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Posted: 12 years ago
#51
good to see the prologue back
happy writing
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Yayy... Finaly i read it & it sounds fun i mean atlst geet's character & our maan use toh hamesha geet ko sudharana padta hai... So, i m pretty interested in knwning hw dis stry goes & hw maaneet meets... Cont soon cnt wait 2 read it... :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome prologue dear .waiting for you to updatehope it will be soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
Nice prologue

But a bit vague... I would help if u'd give us the next chapters and the following ones for us to understand 😉

Amwayp pls yaar update quickly
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Posted: 12 years ago
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interesting so glad you put it back again i checked it yesterday but you had removed it by then so am glad it is back now
this sure sounds interesting
hope you do continue to it soon again
i like this concept
cheers for pm

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Congrats for new ff
awesome prologue
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice start..
thank u for the pm 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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😛

Edited by BULBUL.A - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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read upper post also

CHAPTER 1

A man in his earlier twenties comes in DU famous college. He comes out from his most expensive BMW car and body guard fellow him. Girl's hearts start to beat fast. He is so dashing in his black office attire. He removes his goggles and see one time in all direction one time and smirked to see all girl standing like statue.


He directly went in principle office and MR.KAPOOR stand to see him there by himself.

Mr.kapoor: arre MSK

MSK: hello mr.kapoor

Mr.kapoor: hello, mr.kuhurana take a seat.

Msk took a chair and signal to mr.kapoor to seat.

Mr.kapoor: what make u come here by himself u can call me?

Msk: its ok, come to the point I want an architect teacher who can teach me in shortcut I have time problem and u know I leaved my course in middle.

Mr.kapoor: ohh ok so u want home tuition so u can complete ur course.

Msk: hmm, but I don't want degree just knowledge and that only teach me whenever I got time from my busy schedule.

Mr.kapoor: this is really hard to find a teacher who gives u his whole time bcoz of university work

Msk: that is ur problem not mine.

Mr.kapoor: can I say something

Msk: yes

Mr.kapoor: we have a student who is super intelligent and have full commend in architect subject actually she is promoted student and orphan also so don't have any family commitment. She takes tuition for her survival and new session is just start so now she is free if u don't mind I can appoint her as ur teacher and believe she is very good.

Msk: r u serious u want me to learn from a mere student instead of highly qualified teacher.(said maan in amuzement)

Mr.kapoor: plz listen to me u r right but u want knowledge and professor teach u like book but she teach u like a student and after college she is free so no time problem even in this college in emergency she takes graduation class also she is god gifted child mr.khurana and u can sees two days if u don't like than we will find another teacher.

Msk: hmm interesting if u have so much confidence than I have no problem so can I meet her and discuss all term and conditions.

Mr.kapoor smile: of course mr.khurana wait I will call her here.

Mr.kapoor told his peon to call geet here immediately.

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In college canteen a girl is trying to targeting a coin in a glass and all student cheering her, she made a bet to a bully boy who is bulling all students and that girl take a stand against him.

Peon: where is TABBY principal called her in his cabin.

Peon catches that girl attention

Girl: what happen my mr.p

Peon: ohh TABBY princi call u in his cabin urgently

Tabby: ok I m going and continue after come back and shoe his finger to that boy as warning

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In principal room

Tabby knocks the door and praying and think "now what did I do now", krishan ji.

"Come in" mr.kapoor said.

Here tabby come in principle room. She is in jeanse and top like tom boy look chewing gum in her mouth she is looking like lady gundi.

"good morning sir" tabby said in her chirpy voice.

"good morning, meet MR.M.S.KHURANA" MR.KAPOOR said.

Tabby turn toward MSK and shocked to see maan here which irritate her most not physically but her all friend fill hostel room with MSK pic which bother tabby so much.

"app" said tabby.


Maan lift his eyebrow after this sudden reaction.

"mr.khurana she is geet who is going to teach u" mr.kapoor said.

Tabby is none other than our geet the famous gundi in college (I told u why all call her tabby)

"whattt" both said in unison.

"don't u think mr.kapoor she is so young to teach me" maan said to see geet.

"why will I teach him" geet said in confusion.

Mr.kapoor told geet how MSK needed to learn architect and he suggest her name as she is perfect in her subject.



"ohh k I have no problem but as I m going to ur teacher u have to listen to me" geet said cheekily and mischievously.

Maan didn't miss ting of mischievous in her eye and thought " see this girl guts who want to rule on MSK or else she is so nave to know who is MSK hmm interesting".


"well ms.geet we will decide later who listen to whom I think we have to talk and decide all things so shall we go" MSk said.

"ok mr.khurna come with me we will go in canteen and talk" geet said.

"canteen" maan said doubtfully.

"yup canteen" geet said.

Precap: maan geet talk and college girls see

i just write this part only so give u as said sorry and make u believe i m not going anywhere but after this this ff updated after haq is complete
Edited by BULBUL.A - 12 years ago


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Geet is going to teach Maan😊loved the way she said she is the teacher and he should listen to her 😆

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