MG-FF What does she want? Part 37 page 139

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SANJH

@Snowy_Secret

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Posted: 12 years ago

#451

Awesme update withnaughty maan and cute maaneet moments.loved it...

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ritzy09

@ritzy09

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Posted: 12 years ago

#452

awesome updates dear...A good beginning to their married life...

I don't think Geet has realised yet that Maan is MD of KC for which she has a job...these two need to start speaking as well...😆

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mystique_girl

@mystique_girl

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#453

While I like your story, I have been apprehensive about the marital intimacy and suddenly high comfort level between the two...

The kind of characterization of Geet and Maan through the initial part of the story, where they were more hesitant strangers and people thrown together in odd situations, doesnt quite link up to this state according to my opinion...the change has been a bit drastic,hasty and looks a bit impractical.

However, you are the writer and you would drive the story. While this comfort might be momentary, I would urge you to show the growing love, if any, between them . Even if you get into an arranged marriage, believe me, moving forward to this frankness and comfortlevel is not as easy in two days as you've shown.

Hope you dont mind, just my two pence.

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simran

@Pumpkinseed

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#454

Lovely update
so maan is becoming naughty haa
I will gonna kill this ms roy
always come in between my cute maaneet 😉

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fantesy

@fantesy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#455

awsuuum update..wow maan i getting naughty ..loved dere cute romance...

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krati

@krati5

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Posted: 12 years ago

#456

m waiting whn will maan announce abt his marriage publicly...

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Pooja Verma

@impoojaverma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#457

well maine abhi tak toh story nhi padhi hai but i will try to read it ASAP!!!!!!

busy wid college as mera new sem start hua hai

i will read it later

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preethia

@preethia

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Posted: 12 years ago

#458

loved the update

maan is getting naughtier...

hate brij..male chauvinist

eagerly waiting for the next part

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punam2712

@punam2712

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#459

AFTER SUCH A BAD START, BOTH ARE SLOWLY GETTING TO KNOW EACH OTHER AND BE COMFORTABLE WITH TH UNEXPECTED PASSION BETWEEN THEM

BUT THEY NEED TO BE CAREFUL OF MS ROY - DONT TRUST HER

BET SHE HASNT SUBMITTED THE MARRIAGE PAPERS

Edited by punam2712 - 12 years ago

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Prerna

@prerna1

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#460

nice part
liked how maaneet relationship is growing
continue soon

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