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PART 52

Maan could not understand what happened her suddenly. She was fine few moments before then what happened when she saw uncle?'. His mind snap thought, "Uncle!!'' this word gave him unsurpassed clue. He stare her for few minutes and then went through her gaze and found, he was not wrong. Yes, Indeed it was uncle whom she is fearing to. "But why?'' He could not get

"Geet?'' he spoke, tried to divert her sinking eyes toward him. She was frozen. He held her chin, forcefully tried to turn, to let her face him but no, she was rocked.

"Geet!!!!!'' he shook her hard to grab her dead attention and then, she moved. She moved her frozen eyes to him, saw him. Her pupil was seeming like, disappearing in sea of her red iris. She saw his lips were moving, something like he was speaking, but she didn't hear. Her ear had a long beep, silent alone beep sound which was coming from nowhere but had captured her whole ability to hear anything, from around. She felt her body was being shaken, rocked with tight force of two hands, which she could felt a shrewd warmth in it , yet it was hard for her to get, why she had been being shaken. And then a big shake tremble her full body to the extend , that she did feel she would be crumpled any time on floor. But this shake brought back her lost sense and "Maan'' she voiced out , with so much struggle..

"What happened Geet? Tell me what happened damnit!!!'' Maan was dying every second seeing her like this and worst part was, he didn't even know what was the reason of her feebleness. His heart was feeling so helpless that a single breath was like a pricking throes, which was coming in and out with sieving his whole flesh inside, marking dark and deep scars all over.

"Maan woh..'' She lifted her finger to point Narendra when found, him gone. She frowned, looked Maan and worn out, immersed in his arm, cried out loud. Maan didn't notice Narendra gone as he was worried for her. He carried her to car and drove to Mansion. Reaching there he carefully brought to her to her room and tucked in duvet. She had already slept. He didn't want to made her wake so left, thinking will talk in morning. In his room he didn't sleep for a second. Kept thinking what could be the reason. He knew something was connected to Narendra but what?' He thought all the incidents.

Flashback

He was going back, after talking to guard and then he saw Narendra car was parked there. "What uncle is doing here?" he frowned. He asked guard about uncle and guard again denied saying Narendra is not in office. Maan sensed fishy. He threatened guard and he threw out everything.

Flashback Ends

Maan was very restless talk to Geet. He went in hall and settled on couch, waited for her to get up.

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Meanwhile, Narendra was in his Bungalow, worried, tensed, walking restlessly, rubbing hands in aggravation. He was to be exposed any time he knew and so, his mind was thinking something more devil, to be made him out of all those which was going to come before him. He was thinking how to escape. He cursed himself at the first place, to trap Geet in office. He did not understand how Maan reached there, when he had well-planned everything. How he made Maan irritate to the extent that he left office without taking Geet with him. He bribed that office guy and guard for lying Maan and Geet about each other. He saw her standing over the edge of corridor. He breathed loud to give her a clue that someone was there, and she was going to touch him when he heard her struggle and then everything became quite. "I could not even understand what had happened? Where did she vanish? who took her away and then I saw Maan''

"Uff, he spoiled everything. And now, I will have to be alert. What if that girl tell him everything? No!! I just can't afford to lose everything now. I would not let him do anything. I will kill that girl before Maan reach to me and then he will go insane, mad after losing her. '' He laughed evil laugh. " I know everything about you and that girl my Maan beta and now, that girl will help me to ruin you'' he grinned. "But first of all I will have to know did she tell him everything?'' He took his phone out and called KM guard. Asked him did Maan was in foul mood? was he shouting or yelling? Guard said everything what he saw . Maan carrying Geet and she was unconscious. Narendra guessed Maan don't know yet and so, he could made his plan run.

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"Maaann!!!'' Geet sat up screaming. She was breathing fast, sweating badly. She was hell scared, dreaming nightmare about same creepy room in her orphanage. She was alone, feeling all same, standing in front of that man, shuddering, seeing no hope to run out, escape away from there. That man was stepping to her laughing, grinning, throwing his suffocative vibrations to her. She was moving back, more back and saw back she was on cliff and below huge dark black storming wavy river was thundering. Water was increasing, raising up, advancing toward her. She didn't want to die, not now. She wanted to live with Maan, for Maan , for entire life. "I don't want die..please I don't want to die.. '' Water reached to her level, hurled its black curly foam on her to claim her, grabbed her in it mercilessly. She screamed "Maannn!!!'' a last time.

Maan came running to hear her scream. He looked her sitting on bed, shaking sweating terribly. "Geet!!!" he run, took her in his embrace, caressing her back, patting her head to make her calm. With few minutes of effort, he felt her little calm. He made her drink water, caressed her curls lovingly, let her be sure she was not alone, he was there. he was not sure , ask would be good or not this time. She looked his eyes, it had millions of questions. She was feeling better getting his assurance, his warmth near her. She knew she should tell him everything and she did. She told Maan everything.


Precap: "I'm sorry Geet.. pls forgive me'' Naina said looking low

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Edited by geet.lover - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wowww lovuuu beautiful update...awesome...👏👏...awww geet ne kitna dar gaye...thank god maan save her n took her to KM...but ye kya ye narendra toh besaram budda hai abhi v geet ki bare mein soch raha h...tu toh gaya budda😡...maan ko sab jan ne de fir dekhna teri evil smile assa ban jayega...lovely lovuuu...dekh aj teri tarif mein 3 lines likhe...beautifully written ...spl geet ki feeling kaise usko sab yaad aa gayi...oyeee ye kya tha precap mein.😲
Edited by raingurti - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Precape mai tha kya ???😲😲
Ok calo update ki baat karte hai
Taliyaaa 👏👏👏👏👏👏
Wow , lovely awsome 👏👏👏👏
Geet;s emotions r beatufully written ..She doesn't want to die . she wants to live a life with her MAAN . No worries babe 😳😳 MAAN hai na 😳😳
Uss nikamma buddha se tumhe baca ne ke liye .. ekber MAAN ko pata cala bas .. uski 206 bone ko agar 416 bones nahi kiya to maine mini ka name badal ke kuch or rakhunga 😆😆😆😆😆

aab jaldi se update de de .. precap sar ki upor se gaya ... aab tension ho rahi hai


Edited by URME - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
beautiful update
at last i read today the part today itself😛
superb update dear😳
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago


wow lovely update.. te way geet scared of tat narendra and te way my maan holding her was so lovely.. now my maan wont leave tat b********* at any cost..i love te update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice upadate

this narendra shd die
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice part
geet has not told maan about narendra
i think narendra has used naina in his plan
Edited by -padma- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
narendra ur time is up..😡😡😡pls maan dnt let any harm come to geet..wonderful update pls cont soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Pheww.. finally I read all pending updates... I m back from exam war..😆
Amazing updates.. Now Maan knew abt Narendra uncle... What he will do now..??

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