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Posted: 12 years ago
THEIR FIRST KISS
BUT GEET SAID NO TO HIM - WHY
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome
fabulous
liked a lot dear
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesme update
haila maan kissed her ab?wat wil gve do nw?
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Posted: 12 years ago
geet is blocking her happiness...poor girl..hopefully maan can bring her back..wonderful update.
pls cont soon..
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their 1st kiss awsome
maan is superb
no villain but i want villain there is always villain in love story your previous story as well doesn't have villain as such.
SO make RK VILLIAN
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update

Opps Maaneet 1st kiss

but Y Geet is behaving so rudely wid Maan, y she don't want to fall in love wid any one
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 8
nice part...
whoa they kissed...
cont soon dear...
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she is still nt asking maan abt prom nght...will he go wth RK...
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**CREDIT FOR BANNER@--Rashu-- **




guys this has been made by 26_chaitra...thank u so much dear!!!!🤗
i seriously cant tell you how i felt with your efforts for this ff...
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**PART 9**




what did i do???
i don't have feelings for him!!!! i can never love him...
he s my b est buddy...i can not spoil this relation with him...
he s my special friend...usne aj tak jo manga maine diya...
even now i can never say him no...
but aj jo maine uski ankhon me dekha...wo kuch aur tha...
i can not let him have feelings for me...
i wont be able to say him no...please papa...
help me...ye kahan phas gai mai..
.she cried helplessly...

JUST THEN HER PHONE RANG...
she was hell irritated ...so did cut the call...
it rang again...she picked it up wiping her tears...
before she could speak...geet...she heard rk's voice...
geet you there???...he asked...
hmm....she replied...
vo...i asked you for prom in the car remember????
hmm...
so ...will you be my partner....
hmm....and she cut the call...

next day...she got up late...
she saw her mobile...and saw meera's missed call...
she called back instantly...
GEET...U ASKED MAAN FOR PROM...
NI YAR WO....just then she was reminded of their last encounter...
oh god she forgot to ask him...bu now how will she face him ?
that was the biggest question...
meera i will talk to you later...and she disconnected the call...
just then she received the message...

would pick you up at 8...be ready by then...
RK..
..
she then was reminded of their previous conversation...
oh god...i didn't even tell maan about this...

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here in evening RK was getting ready in his tuxedo...
when maan came and asked about the reason...
then he told maan that he was going on prom with geet...
he was shocked...
she didn't ask him...
and rather was going with rk!!!!
he went to his room and called meera immediately...

AT PROM NIGHT...

MAINLY ALL THE STUDENTS HAVE ARRIVED...
JUST THEN GEET IN A RED OFF SHOULDER DRESS ARRIVED WITH RK...
BOTH WERE IN MASK...
BUT AS GEET WASN'T COMFORTABLE WITH IT ...
SO SHE REMOVED IT...

JUST THEN SHE SAW...MEERA CAME AND HUGGED HER...
oh god geet you look so pretty....she commented...
and rk you look no less...rk smiled and excused him and went to his group...
just as meera and geet were chatting...
wont you introduce your partner meera....someone called from back...
both meera and geet turned and saw maan standing there...
oh hi maan...geet tried to smile...
kmaal hai...you recognised me even with this mask....maan commented...
oh god maan...its you...then why wont she recognise you......meera laughed
unknown to the tension between the two...
waise tum to hume bhool hi gai thi...but then meera came...he smiled

just then their was an announcement for the couple dance...
RK came and asked geet...to which she obliged...
here meera was getting bored when yash out of blue asked her...
she also agreed and joined the other couples on dance floor...
rk kept his one hand on her waist ...he noticed geet was not comfortable
with him but was trying to smile...
but for whom???? he thought,...



here geet was trying to show maan that she was happy with RK...
yet she was so uncomfortable with him so near...
but then she saw maan looking at her intently...
she had to show him that she was happy being with others...
as song started they started swaying with the tunes...
here rk came more nearer and whispered in her ears...
Geet you not comfortable???? he asked...
ni RK...nothing like that....she tried smiling...
geet i thought we were these much of friends that you could have easily told me...
wo...she sighed,...
its ok yr...seriously....he smiled
she said thanx ...and went outside...

here on the other side...
maan was witnessing their each and every gesture...
he was sitting on the drinks counter and was sipping his drink while gazing intently at her...
his blood started boiling seeing RK holding her so near...
and above all her smiling...
he couldn't take that...
and then RK whispering something and her smiling...
the glass in his hands broke and the glass pierced in his hands...
his hand was full of blood...but that didn't hurt him...
he was not emotionally weak...
he saw her leaving the venue...
and he got up and followed her...

he saw her standing outside and looking at the view outside...
he stood besides her...
geet was lost in her reverie...that she didn't even realize that maan
was standing besides her...
just then he muttered...had fun!!!!
hmm....she spoke looking ahead...not even giving him a glance...
you were quite enjoying his company...he commented...
she didn't want to reply...so she turned and was about to leave when
he held her wrist and pulled her back to him...
her head collided with his chest...
she was shocked looking at his actions...she just then realized he was drunk...

oh god maan...you are drunk....she was worried...
that is not my answer....he spoke while his eyes were spitting fire...
maan....she tried pushing him...
just then her eyes fell on her wrist that was covered with blood...
she pulled his hand and saw blood...
maan ye kaise hua....she asked all worried...
wait i ll come...she spoke and tried to leave...
but he didn't leave...
maan two minutes....and he left...
within two minutes she came out with a first aid box...
she took him to his car...
and cleaned his wound...
and did the dressing...

all the while his eyes were fixed on her...
maan please....she tried...
but he as not in his senses...
he looked straight and started driving towards her home...
as they reached...she was about to leave...
he pulled her in his laps...
maan......she wasn't expecting this...
shhh....he kept his finger on her lips...
can i just hug you....he asked...
she didn't know what to say...
he pulled her hugged her hard...
he smelled her hair and hid his face in them...

even geet felt heavy as she was feeling his pain...
she caressed his back to sooth him...
after a long time she pulled back...
maan thanx for coming in my life...
i will never forget you...

she moved forward and kissed his cheek...
maan wasn't getting what she was trying to say...
she smiled and got off him and then the car...
he drove off...
geet ran to her home and hugged her mom and cried her heart out...

IN MORNING...
maan felt his head heavy...
just then daadi brought lemon juice for him...
he took it ...and thought about the prom night...
but didn't remember anything...
he looked at time...it was 12...
oh god...how much did i sleep....
he got up and took a bath...
but didn't remember anything...he wondered if he did say anything wrong to geet...
he called her but her phone was switched off...
he got worried and rushed to her home...and saw it was locked...
where is geet ??? and rano maa...he thought...
he tried calling her but even her phone was switched off...
just then he saw a neighbor and asked them...
when he was told that today only they moved out from their home...
but where they went they didn't know...

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