MG FF-Winter Sonata-Thread 2 - Page 17

Originally posted by: keerthi90

Beautiful update tha ritzy dear...

After reading this update i am feeling so emotional right now...cause now a days i have been hearing a lot of atrocities on women in our country...everyday there is a news article stating that some girl is raped or an acid attack or a attempted rape and murder...being a women and living in this society has become so terrifying...and bang comes ur update at the right time...

SO geet wants to help all those girls living in the hostel with similar problems to her...finally she got to know that people who face even greater problems than us are living in contentment with their life...no problem is bigger...we should never lose the courage to face it...geet has got to know this mantra and now she wants to help the girls in her way...nice thought...and dadima is also supporting such a noble cause...

Geet was thinking about maan and praised him before dadima...hmm...she has compared him to a cactus telling that he is hard on the outer but when he showers kindness we get to see his softer side...ab dadima toh surprised hain ki somebody actually praised her grandson for first time...haha...

Precap sounds interesting...Update soon...

Originally posted by: crazydream

First of all congratulations for new thread.

BEAUTIFUL UPDATE.

Amazing

Really liked this chapter. Its given
Foundation to the story. That Geet will
Lve her life that too wid a aim to help the
Girls wid bitter past.

Thinking abt her khadoos yet caring boss.
That was so sweet of her to praise him n
Understand him correctly.
Dadima pleased to here her thoughts which
Brought smile to her face.

Meera. Another girl wid a horrible past.
Her story was painful. Yet she didn't loose
Hope to live. Geet amazed to see her
determination n thought abt herself.
She once again got hope n aim to live seeing
15 yr old girl.

She will take care of Meera n contribute
Something for betterment of others.

This part is excellent. I loved it a lot.

Continue soon.

Originally posted by: ritzy09

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Patience dear...romantic bits will be interspread and there will be some parts in the beginning where Maan will be less...they still ahve to become a couple or rather Maan has to at least realise his feeling...

Geet's past will unfold in parts and full past will come down much later...

Originally posted by: Luvforever

I cnt believe it... Jst a 15 yr old grl hw cud sumbdy do dat to her... Moreover her parents wat dey did instead of reportng to police dey asked her to 4get it hw cud dey & wen she got pregnant & cnt be aborted dey threw her to die... R dey realy parents apne bache se jyada reputation ki padi hai... Nt even once dey tried to knw who did dis to her... Its bttr nt to hv family wen dey r nt wid u wen u need dem... I jst cnt imagine 15 yr old grl..? Waise if its meera's past wat abt geet's past? & geet's decision is perfect to help such grls... Lovely & realistic updt di... Prcp sounds intrstng cont soon...

Originally posted by: ritzy09

Do u know what was the basis of this chapter? You wonder how can people do this to a 15yr old girl. My basis was an incident which happened in Noida city. While, a mother was putting away groceries in her 2nd floor flat, her daughter was with a security gaurd below. In that time, he raped her and due to her age (i think she was 3 yr old), the girl died...

It happenned years ago when I was working in Noida and I can never ever forget the news or the images it filled my head with. There are people who are disgusting and worse is that our society just turns a blind eye to problems like pedophiles and teen preganancy.

This is just a small feeble attempt to bring in awareness and say there are ways to make life better for harassed girls...

Originally posted by: neha5058

it was so emotional di...
loved it di...
filled with pain, revealation of past , the brutal society and their so called respect in society...
when they can't provide safety or respect to thier childrens then they are not able to call parents..
it was so emotional past di of meera... at teh tender age of 15, she was brutly raped by those goons of street and her abandoned her, threw her away in train track... oh gosh...
loved geet's decision and the way she took care of her...

loved the description by geet for maan... it was so amazing update di and long one too...
it was really a big thing which happened in our society... day by day we hear the news of rape, on teasing in streets, etc. etc. sometimes we also faced it... infact i have also face the teasing on roads... but never faced like this...
thanks a lot di...

Originally posted by: impoojaverma

awesome update

u showed d bitter and harsh reality of society

juz for d deir name and position in dis society meera's parent throw her on railway track

but its her luck that she and her baby is safe

watever happens wid her is not justify

she is barely 15yrs old got rape and now she is pregnant

in all these where is her fault???

whoever do d mistake girls r always blamed

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

meeras past was so shocking... just 15 years??? i donno whom i disgust more... the boys who raped her or her so called family... if her family had taken her to a doc and given her an after pill how different would have been her life??? she would be still going to school and staying with family... and though the incident would have left a horrible mark but still with the help of her family she could have survived ...

am really proud of geet, that she not only recognises the help she got from such an institution but also have the mind to give a support to it ... her decision to take care of meera and her kid is also commendable... as this decision would not at all be easy for her...

though the part didnt had maaneet, but the part was so well written, emotional, and inspiring too that i didnt even fell the lack of maan element in it... hope he doensnt mind it😉... but have to say his comparison with a cactus was just fab!

still thinking y geet told that she cant have any lifepartner?? awaiting for her past to unfold

Originally posted by: Gcs-girl

I am totally Speachless with this part
It ws Heart-wrenching Update Di
Felt so Bad for Meera...poor soul...she suffer alot with her unborn child.
really wanna thowe all those disgusting people in our society
Loved Geet...her thinking...Understanding n mostly the way she feel meer's pain
helping her...awww so awesomely written

muwhh Geetu...u simply.rockkk

Geet thinking about Maan...hyeee
later, she praising Maan ...awww just loved it
OMG!! superb precap...
eagerly waiting for next update
continue super soon
Thank u for PM :-)

u know wat Di...u r splendid writer who indeed is actually keeping Maaneet alive!!!