>

<font size="4"><font color="#9933cc"> ho jaayega sab gum ka udaar bekaar ,</font></font>

<font size="4"><font color="#9933cc"> par woh naadan ,</font></font>

<font size="4"><font color="#9933cc"> yeh na jaante the ,</font></font>

<font size="4"><font color="#9933cc"> ke badla woh ek rog hai</font></font>

<font size="4"><font color="#9933cc"> jo hai be ilaaj ,</font></font>

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<font size="4"><font color="#9933cc"> is rog ke ghaav bhar jaate ,</font></font>

<font size="4"><font color="#9933cc"> par ,</font></font>

<font size="4"><font color="#9933cc"> nishaan umar bhar ke liye chod jaate hai</font></font>

<font size="4"><font color="#9933cc"> aur hum sahlaate rahe isse ,umar bhar ke liye</font></font>

<font size="4"><font color="#9933cc"> yeh aadat hum se jod jaate hai</font></font>

<font size="4"><font color="#9933cc"> aur</font></font>

<font size="4"><font color="#9933cc"> badla woh rog hai ,</font></font>

<font size="4"><font color="#9933cc"> jo naasor (deadly)ban kar hum me palta hai</font></font>

<font size="4"><font color="#9933cc"> na thik ho sake ga yeh zakham ,</font></font>

<font size="4"><font color="#9933cc"> hame waqt nikal jaane par ,pata chalta hai!</font></font>

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me waiting for your reply

gud aur bad😕

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Originally posted by: sukklover

...😛

4 pming me dear...😃

updates dear...👏

dear...😃

...😛...

u r done really a

tons of to u...dear...😛

lov,❤️

Tama

P.S.: plz donn't copy paste my comments...i only make it 4 my frndz...if anyone do it again as i saw many of my comments r copied i'll report it...u guys plz make comment urself...u can use my componets indevisual...but donn't coppied it whole as my post...😡

P.S.S.: Plz guys also comment on my stuff...i tried to post comment in everyones...but my most of buddies didn't comment...if u not liked tell also...plz guys...😲😕

Note:

guys...me sad...i PM ed almost 500 but comment only...17-18...😕

i said u guys ealier if u don't like plz tell me...but it really hurts a lot...me try to reply each of u...many serials i don't watch but i read ur ff's ...checking out ur updated stuff's...n try to make a sweet comment which u guys liked...but u never check my any stuff...i really busy wid my studies...but also don't want to hurt my frndz...i try to comment ecah of u woh Pmed me...but only few of u ans my Pms...if don't want me to bother u...plz tell me...i never pm u.4 my any update...

but i updated 4 whom woh waited...i knoe just few..but i updated for them surely...but that surely ime said..that me really hurt abut u guys...😭me uncontorled sob.sob..😭

Note: my net is very bad condition that's why me didn't comment this long time..keep PM me.. don't unfriend.. when it'll ok me'll back on regular comment ..plzz bare with me..

Originally posted by: kavya.sravya

your poetry is always superb ! with simple words , you just bring out the feelings of characters ! always wonder , how can you write soo much similar to the character of the ff...in few lines ! and sometimes in very short period ! haven't read some of the ffs...will do that and comeback to say... for sure...how beautiful they are...! what a gift you have in your hands...!!

p.s the ones you wrote for slow poison, bandhan and sati are my recent favourite ones...they are fabulous...

Originally posted by: ronojoy_ria

hi

the poems are awesum

touched my heart

plz cont with more and pm me

Originally posted by: tiakashyap

finally u bach my sweetie lv ya