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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kiran_rati

what a beautiful update yaar

a biggg kiss on ur hand for this awesome update
waiting for next part
soon dear



awww thank you so much this is so special comment for me yaar😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: lovesia

haayye kya update tha didu

maaneet r proud parents of a son
but maan was feeling so guilty that he didn't hold his child
maan was so mentally disturbed that he have to admitted in hospital
but now maan no more guilt trip
have a happt life with geet nd ur son
didu maaneet ki church wedding karaona
plzzz



jaan kisi aur ff mein dongi coz i already typed this one bolo kaunsi wali chahiye sorry sweetheart😭
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Posted: 12 years ago



PART 53:

mujhe pyaar do mujhe pyaar do

His eyes glued to geet as she descended down in the wedding attire and sat beside him!! The awaited moment, maan caressed the hair of his baby who was looking at the fire.


dil beqaraar hai, pyaar do


Baby was busy playing around, dadima did ask maan to give him but he didn't!! It was his luck, even for his son too for being a part of the parents wedding!!


barson kiyaa hai maine intezaar


The rituals began, geet was smiling at her son, he was gaping the things that were placed around him. She felt his hand adorn her forehead with sindoor. She bent to kiss her son, by now he had gotten two teeth at the front.


mujhe pyaar do mujhe pyaar do


Geet's neck was then tied with the Mangalsutr, dadima helped maan by lifting her hair. Geet blushed as the she felt maan so close to her.

ye aashiqui tujhse shuru tujhpe Khatam


They got up for the saath pheras, while maan lifted the baby in his arms. Those seven rounds of marriage!! Those vows of marriage!! Her life completing!!


ye shaayari tujhse shuru tujhpe Khatam


He led geet to the front and followed her, those seven pheras!! And the marriage accomplished, they were one finally infront of the world.


tere liye hi saansein mili hain


Their first night with the bed beautifully decorated with rose petals, geet was feeding her baby while maan went to change his attire.


tere liye hi milaa hai janam


Both of them cuddled into each other beside the baby, they still had few things to speak on their wedding night!! Well its different for the couple.


Geet wrapped her hands around maan's neck, yeh zindagii tujhse shuru tujhpe Khatam he picked up geet to change her dress.


ye aashiqui tujhse shuru tujhpe Khatam


Promise me maan we will speak and discuss everything!! Aaj ke baad chahe kitni bhi choti baat kyun na ho hum ek dusre ko batayenge, he kissed her palm that was held for his promise.


mujhe pyaar do mujhe pyaar do


Mujhe nahi pata tha ki promise aise bhi karte hai!! Geet pouted feeling maan carrying back to the bed after the dress change.


dil beqaraar hai, pyaar do


Aaj se mere promises kuch aise hi honge jaan!! He winked at her, but she loved his this way of promising her. Both of them slept on the either side of the bed with the baby in between them.


barson kiyaa hai maine intezaar


Prem!! He is the symbol of our love maan said to the pandit who was suggesting names for the baby. Like he had no other names in mind.


mujhe pyaar do mujhe pyaar do

Yeh hamara prem hoga maan!! Geet's eyes filled as those words of her fell back in her ears. She wanted her son to be her prem!! Maan's prem!! It was two months of their happy married life!! She kissed maan with emotions running, aise nahi lot more to come jaan, tum thik ho jao pehle!! She knew what he meant, geet wanted it to happen like her hubby. They wrote the name on the rice PREM!! And the ceremony accomplished.

tum mere haathon mein prem lakeer jaisi ho


He pinned geet to the wall kissing her neck, she giggled as his rough stubble tickled her ... kuch toh sharam karo maan apne bte saamne hi shuru ho gaye, geet pushed him away to take prem into her arms.


main deevaanaa raanjhaa, tum heer jaisi ho


Geet its high time we make love!! He said playing with prem. She had no reply except going red in embarrassment. What will she say?? She wanted it too!!


tum aisi baaton se beqaraar karte ho


She hugged him, telling her acceptance ... why don't we leave for honeymoon?? He asked ... Aap pagal ho kya?? Prem ka kya hoga?? ... Prem ko bhi main hi dekhonga aur tumhe bhi!!


mere sabr kaa aanchal taar-taar karte ho


Nahi mujhe nahi jaana kahi bhi, she made prem to sit on her tummy and began playing with his hands. He giggled showing his tooth


jaao na is tarah baanhon se chhoot ke


kyun nahi jaana?? ... we still have some work left maan, we still have a responisibility ... and it is?? He didn't understand what geet was speaking abt ... Aniee!! Pehle uski shaadi phir


chaahoongi main tumhein ab sanam Toot ke


He was speechless, seeing prem sleeping maan placed him in the crib. Geet came from behind and hugged him from behind, his reverie broke with that.


teri vafaa ke badle mile to, manzoor hai har sitam


He slid her pallo down, geet was stopped him ... Office she said looking at the wall clock ... I am not going anywhere ... Mujhe meri biwi ke saath rehna hai


ye mausiki tujhse shuru tujhpe Khatam


His breath fell on her skin as he began to trace her body with his nose. All she could do was to respond, he kissed her stretch marks on the stomach, admiring them.


ye aashiqui tujhse shuru tujhpe Khatam


Somehow maan couldn't go further, he wanted to make it special, make it big!! He placed her curls behind her ears, her lips invited him. He kissed her senseless, knocking breath out.


mujhe pyaar do mujhe pyaar do


she kissed his forehead ... I know you want to make it special maan I am ready to wait!! Their understanding levels increased. He was more than happy on it!!


dil beqaraar hai, pyaar do


There were no more words, its just they and their love!! A love which was giving them a new life!! Its that now it only increased by tenfolds.


barson kiyaa hai maine intezaar


Maan rested his head in her lap, geet caressed his hair ... aaj aap aise hi rahenge din bhar?? He nodded simply and said ... kya karon prem mujhe tumhare paas aane nahi deta, let me feel you atleast when he is sleeping!!


mujhe pyaar do mujhe pyaar do


Maan I am hungry ... please hato na she pleaded making a face ... Fine let me make something for you!! he said


har pal tanhaai mein tumhein yaad kartaa thaa


He tried feeding her the parathas, she moved her head sideways ... No maan itna heavy food woh bhi subah subah no!! please


Moti nahi ho jayogi khalo, he stuffed the food inside her mouth ... abhi kya kam moti hoon?? The baby fat is still on!! Aap bhi na maan


apni sooni duniyaa main aabaad kartaa thaa


kya main?? You need to eat all this atleast for prem, I don't mind you this way!! You look even more adorable. Aise mat dekho have it!!


main bhi to honthon se paighaam likhti thi


It was afternoon, maan was playing with prem, he made him sit on the bed and began taking his pictures, while he was making faces


prem😉 i just couldnt stop staring at this baby so cute ghar le jaa nahi sakti😭


kore se kaagaz pe teraa naam likhti thi


The whole day the trio spent time relaxing, maan was happy for giving his time to family after a long time of work


dard ke vo sabhi sakht mausam gaye


Maan ghar chalte hai its been long, I want to go back to mansion now!! Krathi, krathi dono prem ko dekhna chahte hai. I was so wrong pata nahi mujhe laga ki hum dono akele rahenge yaha. I became so blind in my own world that I didn't bother about them.


ham mile to lagaa pal yahin tham gaye
ab na judaa hon sapne hamaare


She stared at maan who was dressing the baby after the bath, he was so happy getting him ready!! Finally they are going back!!

jab tak rahe dam mein dam
ye bekhudi tujhse shuru tujhpe Khatam


We were giving ourselves time geet it doesn't mean ki tumne sabko prem se dur kiya!! I agree family is important iss liye toh we are going home, now smile he pulled geet's cheeks.


ye aashiqi tujhse shuru tujhpe Khatam
mujhe pyaar do mujhe pyaar do


Geet looked back at the flat, their paradise of love!! She will miss it ... chalo jaan ghar hamara hi hai we can come back whenever we feel like. Geet cried leaving it but now her world will be different with family.


dil beqaraar hai, pyaar do
barson kiyaa hai maine intezaar


Maan pulled geet back as they were to enter the mansion, badmaashi band karo maan she said trying to free herself.


mujhe pyaar do mujhe pyaar do
ye aashiqui tujhse shuru tujhpe Khatam


All the family members invited the couple inside, dev and naintara were so happy seeing maaneet back. The two little children were really angry on geet, but still they hugged her missing her so much.


mujhe pyaar do mujhe pyaar do
dil beqaraar hai, pyaar do


The decorated room was a shock to maan and geet. The moment they entered, their jaw fell not knowing who did that, but then they heard ... Make it special maan, prem came from behind ... mera naam dediya apne bte ko not bad so let me treat you tonight he winked. Heer too joined him, she was with a baby bump in her sixth month!! They met again hugging each other!!


barson kiyaa hai maine intezaar
mujhe pyaar do mujhe pyaar do


Maan closed the door getting naughtier with his thoughts, geet just made prem to sleep.


well i am not happy with this part the way it had come just a small journey of their new born relationship!!! i am sorry if i upset you with this part

last part coming in few hours with epilogue!!


PREVIOUS PART:

PART 52

NEXT PART:
LAST PART+EPILOGUE

Edited by dreamyharika - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
its really awesome re
u showed how their life began after marriage
how they r doing everything

awesome update
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Posted: 12 years ago
no!it was really really beautiful!why would u think that it didn't come out well?
i loved this story too much from the begining itself.so geting emotional as it is finishing.bt can't wait for ur latest vantures to surface.
can't wait for the next part&the epilogue.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved both the parts
Maan came out of guilt...loved maaneet moments along with prem
Waiting for epilogue
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Posted: 12 years ago
dnt worry yaar..the update was wonderful..love how maaneet life turn out happy with prem...lovely family bonding...next update😳😳..pls cont soon..sad the story ending..but happy with happy ending😃😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
It was beautiful Haru.! U showed their love growing which was really nice.!
U did an amazing job re.! 😊
Maaneet are finally married and their love has increased so much...
Finally they are getting their due happiness.! 😳

Prem is so adorable.! Just like his momma and dadda 😆

So ur wrapping this up today.? Good.! Will be waiting for the end.!
Keep up the awesome work.! 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
m sooo happy k maan came out frm his guilty n deir love is back...m sooo happy fr dem...

awesome n wonderful updates...

loved dem very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely updates...

waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 12 years ago
haayee
maaneet ki shadi ho gayi
with prem seeing his parents wedding
itna lucky kon hota hai
now maaneet understand eachother nd will share their problem
love maaneet moments with prem
didu story itni jaldi khatam kar doge😭😭

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