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Isolophiliac

@Isolophiliac00

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#201

awesome update..

she was an over confident mother who thought what she knows about her son is always right...

who never wanted her sons opinion..

huff..inhe thodi akal to aai...

waiting for nxt update..

continue soon..

moni..

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kavya.sravya

@kavya.sravya

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#202

was she in illusion all these years ? donot think so ! she planned everything very neatly... broke engagement with sameera, took geet's children away from her, was holding maan tightly in her grip . only thing is, she thought maan didnot know, or didnot realise her doings. now that maan is showing some changes, she started thinking . well, she didnot expect maan to fall in love with geet , now she knew maan knows everything and still kept quiet was of little shock to her ! dev gave her reality check ! lets see what she decides ! better late than never !

update was superb ! the way you write, each update as one person's pov is really good ! didnot expect maan's mom to realise so quickly... waiting for the next ...

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harshithaaaaaaa

@harshithaaaaaaa

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#203

hope MIL realizes her mistake

and ask geet to come back home

superb part

their room replicates their love

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Audiwalia

@Audiwalia

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#204

Chalo atleast dev have spine in this ff... Gosh i didn't like maan in this ff ... He don't want to hurt his mother naa toh thik hai raho akele...okay i agreed that she is his mother he can't hurt her but still atleast he could've tried but NO...

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Shruti Jain

@smj1977.shruti

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#205

Originally posted by: kavya.sravya
was she in illusion all these years ? donot think so ! she planned everything very neatly... broke engagement with sameera, took geet's children away from her, was holding maan tightly in her grip . only thing is, she thought maan didnot know, or didnot realise her doings. now that maan is showing some changes, she started thinking . well, she didnot expect maan to fall in love with geet , now she knew maan knows everything and still kept quiet was of little shock to her ! dev gave her reality check ! lets see what she decides ! better late than never !

update was superb ! the way you write, each update as one person's pov is really good ! didnot expect maan's mom to realise so quickly... waiting for the next ...

it was not quick

it was the fact that she observed that Maan might be coming close to Geet that she tried to keep him busy

and then the changes she observed were making her rethink

the step of going to his room was to make sure that she was right

but she realised she was wrong about Maaneet

Dev only screwed the last bolt

just wait to see what she does now?

or what Maan does now?

or may be Geet?

don't forget NT?

and may be someone from Maan's past...😉

keep guessing