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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update
like is nt working
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Posted: 11 years ago
Take care of urself & get well soon
Update is fantastic
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Posted: 11 years ago
nyc update...😊

Worried abt d pre-cap..😕

My geetu...maan use ajeeb is situation m daal k chala gya...thnx 2 her babaji ki ryt tym pe wo idiot anji aa gya..n us se geet ne help le li...

Continue soon...

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Posted: 11 years ago
thanks you Friends for your lovely comments and likes


PART-16

hearing those words .. guru anger increased he immediately took his gun pointed that towards x..

please guru calms down it is not good for us to fight like this.. in this we are giving chances to police... who are behind us..

guru immediately left the place...

FROM THE PAST 1 HOUR DEV WAS TRYING TO TALK WITH GEET, BUT SHE NOT RESPONIDNG TO HIM, THAT DAY WHEN HE LEFT GEET IN THE HOTEL, HE WENT TO MEET HIS FRIEND WHO WAS WAITING FOR HIM, WhO HAD COME ALL WAY TO MEET , WHEN MAAN TOLD HIM THAT HE WILL TAKE CARE OF GEET, HE LEFT THE PLACE.. AFTER THAT HE DO NOT WHAT HAPPENED

Geet what happened please tell me , why you are angry on me, why you are not talking with me

Why your bro had not told anything

No geet that day he immediately left to delhi for some urgent case issue today only he came, vasie bhi, why .you tell me what happened

Seeing his conditions geet narrated all what happened that day

Iam sorry geet I never thought bro will do like this ,saying he took his geet hands into his.. I will promise geet I will never leave you like this , maan told that some friend has come to meet me, so I told him to look after you, but I never expect3d him to behave like this..

Geet saw his sincerity in his eyes

It is okay dev, I understand, now leave my hands, I have to go home, mami will be waiting for me,

Geet what happened to you brother

Hearing his brother name...at one second.. geet face became gloom

Dev I do not what happening to him, there are no contact after he left from prison

dev it is already late I will go hime, stopping the conversation she do not want to discuss about his brother at moment now

maan was sitting in his study room seriously discussing about the case issue and writing some points, the case is about a politician son involved in a hit and run case , the son has killed 4 persons sleeping on payment the politician trying hard to save his son

maan was seriously, concentrating on the file, at the same time he heard some

foot steps , he could understand without turning his head that he is dev

bro .. bro

yes.. dev

just see once here.. I want to ask you one question , see here once, do not look at your files

I am hearing tell me

No bro it is very urgent just see here once

Why you behaved like this towards geet

What I did now

Do not stare at me like this bro.. you know what you did, how could you leave geet ln the restaurant like this.. you know I brought her theer.. even when she is not interested.. without paying the the bill how could you think she will manage

What happned to geet then how did she paid..maan was very curious , about how geet could come from the situation, closing the file in his hand

By god grace nothing happened, she her neighbour, so she could take amount from him and paid the bill

I know about your geet, she very smart,

Bro why you are so much angry on her, do not forget that one day she is going to be daughter inlaw of this house

Until iam here , it will not happen

Sorry to disturb you bro.. saying dev immediately left the place..

At one second looking at the files .. maan felt geet was looking at him throwing challenge as if what he will do now

Geet was sitting in her balcony and doing some work, at the same time a paper ball came near her, immediately she opened the paper and saw the message .. there was a small line .. meet met near park at 7 clcok..

By the handwriting she knows that the message by arjun

Geet .. geet..

What happened mammi..

See vegetables has finished .. will you go to the market and bring them

Until now geet who was waiting for the opportunity to go out of the house, felt very happy

Ji mami... I will bring definitely saying that she immediately left the house

It is almost 1 hour when geet came to the park, but still now arjun has not come to the place...

Sun is almost setting..

Arjun come fast.. is becoming late She is staring at the kids who are playing there .. really childhood is a boon

Geet ...



precape; another misunderstanding..

small fight between mannet


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Kavi5873

Good but short update



thanks dear for liking it but i thought it is big update
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Posted: 11 years ago

Part-17

It is almost 1 hour when geet came to the park, but still now arjun has not come to the place...

Sun is almost setting..

Arjun come fast.. is becoming late She is staring at the kids who are playing there .. really childhood is a boon

Geet ...geet

Geet turned to the direction

Geet you did not recognized me,

It was arjun voice

Arjun.. but what is this.. in this avtar..

Why you are wearing this turban and what is this beard.. when you have converted into a Sikh..

Shh geet.. see everyone are staring at us..

Now stop your question bank...come w will sit and talk..

arjun why you are hiding your self like this

leave everything and come with me.. you know how much ma is waiting is for you

please come back home

why geet why every time you bring this topic..

saying that he took some amount from the pocket

geet take this and buy medicines for ma... some fruits

but geet eyes went on the wound which arjun has got in that shoot out...

what is this arjun...

ye kuch nahi geet,,

tell me the truth arjun

kuch nahi geet I told you na

mere kasam.. saying that she took arjun hands on his head..

immeditaly arjun took his hands...

goli lagi hai...

goli ..

she immeaitely hugged arjun and started to cry ..

ye pagli see I fine..that is why I have not told about this .. see I fine

why arjun why do you want to do such types works .. where your life is in danger.. why cannot you quite all these and come back..

just one year geet.. then I will settle everything and come comeback

now take this money

no I will not take this money .. which are filled with your blood stains...and what is this, everytime i ask you will tell one year.. kya rakha hai is one year me.. that

Why do you want to fight with me always geet, do not ask such question which i do not have answer

He was seeing the time.. it almost half-hour .. now he has to go.. how to tell this to geet who is very happy seeing him

Geet was holding his hands and sitting quietly and seeing here and there at the same time her eyes went on the person who was looking so familiar .. yes he is maan nad that girl yes that day dev has told about them.. what is her name... yes rajji...

Looking at him, she could guess that .. he was looking at her may be long time


Rajji was sitting on the swing and maan was standing there swinging her ..

Looking at him she immediately corrected her position, until now she was leaning on arjun and holding his hands ..

Now what this dusht danav will think about me .. .. seeing his smirking smile at her..

Now geet why you are thinking about that.. why you are bothered about him or what he thinks about you, let me think what ever he wants , why I am bothered about that things

Geet you are listening what I am telling

Ha arjun tell me..

What geet you are not listening to me until now

I will get little time to spend with you and still you do want to spend with me, adhe time muje jagada karti ho, aur adha time muje se baat he nahi karti ho..

Oka baba sorry.. maph kardena...okay do not pout like that...

Saying that geet hugged him and trying to convince him

Okay geet now time up... ihave to go.. saying arjun got..up

Arjun you have to go. It was hardly hour you came..

Geet it is very risky. It is already late . cannot put your life in danger . saying that he went away...

Seeing arjun moving fastly towards his bike , tears came into her eyes,.. she waved to arjun ..she could not control herself when the tears became to come .. she turned back and started walking ...

She startled when maan came before her .

.kaise ho geet

Ha apki vaga se tekhi hu,

you are alone.. at this time that to in the park..geet was getting irritated by his question section..

dusht danav .. aj court pe koi kam nahi hoga isleiyi apne ye question bank mere suru hogaya hai...chalo geet suru hojao.. face him

miss geet you came alone.. maan started questioning her

nahi ... I came with my friend ..

you came along with him or came to meet him..

geet saw his eyebrows raising

it is none of your business mr maan singh

kurana ..saying that geet started to walk

but maan was not leaving her..

do you want lift .. or i can an drop you I came in car..

no.. need I can go...thanks

why.. are you afraid.. will anyone see .. vo.. just now your boyfriend who left will see us .

by the way who he.. I have never seen before...I think so he does not belong to our community

geet was looking at him with hatred ...

ha he does not belong to your community ..saying that she tried to walk fast...want to avoid him...

but maan blocked her and started coming near her.. she started walking back wards.. maan singh khurnan what you are doing leave me

now she trapped between him and a tree



I know geet I know your character ... you just want money.. that why you are having so many boyfriends and now trapping dev also for money .. now tell me who is he

At one second geet was shocked hearing this accusation... how dare you are , whom you are to ask me.. there is no need for me to answer for your questions

Dev and now this Sikh person how many persons do you need

Geet was staring at him hearing at this new accusation

See geet if you have really liked dev then he would have left all older relations ..now sure that you want to marry dev ofr the sake of money .. for the last time iam asking you .. tell the rate you want .. and leave dev ...

You will give anything which I ask you,

Ha any money you quote I will give you

Geet was staring at him .see I already told you that I need only dev friend ship and not your money .. I do not know why you do not understand this simple thing , I do not know how you became a famous lawyer ..this is last time iam telling you not even you even god cannot break the friend ship bond , and next time if you are going harass me like this between us , I am going to complain in police station that you are harassing me , as a lawyer you know better than me.. how strong the case will be .. so never again come in my path ...

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Posted: 11 years ago
short & sweet part...double damaka👏
dev is liking geet but geet doesn't
maan assuming she is back of their money
when maan sees geet with arjun he misunderstood her😔
geet told maan she will complain to police...things are getting worse between maaneet
waiting to see when all will be fine
Edited by -Mithuna- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
both updates were lovely.
How long maan will suspect her
i hate him
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rashmivaish

both updates were lovely.

How long maan will suspect her
i hate him



i think so you will hate him more, because of his works...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rsusmita



i think so you will hate him more, because of his works...

I m waiting to hate him more

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