Pt5/6'Forbidden Fire'(A Devil's Tale)Pg5/40

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kareena32

@kareena32

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#291

wow superb update dear love it

cant express how it was very well written

your awesome annie

i think apple represent a forbidden temtation

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Faiza

@DreamyPrincess1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#292

why is that apple on fire in that pic.?

Muje bhi dena hoga kia jawab???

Logically its all about fruity madness & that too with Fire shows Passion, so u have to carry passion which may be burn u along itself...

Again Geet ruin their dinner date with stupid acts, questions, then rasing her voice against him, denying him in all way, as she is herself blow the firm in him with her small small acts...

"Strip for me" last precap se hi laga tha kuch esa hi hoga... but never thought it would be like that, which I love it, Unexpected & unpredicatble like Our DEVIL, who just want her, But in what way I really don't know still... BADLY need Devil's Pov now Aniee!!!

what is playing his mind, which never at rest in any moment of his life... always analyzing all around himself specially HER!!!

This update have some detail scene as restruant to suite of hotel for them.. I feel its really need as its show Maan's... hmmm... He is not Interseted in other strippers... he can have any but Y he want her ONLY???

Again Endless Question...

"Good. If you are scared of something then you should do it again and again, until that thing can no longer frighten you."

U can't apply this in all acts yr... How can we do it again again which afraid me... Please explain it to me!!!

Thank u for updating these unusual stories!!!

Good Luck!!!

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tehzeeb25

@tehzeeb25

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Posted: 12 years ago

#293

woo di amazing updt ...luvd it ...
He is so unbelievable... Wat will she do now...she said yes ... I have noo clue bout ur apple Qes ...updt sooon plezzz ...eagleyyy ...plezzz

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Preet

@Preet.Kc

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#294

wow what a story even more interesting update by update 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Annie you are the first writer that make me love maan and geet and i mean it.

This story is my favorite story of mann-geet.

It's unique, outstanding, mindblowing ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️

LOVED IT TOO MUCH 🤗 🤗

I like your writing style, keep it up 👍🏼👍🏼

the pecap was really interesting, but i know with you expecte the unexpected.

Continue as soon as possible.

oh, i love the benner.

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pushpi

@pushpi

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#295

Oh the poor thing. He's doing the very thing that will drive her off in the opposite direction

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anmirza

@anmirza

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#296

Loved the update! I am assuming the symbolism holds for the fact that temptations burns u through the fire within!

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maanmeet1

@maanmeet1

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#297

Y u stopped? Nt fair...awesome updt...devil in full mood...geet is so scared...wanna knw more abt maan...

If u r scared of something den u should do it often...geet will faint ...

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Khusluvsmaaneet

@Khusluvsmaaneet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#298

Wow..nice update...
Maan proves evrythng in a unique style..
Is he really going to make geet strip for him?or he will stop her?
Plz send me pmz..

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jasraj123

@jasraj123

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#299

WHAT TO SAY I AM THINKING😕😕😕😕 AND RUNNING OUT OF WORDS😆
😆OMGGG DEVIL TOOK HER TO RESTAURANT FOR DINNER DATE
YEH TO SR MANANE LAG PADHA🤣🤣

I KNOW I KNOW IT WILL NOT HAPPEN AS WE HAVE ANOTHER DEVIL ANIEE😆😆😆😆 WHOL WILL NOT LET THIS HAPPEN AND WILL MAKE US RESTLESS TILL THE END OF FF🤣🤣

SERIOUSLY LOVE THE WHOLE COMMUNICATION BETWEEN MAANEET
OMGGG HE DID SAID STRIP AND I WAS LIKE WHAT TO GEET😕😕😕😕BUT NOT FOR HER
BUT THEN HE CAME BACK AGAIN TO SAME ONE😆😆

POOR GEET JUST CAN'T DO ANYTHING😉😉😉😉
YAAR SHE HAS TO GET OVER HER FEAR NAAA
I WONDER HOW SHE WILL HANDLE APNA SHER MAAN😆😆😆

NOWWW WHAT A CLIFF HANGER HAANNN😉😉

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Mitu

@Mituag

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#300

O god ur devil make my heart beats faster with each dilogue

uff as always one more awesome update

when that belly dancer strip i thought no this is not possible maan will see other girl in annie diii ff never

in other line u profe me right

now i m scared for geet
i m wondaring what will be geet do now
but my heart say somthing happen and maan stop her

u question answer on page 53 first post

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