Pt5/6'Forbidden Fire'(A Devil's Tale)Pg5/40

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Desigirls12

@Desigirls12

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#311

wow lovely lovely update ji.. te way my devil ki answer and his geet is confused with his behaviour, and geet thinking bad abt my devil and proving her wrong my devil asking tat dancer to strip was so lovely.. geet still u didt see my devil ki heart, soon u will feel it.. te way geet is accusing my devil and he is asking her to strip was so so so lovely.. i love te update so much ji..a

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Twilightsparkle

@Twilightsparkle

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#312

hai di wow wow wow that was really

awesome

brllliant

nice

good

excellent

i really like it di

u know y

the man who is obessed with lust will wont think twise to destroy anyones life.

but here is it was very diff and good one

maan wants to destroy her it was clear but with her own wish

i was just 😲

in the whole universe will any one approve for the destruction of there own by there own willingness??????.

maan dont want to use her for his needs

but at lost he wants to destroy her

and strip???

now its time for geet to fight with her inner turmoli

really good written di

ab dekthe hai

devil ya angel

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sona rai

@sona-rai

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#313

awesome lovely update DEVIL MONSTER MAAN

hmmm THE APPLE ON FIRE?

hawww i missed it oopps.ok now WHY?

haey lookslike its my HEART burning on ANIEE'S DEVIL'S FIRE🤣🤣🤣.

ok i'll be serious yar 🤔🤔🤓🤓🤓

NO IDEA 😔yar.

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prati

@Luvforever

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#314

Is he realy goin to force her?? Wat actualy he wants its confusing... & d burning apple no clue maybe related to dat apple of adam & eve nt sure... Cont soon...

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#315

Awesome partDevil ke dimag kya chal raha hai pata nahiOpps geet thought he asked to strip...sighed when the dancer started to strip...but devil is not interested in that dancer but in geetPoor geet ...payback time...strip for him ...Glad that he took her to his room...Again dinner ka plan kharab ho gaya...Ab geet kay karegi...she is in her night dress...interesting...how hse gonna do it

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