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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Diva7

Oh meri soti sundari ...apne kamal nayan kholiye😆

mere nain band hi rahe toh acha hai..vrna sab bhasm ho jayenge...😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: palindrome

mere nain band hi rahe toh acha hai..vrna sab bhasm ho jayenge...😆

nayan hain ya jwalamukhi 😆😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Diva7

nayan hain ya jwalamukhi 😆😆

jwalamukhi...😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

😊

What an update... Indeed salute to Woman power, A 'Pari'ful update😃
The start with description of how Geet is comforting & soothing a disturbed & stressed Pari by patting her to sleep & giving her time; within her embrace similar to a mother giving courage, love & solace to a child who is troubled. These two friends are indeed soul sisters. They're trying to fill the place of a mother in each other's life, which has been taken away from them either due to selfish reasons or to death. But nevertheless they are a strong pillar of strength & support to each other.
The whole avenging method on behalf of Geet was well executed by Pari. The momentary yet heartfelt desire Maan unconciously accepted to feel the presence of Geet folowed by dissappointment of it not being so & later self-lecturing on feeling all these mixed emotions was very well conveyed & presented. How much of concealing of emotions this Ma(a)n tries to do yet falls flat.
The whole "Mission Invisible Tail" of sheru dhundho was one of it's kind... 😆 Did feel bad when Pari used Miri's innocence to execute her plan but then on second thoughts also liked it somewhere as it was a fitting & very well deserved revenge to be taken against Maan who keeps assuming things & creating & formulating his own pre-concieved wrong notions from thin air. Pari's explaination to Miri about why the one-eyed intact sunglasses is the most apt, magical & worthy to be used for searching Sheru's tail was so witty yet childlike. For a moment even I was convinced by that lie of hers... 😳 felt yes can be possible, but then logical thinking & common sense did descend upon me...😆
Loved it how these two girls.. (Pari & Miri) just by their stance & style of approaching The Ma(a)n did cause apprehensions in him... That he did take cover from his car to save his Butt...(literally). Pari's digs targetted towards Maan was so briliant & varied from - addressing him as the driver, ...to taunting how different he looked at the party in all his glory & in lights of his power & money and that now his actual image in her eyes is clear of that lens, ... to making a fool out of him by not finding him worthy to shake hands with after he extended his hand. (Honestly there I did think that she would shake his hand formally but would squeeze the life out of his hand as a means to remove all her anger yet not showing it outwardly & overtly in front of all... but your way was well justified... .
Miri's one sided sincere conversation wih Maan's behind was so 😆😆 & All her antics from her logics to her reason for singing song to lure 'Sheru's tail form giving her darshan was so cute & adorable of her. I so love & adore Miri... ❤️. The song Aaja Aaja... and the context it was used in was so hillarious... had me grinning from ear to ear. On deeper thinking is this the song Pari sings chupke chupke from Brij in his absence... her attempt to console self for the long wait she is suffering from.
I would have never imagined even in my wierdest thoughts that the docile, shy, girl next door, waiting for the Man she loves to propose her Pari would transform into an avatar of Durga ma & Kali Inspector Parinda who is all out there to safeguard women & to teach an everlasting cruel lesson to all those perverts & a Burden on earth Men. Her this transformation though was unexpected & shocking yet very pleasing... mainly because of the way you presented & depicted it all. The audacity & shamelessness of that sleazeball of commenting on how helpless woman are & that his nothing will be harmed was too much I so wanted to jump into the fictional scene & bash him with all my might 😡. The way you brought out this point which is actually the need of the hour & also a true menace & shame on the society which just restricts the woman though she being the victim & letting those perverts & having fake pride about them being men so more stronger allowing them go scot free & at the same time giving them a free rein to do it in future, was very realistic in it's approach & the way Pari & her group of officers dealt with it was Brilliant & hats off to you for it, for dealing with this sensitive topic so beautifully.👏
* Phew* Finally Pari emptied & showered Maan with all her bank of swear words... mere bhi dil ki bhadaas nikal di is ladki ne... Ab samjhega Maan babu ko ki sirf woh baseless accussations & bak bak ne kar sakta... Geet has Parinda with her as a strong pillar. Also liked it when Maan self-admitted & acknwoledged inwardly the need for such a friend as Pari in life for making life worth living... 😊
Beautiful part... waiting for more... 😃
Edited by Onir - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
no problem dear m sure come under d an extinct volcanic category 😉😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
Updated pg 125😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Diva7

no problem dear m sure come under d an extinct volcanic category 😉😆

catch you later dear..
have to go now...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Okay first of all I loved this part a lot and the cake goes to Pari. I so want her and Brij to have some moments now. I am freaking in love with this girl. There are so many reasons but one of them is the shades of her character. While she was the one person who goes all gooey at Brij and mumbles and mutters when would his highness takes the first step but wouldn't let anyone tease him, the same soft sweet girl could go on risk her safety time and again and go through some serious assault we all never even would dream to have.
It is not even about the safety at this juncture. Yes, there are her men standing ready to arrest those bas***ds but going through the initial humiliation of someone touching you, even though you are doing it as a duty wasn't something every girl would be happy to do with, and trust me I haven't guessed her job though the reason I thought for her mood off was eerily similar. I thought this might be due to eve teasing but her strange silence on it made me think it was not an accident but a part of her job.
Moving on, the little stunt she and Miri had was hilarious. Her profanities and waving middle finger had me grin stupidly. Take that you Khurana!😆
Oh btw what I loved the most is of course she calling him son of a bas***d. I mean come on I always wondered why was a man needed to be bad mouthed only associated with his mother or sister? Why a woman? I so loved her tweaking of the usual word hence. Ah! Can you see me smiling stupidly?
Di, your writing makes the characters so damned real and I wonder time and again why the hell aren't brilliant authors sitting here go into publishing?
You guys write characters which are far more real and human unlike the supposed Indian Authors who are hell bent on dramatizing and creating demi gods for characters
Edited by TheBrat - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
haila i suspected that Pari has some hi-fly job but this is way better . No maaneet scenes but a lot of things are cleared up in this update
Waiting for more
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
liked it very much
miri and maan part was hilarious
while Pari as a cope come as a shock but a pleasant one
missed geet in this update
continue soon

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