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PujaShree

@PujaShree

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

wiilll read latr n cmmt too..:):)

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maanshi

@maanshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

congrats for new ff
thanks for changing ur decision
prologue sounds very different n interesting
n after 1st chapter i can say that it's going to be very interesting n lovely
waiting for maaneet t&c on eachother or say who rules whom ?

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Priya

@sweety_priya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#63

awesome pro...all girls will be J of geet...continue soon...

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Dona

@Donnaa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#64

thanx mohita for resuming ur works
awesome update
maan wants to learn
geet maan ki teacher 😆
ab kon kiski bate manne wala hai
loved it

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#65

haiyye main mar jawan yeh to maar hi daalenge yaar

so our geet urf tabby (lady gundi but why) is gonna teach the great MSK architecture interesting very interesting

this is gonna be fun for sure because this geet is even more crazier than normal right

and poor maan thinking that since she is so young he can bully her into teaching him hah good luck with that

and what was she doing in the canteen

man this is gonna be so good with the strict maan and our bubbly and pagli geet this journey am looking forward to once you are done with haq

dont worry and take your time

maan apne sach mein aisa unique peice nahin dekha hoga aaj se phele

and dont worry about the whole outburst we all have our moments am just glad that you are continuing so keep up the fantastic master pieces of writing and we will keep reading and commenting

cheers for pm