MG - SS~RANJISHEIN~ link to thread 2 pg/1 !!! - Page 2

Congratulations for the new story dear
feeling bad that i can't Add pics
kya dhamakedar prologue ye Yaar
Geet tho sherni lagti hey,and can see her dewaangi for Maan's love
loved her each and every word
hayee maan is acp, it was really shocking and not expected
i am already in love with this story n maine title dekna hi bhool gayi abi tak ,prologue padne ki chakar mey
saw now.i can understand the meaning by relating to story,but phir bi can u tell me the exact english meaning.
n dear with prologue itself u took our senses ab updates se kya kya hoga? babaji. in love with this Maaneet.
i still don't no hw u manage to give dhamakedar prologue's n teaser's with lovely beautiful updates
i just lv ur writing
ps:you don't no i actually quitted reading many dark painful stories because of complicated writings of some writers .
but i Dnt hv any problem with any sad story of yours because you just don't give any complicated parts even if it is sad one you will just make it sweet and simple.wch i lv so mch..lv u

this scene is same as in GOLIMAAR movie but movie me kiss nahi tha but where maaneet hai kiss to banata hai boss!!!! great start... update soon!!!

nice stare dear😊

Uff dear it took half n hour to write comment and post..
i was sometimes exceeding the words limit phir reduce to short hand words..

i was telling that.. i really don't have problem with sad stories but writing aapki tarah hona chayiye.. with less compilations..
some of the writers will give all non Maaneet scene through out the update when if there is any sad twist..and also they make all complications iN explaining ..and they also make other characters to dominate over Maaneet ..which i don't like.. (its my personal pov..that's all) but you just revolve the story around Maaneet only..and
i know other characters are important but phir bi zyada dominate nahi karna chayiye na..you didn't ever made other Characters dominate.. you have always given a perfect twists..
this is not about ranjisiein.. i was telling about all the sad stories..
k enough of my bak bak.
good night dear..

wow great story plz update soon
cong on the new story

maan as police..

Congrats on d new SS,buddy.

As always concept is superb.

I always love to imagine Maan in uniform and i think he'll look outstanding.

superb writing