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Posted: 12 years ago
SO WHO IS BEHIND THE ARREST - BRIJ OR NAINTARA
BUT HOPE THAT SHE DOESNT SUCCEED IN HER SCHEME
AND MS ROY IS TRYING HER BEST TO ATTRACT MAAN
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thank you for all the lovely comments.😛

Hoping to update today.

Ange


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Posted: 12 years ago

Hello my dears

Another update for you

Lots of likes and comments please😳

Ange


Part 15

"Yeh kya baatameezi hai?" Maan said angrily. The girl didn't say anything and but stood there looking at him shaking like a leaf.

"Answer me, dammit. Who are you and why are you here?" he continued

The girl remained silent but came hesitantly towards Maan. She thrust a piece of paper in his hand and said. "Meri didi ko bachalo, please, Geet didi ko bachalo"

Maan stared at the girl whose head was still covered. She must be Rajji Maan thought, the girl who had served him drinks and snack when he went to the Handas.

"Please stop thinking and wasting time...you need to read the letter. I didn;t know where else to go. You have to help her" begged Rajji.

Maan looked at the crumpled piece of paper in his hand. There were tear stains all over it that had made the ink run. Geet's or Rajji's, he couldn't tell. Maybe both.

He took a big sigh, giving Rajji one last look and began reading the letter.

"Rajji, my dear sister, don't be upset but the by the time you read this letter I will have gone. Because of me, our family's reputation has been stained. Because of me, Maan was arrested. I should not have survived that day. I should have drowned in the lake and died. At least our family would have been able to mourn the loss of a child rather than the loss of their reputation. I will fix this. I will make all of this go away...I will love you always. Geet"

Maan re-read the letter. What did she mean when she said she would fix this...make it all go away?

Maan looked at Rajji, who had now uncovered her head. She was visibly upset and crying. "You see, Maanji, Geet is in trouble. She will do something and I don't know what to do"

"What do you think she means by 'I will fix this', Rajji?" Maan asked.

"I think she is going to take her own life." Pointing to the letter, Rajji said "You see here in the letter, she says that she should have died..I think that is her solution"

"Shit, does she not realise she will make things worse?" Maan said exasperatedly. "Where would she have gone, I mean to commit suicide...is there a popular place? There usually is, in a village like this" he asked matter-of-factly.

"The railway track" Rajji sobbed.

"When did you find the letter?" Maan asked

"About half an hour ago, and I came straight here"

"When did you last see Geet?" He was trying to work out how much time he had.

"About an hour ago. She went to her room, saying she was tired and wanted a rest. I went to check up on her after half an hour. That's when I found the letter" Rajji continued

"Geet will be on foot, I may still be able to catch her before she does something silly" Maan said, grabbing his keys.

"I will come with you", Rajji said.

Maan stopped Rajji. "No. It's best if you go home and pretend that nothing has happened. If your family find you and Geet missing, there will be trouble, I will bring Geet back." Maan promised as he left the room.

Rajji covered her head again and left the guest house, being careful not to be seen.

"Mr Singh, I don't see that you have much of a case here. You have some statements but the police have not been able to interview Geet. There has been no physical examination and there is no material evidence. So what does your client, Geet wish to achieve by making a false accusation against Mr Khurana?" Ms Roy asked. She had been sitting with Mr Singh, lawyer to the Handas in his office for the past hour, trying to make sense of the case. Suddenly the door of the office opened and Brij entered. He was surprised to see that Maan's lawyer was a lady. It will be easy to intimidate her, he thought. He sat down beside Ms Roy and looked at her and then Mr Singh. "Mr Handa is here to see if we can come to some arrangement", Mr Singh said."So finally we are getting to the point, Mr Singh" Ms Roy replied. "So what does Geet want?"

Maan searched up and down the railway line to see if he could spot Geet. Finally he saw a girl standing too close to the railway line and a train was fast approaching. He drove fast, up to the girl, jumped out of his jeep and pulled the girl's hand towards him. He tugged her so hard that she spun around and hit his chest. She looked up to see his anger filled eyes.

"What the hell were you trying to do Geet?" he spat out angrily, keeping her close.

"Fixing things" she whispered.

"How is taking your life, fixing things? Would you like to explain it to me?" Maan continued.

"If I am dead, then my family can mourn me, the case against you will go away and you will be free to leave HP" she said sadly.

"No you will make things ten times worse" Maan said.

Geet looked at him puzzled. "You want to know why things will be worse? If you commit suicide, people will think you did it out of shame...shame of what I did to you. The case against me becomes stronger!" he shouted as he shook her by the shoulders.

She looked down at the ground, not able to face him. She had not thought her plan through properly. Maan was right.

Suddenly realising their proximity, Maan abruptly let her go.

"Get in the jeep", Maan ordered. He ran his fingers through his hair and thanked God that he had got there in time.

He watched Geet go towards the jeep. She was about to get into the jeep, when he said "Ruko"

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Posted: 12 years ago
wow great story plz update soon
i'm really looking forward to your next part of your story
thanks for the pm

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: angeesh

<font size="3">Hello my dears</font>

<font size="3">Another update for you</font>

<font size="3">Lots of likes and comments please😳</font>

<font size="3">Ange</font>

<font size="3">
</font>

<font size="3">Part 15</font>


<font size="3"><font color="#0000ff">"Yeh kya baatameezi hai?"</font> Maan said angrily. The girl didn't
say anything and but stood there looking at him shaking like a leaf.</font>


<font size="3" color="#0000ff">"Answer me, dammit. Who are you and why are you here?" </font><font size="3">he continued</font>


<font size="3">The girl remained silent but came hesitantly towards Maan. She thrust a
piece of paper in his hand and said. <font color="#ff00ff">"Meri didi ko bachalo, please, Geet didi
ko bachalo"</font></font>


<font size="3">Maan stared at the girl whose head was still covered. She must
be Rajji Maan thought, the girl who had served him drinks and snack when he
went to the Handas.</font>


<font size="3" color="#ff00ff">"Please stop thinking and wasting time...you need to read
the letter. I didn;t know where else to go. You have to help her</font><font size="3" color="#990099">" </font><font size="3">begged Rajji.</font>


<font size="3">Maan looked at the crumpled piece of paper in his hand.
There were tear stains all over it that had made the ink run. Geet's or Rajji's,
he couldn't tell. Maybe both.</font>


<font size="3">He took a big sigh, giving Rajji one last look and began
reading the letter.</font>


<font size="3">"<font color="#ff0000">Rajji, my dear sister, don't be upset but the by the time
you read this letter I will have gone. Because of me, our family's reputation
has been stained. Because of me, Maan was arrested. I should not have survived
that day. I should have drowned in the lake and died. At least our family would
have been able to mourn the loss of a child rather than the loss of their
reputation. I will fix this. I will make all of this go away...I will love you
always. Geet"</font></font>


<font size="3">Maan re-read the letter. What did she mean when she said she
would fix this...make it all go away?</font>


<font size="3">Maan looked at Rajji, who had now uncovered her head. She was
visibly upset and crying. "<font color="#ff00ff">You see, Maanji, Geet is in trouble. She will do
something and I don't know what to do"</font></font>


<font size="3"><font color="#0000ff">"What do you think she means by 'I will fix this', Rajji?"</font>
Maan asked.</font>


<font size="3"><font color="#ff00ff">"I think she is going to take her own life."</font> Pointing to the
letter, Rajji said <font color="#ff00ff">"You see here in the letter, she says that she should have died..I
think that is her solution"</font></font>


<font size="3"><font color="#0000ff">"Shit, does she not realise she will make things worse?"</font>
Maan said exasperatedly.<font color="#0000ff"> "Where would she have gone, I mean to commit suicide...is
there a popular place? There usually is, in a village like this" </font>he asked
matter-of-factly. </font>


<font size="3"><font color="#ff00ff">"The railway track"</font> Rajji sobbed.</font>

<font size="3" color="#0000ff">"When did you find the letter?" </font><font size="3">Maan asked</font>

<font size="3" color="#ff00ff">"About half an hour ago, and I came straight here"</font>

<font size="3"><font color="#0000ff">"When did you last see Geet?"</font> He was trying to work out how much time he had.</font>

<font size="3"><font color="#ff00ff">"About an hour ago. She went to her room, saying she was tired and wanted a rest. I went to check up on her after half an hour. That's when I found the letter" </font>Rajji continued</font>


<font size="3"><font color="#0000ff">"Geet will be on foot, I may still be able to catch her before she does something silly"</font> Maan
said, grabbing his keys.</font>


<font size="3"><font color="#ff00ff">"I will come with you"</font>, Rajji said.</font>


<font size="3">Maan stopped Rajji. <font color="#0000ff">"No. It's best if you go home and pretend that nothing has
happened. If your family find you and Geet missing, there will be trouble, I will bring Geet back</font>." Maan promised as he left the room.</font>


<font size="3">Rajji covered her head again and left the guest house, being
careful not to be seen.</font>


<font size="3"></font>


<font size="3"><font color="#cc00ff">"Mr Singh, I don't see that you have much of a case here.
You have some statements but the police have not been able to interview Geet.
There has been no physical examination and there is no material evidence. So what
does your client, Geet wish to achieve by making a false accusation against Mr
Khurana?"</font> Ms Roy asked. She had been sitting with Mr Singh, lawyer to the
Handas in his office for the past hour, trying to make sense of the case. Suddenly
the door of the office opened and Brij entered. He was surprised to see that
Maan's lawyer was a lady. It will be easy to intimidate her, he thought. He sat
down beside Ms Roy and looked at her and then Mr Singh. <font color="#006633">"Mr Handa is here to
see if we can come to some arrangement"</font>, Mr Singh said.<font color="#cc00ff">"So finally we are
getting to the point, Mr Singh" Ms Roy replied. "So what does Geet want?" </font></font>


<font size="3"></font>


<font size="3">Maan searched up and down the railway line to see if he
could spot Geet. Finally he saw a girl standing too close to the railway line
and a train was fast approaching. He drove fast, up to the girl, jumped out of
his jeep and pulled the girl's hand towards him. He tugged her so hard that she
spun around and hit his chest. She looked up to see his anger filled eyes.<font color="#0000ff"></font></font>

<font size="3"><font color="#0000ff">"What
the hell were you trying to do Geet?"</font> he spat out angrily, keeping her close.</font>

<font size="3"><font color="#ff0000">"Fixing
things"</font> she whispered.<font color="#0000ff"></font></font>

<font size="3"><font color="#0000ff">"How is taking your life, fixing things? Would you like
to explain it to me?"</font> Maan continued.</font>

<font size="3"><font color="#ff0000">"If I am dead, then my family can mourn
me, the case against you will go away and you will be free to leave HP"</font> she
said sadly.</font>

<font size="3"><font color="#0000ff">"No you will make things ten times worse"</font> Maan said.</font>

<font size="3">Geet looked at
him puzzled. <font color="#0000ff">"You want to know why things will be worse? If you commit suicide,
people will think you did it out of shame...shame of what I did to you. The
case against me becomes stronger!"</font> he shouted as he shook her by the shoulders.</font>

<font size="3">She looked down at the ground, not able to face him. She had not thought her
plan through properly. Maan was right.</font>


<font size="3">Suddenly realising their proximity, Maan abruptly let her go.</font>

<font size="3"><font color="#0000ff">"Get in the jeep",</font> Maan ordered. He ran his fingers through his hair and
thanked God that he had got there in time.</font>

<font size="3">He watched Geet go towards the jeep.
She was about to get into the jeep, when he said <font color="#0000ff">"Ruko"</font></font>


loved it waiting for maaneet moments
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update
Loved it
So it was rajji
Geet trying to commit suicide!!!
Thank God Maan saved geet
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Finally they met face to face
Rajji was brave to come to Maan for help
Maan was in time to save her, but what will they do now
What does Brij want - money
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Posted: 12 years ago
read ur ff in one go
its fabulous
enjoyed every bit of it
please do pm me if u can 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
so th girl is rajji...

geet tried to suicide...

maan saved her...

bt what will brij do nw...

y maan told her to stop...

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Posted: 12 years ago
part 15
hope Geet tells him about the case...
cont soon dear...

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