maneet with difference(poem)new poem pg 134 4/5/13 - Page 101

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Posted: 12 years ago
your poetry is always superb ! with simple words , you just bring out the feelings of characters ! always wonder , how can you write soo much similar to the character of the ff...in few lines ! and sometimes in very short period ! haven't read some of the ffs...will do that and comeback to say... for sure...how beautiful they are...! what a gift you have in your hands...!!
p.s the ones you wrote for slow poison, bandhan and sati are my recent favourite ones...they are fabulous...
Edited by kavya.sravya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely dear poem 27 exactly fit for BANDHAN my geetu
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely poems nishu...👏
I came here quite late and there is alot to catch..😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
haayee itni saari poems
aur woh bhi awesome se amazing se lekar fantastic se bhi upar jaane wali
love all of them
konsi meri favorite hai pata nahi
but ha itna pata hai saari mere favorite ban gayi hai

Edited by lovesia - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

sacchi yaar

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me ready to lead them

tum sab ko jhel ke solid practice ho gayai hai😆

hehehehe sahi baat hai :p
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm n superb poems
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi
the poems are awesum
touched my heart
plz cont with more and pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

poem 26


its for geetsmile
i don't know about story line
but she want something where maan want to tell about his love to geet


chahta hu tumhe
maanta hu tumhe
par
kya kaabil hu tere
yeh jaanan chahta hu tujhse mai btau only maanu is kabil 4 geet 😉

kyoki tu
phool hai us gulaab se bhi haasi
jis chahte hahi sabhi
aur bhavarro ki toh jaan hai woh
usske paas hi ghumana toh ,unhe ek kaam hai woh


par tu yeh baat maan le
main hu manchalo se alag yeh jaan le we know u our dushat danav😆😆😆

gar tu gulaab hai ,toh main suraj ki woh pahli kiran
jisne tera rang nikhar diya n agar maanu ka rang kala pad gya toh hey babji
mera pyaar woh roshni hai , jo har pal tere saath rahgi
dhoop ho ya chaaya
mera pyaar koi saaya nahi, jo andhere main kho jaaye kahi
mera pyaar woh khusbu hai
jo basa hai tujme mujhme
saanso ki tarah saans mai teri saans mili toh mujhe saans aayi
log hasna chod dete hai
par saans lena nahi
thik aise hi
tu shamil hai mujhe mere rooh tak basi
gar tujhe ek pal bhi pyaar na kiya
to jaan lena main us pal saans bhi nahi liya

kyoki
main saan lena pahle chod duga ,
par tujhe pyaar na karu
yah toh gunaah woh hai
jo main mar kar bhi na karu

tu jaan hai meri
pahchan hai meri
gulaab main basi khusbu ki tarah
saans hai meri



hope you like it
me have no idea about story line
but still try
sorry if it make you disappoint
please tell me your view
me waiting


finally u bach my sweetie lv ya

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

POEM 30


ITS FOR Tere Ishq Ko Sajda
ff by tich.1990mg

main tere ishq main
pagal ho jaauga abi b kasar hai kya

kyoki jo ab tak
jaanta nahi tha rab ko
woh ab
maang raha hai uss rab se
tujhe ko uff maaanu b na jo already uska hai manga kya kyi shi kha na😆😆😆😉😉😉

main ab bhul raha hu khud ko phle konsa yaad tha😉
bas
yaad rakhta hu
har us pal ko
jo baandh gaya tha
hamko miss u maanu

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

poem 29


its for A Thrashed barbie by BULBUL.A


kabhi saamne aa kar
mujhe paas bula kar
woh mujh se milla bhi nahi

mere apno ne diye ,
jo jakham
jo sitam
aur tod diya mera har bharam poor girl😭
saath tha umar bhar ka
par woh saath na chale do kadam
to aise main ,
inka mujhe apnana
mere har zakham(emotional one) ko dekh kar bhi bhul jaana
kasoor inka toh nahi
jab saath mere mera khuda bhi nahi
aur
main unse baat karu
itna mujhme bhi toh hosla nahi honsle ke aage jeet hai

woh maang rahe hai ,
mere sach hone ka saboot
chahte hai mujhse ,
suraj ki roshni
aur dhoop
par yeh unse kaise main kahu
main sach hu din ke ujjale ki tarah
koi raat ka adhuraa khaab nahi
haan ,
yeh aur baat hai
unko dikha saku main yeh ssab
iske liye ,mere paas
suraj ki roshni to kya ,
ik mitti ke diye ki roshni ka saath bhi nahi uff science ka zamana hai use emergency light yaar



hop you like it
sorry for mistake

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