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sobia4maaneet

@sobia4maaneet

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#381

woo that was fab one di ..

do super hit songs n a mind blowing narration by u

that too with maaneet ...

what more can i ask for ...

exceptional o the core ...

but what was that ..Sam use to like geet in her childhood ...than what is it that she is been behaving like that n according to geet Sam use to hate her from the beginning ...

?? ??? ??? ??

guess thr is another story behind it ..!!

but i don't know y mujhe lag raha hai ..geet bhi kuch chupa rahi hai maan se about those papers ...

may i am being extra suspicious but still the title is making me think so ..

any ways that ur department ...for now i am loving this extra romantically hot maaneet ...

loved the update thanks for this long one

Luv Ya

Sobia ..

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maaneet0887

@maaneet0887

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#382

Originally posted by: kiran_rati
nice update dear
sameera i will kill her
cont soon
HAPPY NEW YEAR DEAR

how u will get ur likes when u r not pming me and many people dear
sorry i am not getting pms when u update😭

dear actually told u guys that i cant PM u as am busy with my mom...but u took it other way round...😭

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lehr

@lehr

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#383

awesome update dear.

loved maneet's moment ☺️☺️☺️☺️

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Sampa Ghosh

@sweetsampa39

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#384

Beautifully romantic update.Maaneet love making always d best.

And bravo to Veer.

Loved d update.

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Rumana Begum

@Chahhat4eva

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#385

Awesomeee update dear...

Waiting for next part...

Post it soon dear...plzzz

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dreamymishti88

@dreamymishti88

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#386

amazing

fabulous

liked a lot

sorry for the late reply, had exams

continue soon

waiting

happy new year

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sonia156

@sonia156

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#387

Thanks for updating regularly. You are very talented writer. Continue writing 😛

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CrazyMaaneetFan

@CrazyMaaneetFan

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#388

Read it in 2 parts. As 18+ ke liye i preferrd to sit "alone".
N it ws best option to chose coz u've writtn such a passionate stuff.
Too gud n actually too hot!.

Waah! Kya tareeka hai apna pov n apne dil ki baat bataane ka... Vry romantic n indeed best way.

1st part...
Well lovd d way veer teased maaneet.
Gosh! Even maan blushed... Haaye!!!
N tv wale... Uff!! Maaneet ka kiss baar-baar dikha rhe hain...

How geet signed docu is still mystry.
Wanna knw it fast.

Sameera ki baat samajh nahi ayi...
She lovd geet wen dey were kids???? N nw doesnt. Actually hates geet???? Bt why???

Maaneet brkfst romance... Tauba!!
N then car romance????? Bechara driver...

Bt jo bhi hai lovd dis out of contrl maaneet in lov uncontrollably...

So SR ho gyi,ab HM?????

Precap me dhamki...

Bt kuch aur bhi hai i gues.

N Happy New Year dear.God bless u.

Plz count my like frm dis comment as like tab doesnt work frm mobile.
Pakka count krna,ok...

Waitng fr nxt part vry eagerly.

Plzzz conti soon.

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maaneet0887

@maaneet0887

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#389

TEASER

Veer came to Singhania Mansion and knocked the door of the SM.A servant opened the door and asked politely,"Aap kaun hai?"Veer answered,"Mein Veer hoon...Captain Rajveer Singh Shekhawat..mujhe aapke saab Sanjay Singhania se milna hai...!"Veer gave his visiting card and said,"Aaj mujhe yahan aane ki appointment mili thi...!"The servant went towards the study rom holding the card while Veer was made sit in the drawing room.Veer saw around him where there only Sameera's photos were present but not Geet's and Veer come to the conclusion that Geet was treated here just like a servant.

After some minutes or so a man aged of about 50's walked towards Veer where Veer stood stretching hands,"Captain Rajveer Singh Shekhawat sir...!"Sanjay shook his hands and said him to sit down and he too sat in front of him and spoke,"Kay baat karna chaahte hai aap...aap hi the na jo aaj subah phone kiya tha milne se...!"Veer said,"Jee sir...mein kuch baa sawaallon ke jawaab dhoond ne aaya hoon agar aap co-operate kare toh mein u sawaallon ka jawaab dhond sakta hoon...!Sanjya said,"Jee kahiye...kya baat hai...!"

Veer said,"Mein aapko baaton mein nahin uljhaana chaahta...yeh jaan na chaahta hoon ki aap wakay mein Maan ke saath Sameera ki shaadi karvaana chaahte the ya Geet ko...!"This question made Sanjay's eyes widened with shock and he stood immediately and asked,"Aap Geet ko kaise jaante hai?"Veer said clearly,"Mein Geet ko nahin jaanta lekin Maan ko bahut achchi tarah se jaanta hoon...mein uski dost hoon aur ek problem ko investigate karne ke lioye usne mujhe appoint kiya hai...so bataayiye...kya aap sach mein apni beti Sameera ke saath Maan ki shaadi karvaana chaahte the ya Geet se????"

This made Sanjay sweat head to toe and he turned that side not giving any glance to Veer that he's nervous but Veer is so sharp and he had seen his nervousness and stood speaking with Sanjay when Sanjay spoke,"Let's go to my study room...!"

Iske aage u have to wait for update and i wont give the update till u fulfill my range of likes and comments...or else am not gonna give update and be confused like this only that what happens next...😡