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Posted: 12 years ago
ok seems like
my thoughts are some where right

but again
you show who is the writer here
by made them married

bloody hell that for one whole month
and still no hanky panky

ok they new each other for their whole life
and some where they both loved each other
i say some where becose
maan babu is sure about his feelings for her
and knnew about them from the time they start in his heart

but what the hell
why did geet behave like a tube light here
as its the fact that she have feeling for him
if its not the case
than she never behave like the way she did
after his first touch

but again
we are here with our famous why
and request
please aniee
do the update soon
so we can get our answers
of about this restriction in their relation
that are present
Edited by 9n9i9s9h9u9 - 12 years ago
AayaTohModiJi thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
awesome , amazing part
loved it
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
GREAT GREAT GREAT GREAT ( TAKE IT A 1000 TIMES)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Anshru, my 4848th post for this. Go for it, burning hawt. Geet in confusion aur Maan in love, kya perfect passion hai. It was all, so much superb. You blend all the things perfectly. The story, title, scene, dialogue, thoughts, poem and everything. Me want it hell hawt...

Do cont soon and do PM me.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ae lo jii sanam hum aagayee ...

hmm mysterious part 😉

so maan loves her a lot and geet not ???

is anyone else in her life 😕

or she has her own expectations from a married life 😕

confusion confusion

am waiting for next ...

ahannn !! you planning to update today ...

then tou am eager to read more .. on maaneet's Touched Story

love yaa
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing part di... Luking 4rwad 4 d nxt updt as wanna knw agge kya hoga.., its lyk dey r on honeymoon... ;) or shurwat toh abhi hui hai... It was d effect of maan even b4 she confess prply... Jab samajh ayega tab kya hoga...
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Posted: 12 years ago
yar awesome update loved it..well written something new.
continue soon:)
Love & Regards,
Maria)
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg!! A new and different story frm annie.
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow nice start anshara. loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG a new story n that too full of romance n passion. Me happily dancing. Thank u so much.

BEAUTIFUL UPDATE.

Amazing

Raed both the parts. It was so hott.
Geet in luv wid the autumn, the green
Vast of nature. She is very close to it.
U have described beautifully that part
Where Geet is dancing, enjoying. The poems
Were short, simple n sweet.

Maan can't take of his eyes. He is enchanted
By her beauty. Feeling her lips by his touch
Of hands. Gett too mimicking.
Maan savoring her lips finally. Geet too lost
To protest.
That part was too hot. My cheeks went red
While reading it n I was smiling foolishly reading
It. Oh I loved it to core.
Maan trying his luck further by taking one more
step. He started to devour her slowly n then
Said I love u.
Geet cumes to reality. But the effect is still dere.
Maan closing her button n carrying her.

Their house was located at a very
Romantic location.

Continue soon.

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