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ashwimaaneet

@ashwimaaneet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#281

nice updt but y geet is behaving lyk dis,waiting fr nxt:)

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Papon Tabassum

@paponecon

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Posted: 12 years ago

#282

mujheto maan se hi fursat nehi milti...who cares for RK...so geet left n maan nw will bcome like th banner...maan singh khurana...

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singh24

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Posted: 12 years ago

#283

What r u doing...???😕

Maaneet ko alag ker diya...

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d_sonia

@d_sonia

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#284

Awesome update
Loved it
Continue soon
Eagarly waiting

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punam2712

@punam2712

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#285

WHERE IS GEET

WHY SHE DIDNT WANT TO COME CLOSE TO HER

AND RK UNDERSTOOD THAT SHE WAS NOT COMFORTABLE WITH HIS CLOSENESS

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tia

@Tia-AFreeBird

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Posted: 12 years ago

#286

geet with rk
didnt like that

Edited by tiakashyap - 12 years ago

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Deepa

@spvd

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#287

part 9
awesome part...
cont soon dear...

PS - awesome banners dear...

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Mounika sharma

@-Mounika-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#288

omg ye kya hogaya geet left her home😲

ab kya hoga??will maan turn arrogant or will search for her😆

waiting for next

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Mdworld

@Mdworld

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Posted: 12 years ago

#289

**CREDIT FOR BANNER@--Rashu-- **

guys this has been made by 26_chaitra...thank u so much dear!!!!🤗
i seriously cant tell you how i felt with your efforts for this ff...👏

**PART 10**

he got up and took a bath...
but didn't remember anything...he wondered if he did say anything wrong to geet...
he called her but her phone was switched off...
he got worried and rushed to her home...and saw it was locked...
where is geet ??? and rano maa...he thought...
he tried calling her but even her phone was switched off...
just then he saw a neighbor and asked them...
when he was told that today only they moved out from their home...
but where they went they didn't know...

Mann tera jo rog hai
Mohe samajh naa aaye
Paas hai jo sab chhod ke
Door ko paas bulaaye
Jiya lage na tum bin mora...

GEET....he yelled...
kahan ho tum...
how can you leave me like this!!!!!
i wont loose hope geet...i will find you...
with determination he ran out on road...
he sat in his car and zoomed out...
he drove aimlessly on roads searching helplessly for them...
he drove to all bus stands...all stations...airport asking for them...
he wandered from here to their showing their pics...
if anyone would have seen them...
it was dark by now...
he remembered of meera...
han...she must be knowing...
maine pehle ye kyun nai socha.....he thought...
and drove to her place...

Kya jaane kyun hai
Kya jaane kaisi andekhi si dor
Jo khenchti hai, jo le chali hai
Jo khenchti hai, jo le chali hai
Ab yun mujhe teri ore

maan...meera was a bit shocked him seeing him so late at her place...
maan is everything ok!!! she asked getting worried seeing his all wornout state...
maan didn't reply and checked her entire home...running from one room to other!!!
maan will you tell me whats the matter??? she asked...
maan ran to her and held her shoulders tight...
geet...where is she????? he asked while his eyes were red...
geet...she would be at her home...i was busy so didn't have a word with her today...
maan...kya baat hai!!! is everything alright....she asked getting worried...
meera ...geet she left me...she left me.....he muttered while leaving her home...
meera stood shocked...
she went and called geet...but her phone was switched off...

Ho main anjaani hoon ab kahaani
Hogi naa jo poori
O paas aaoge tto paaoge
O paas aaoge tto paaoge
Phir bhi hai ek doori
Jiya lage na tum bin mora...

maan reached home...he was tired...not from running...
but from all this feeling...geet going away from him...
he was tired...he entered KM...
pammi and daadi were shocked seeing his that state...
they tried calling him but no reply...
but he took slow steps and went to his room without replying...
he closed his door and went to washroom...
he stood under the shower and let the water wash his emotions...
his feelings...his pain...
but could it be washed??????
he didn't know how long he stood under it...
remembering each and ever...

Mann ab tak jo boojh naa paya
Tum wo pehali ho
Koi naa jaane kya wo rahasya hai
Koi naa jaane kya wo rahasya hai
Jiski saheli ho

he came out dripping wet...he took their photos out...
they were all scattered on floor...
he was sitting in between staring at one in his hand...
he didn't realise when his eyes welled up...
he smiled looking at her pouting face in one of the pic...
he smiled looking at them and kissed it...
he picked other...looked at her messing his hair...
he picked the other...cried out loud...
kyun geet kyun...what was my mistake?????
why did you leave me geet????
geet you could have told me...but you left!!!!
but dont worry geet...perhaps i know you better than you know yourself...
you can never betray me...

am way to precious for you geet...
i know you don't love me...but am above all for you geet...
but geet aj bahaut dard ho raha hai geet...he complained to her pic...
i can't believe geet you left...you left your maan...
aj tak jo sab ne chaha wahi hua!!!!
wheather it was my dad...or RK!!!!
but now ...it would be according to me...

Main muskaau, sabse chhupaau
O main muskaau, sabse chhupaau
Vyakul ho din-rain
Kab se naa aayi naino mein nindiya
Kab se naa aayi naino mein nindiya
Mann me naa aaya chain
Jiya lage na tum bin mora...

he stood up wiping his tears...
bs geet ab aur nai...
you take your time...you wanna run away from me...run...
you wanna hide from me...hide...
you dont wanna come before me ...don't...
but geet you can't stop me from loving you!!!!
i promise if you don't want me to find you out...i wont...
but the day i see you near me...
think it as your last day away from me...
GEET ...AJ JITNA DARD HUA HAI...UTNA KABHI MEHSOOS NAI HUA GEET...
SHAYAD KISSI CHEEZ KO ISS TARAH CHAHA HI NAI...

once i see you i wont let you run or hide...
take as much time as you want geet...
but i will make you mine...
you are mine...

i fullfill each of your dream!!!
you want to see me a successfull business man...i will be...
i will do all the things you like about me...
but geet this time...i will have what i want...
i wont let others rule my life...
NOW ITS GONNA BE MY RULES AND MY GAME...he smirked...
REALAX SWEETHEART...TILL THE TIME YOU WANT BEFORE FACING ME...
THIS TIME YOU GONNA MEET BUSINESS TYCOON...MAAN SINGH KHURANNA...
THE COUNTDOWN BEGINS......he winked looking at her pic...

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guys...honestly...i cried writting this part...
i never felt like this befor...the way i felt maan's pain...
we actually have to feel each character before writting...
this is gonna be the toughest part till now to write...😭

PRECAP: leap...
WELCOME BUSINESS TYCOON OR SAY ARROGANT OR SAY DEVIL
MAAN SINGH KHURANNA!!!!
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PREVIOUS:PART 9

NEXT:PART 11
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Edited by Mdworld - 11 years ago