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superb update
maan save geet n teach good lesson to goons for life time👏
love the way u wrote whole scene maan tack care of mitu n geet same time 😃very well... 👏.👏..👏... SUPERB
mitu ne chatter box bana diya .😆😆.. bas baat karate raho
LOVE IT

Originally posted by: billy_ritu

awesome

update

plz guys comment karo

she is writing so beautifully... give credits to her as a token of thanks

dont be silent

wowww very very beautifully written update dear.

wonderful part continue soon...😛

superb part...loved the naughty mitu...so possessive.

awesum part...way to goo maan...her really know hw to control his desires...mitu is jst too mch...can a kid be dis possesive...?? well she iz msks kid soo yea...hota hey..lol

fabulous update eagerly waiting for next part

Mohita,
I know you r hurt to see d decreasing no. of like but trust me dear u shud not feel bad after creating such a stupendous piece of art.

This is one of d best parts of HAQ i ve read.The way Maan was searching Geet,then he took her in room.On one side he was feeling like killing d molestors wid his bare hands but on d other side he had to take care of injured Geet.And then in d room,he had to take care of both Geet and Mitu by taking turns.The milk clotting part jst brought tears in my eyes to see Geet in so much pain and also increased my respect for Maan.

And fell head over heels for Maan all over again.Maan took both Geet and Mitu in his arms and made geet feed mitu.The imagination of dis scene is jst awesomely beautiful.

I am being unable to express how much I loved d update.Thanx for giving an outstanding update.

Originally posted by: sweetsampa39

Mohita,
I know you r hurt to see d decreasing no. of like but trust me dear u shud not feel bad after creating such a stupendous piece of art.

This is one of d best parts of HAQ i ve read.The way Maan was searching Geet,then he took her in room.On one side he was feeling like killing d molestors wid his bare hands but on d other side he had to take care of injured Geet.And then in d room,he had to take care of both Geet and Mitu by taking turns.The milk clotting part jst brought tears in my eyes to see Geet in so much pain and also increased my respect for Maan.

And fell head over heels for Maan all over again.Maan took both Geet and Mitu in his arms and made geet feed mitu.The imagination of dis scene is jst awesomely beautiful.

I am being unable to express how much I loved d update.Thanx for giving an outstanding update.

thanks for d reply and we readers are always dere to motivate our fabulous writers.wherd will i go if u guys dont keep reviving my maaneet thru these superb stories.jst dont be so upset.

and abt ur ramkatha, i m all ears sweety.you r always welcome.you see i m a good reader and listener too.love u.