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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sheetalvasa




Update ke baare me...kya karu ke aap jaldi se likh do?

oh..for that, just pray ke mera dimaag sahi direction me kam kare..
And u'll get all the updates vry soon..:-)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Shonameet

oh..for that, just pray ke mera dimaag sahi direction me kam kare..
And u'll get all the updates vry soon..:-)


Maine abhi se pray karna suru kar diya hai...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sheetalvasa



Maine abhi se pray karna suru kar diya hai...

thank u..:)
am really trying my best to update..shayad aaj ek update de pau..bt kaunsa ye nhi bata sakti..havnt decided yet:-)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Shonameet

thank u..:)
am really trying my best to update..shayad aaj ek update de pau..bt kaunsa ye nhi bata sakti..havnt decided yet:-)


Thanks...waiting...
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Posted: 11 years ago
3. Ye nain ek anjaan se jo mile..(I)

Gumsum gumsum gupchup..
Gumsum gupchup..
Gumsum gumsum gupchup..
Gumsum gupchup..
Hulchal hulchal kho gai teri..
Honth hai tere chup..
Khalbal khalbal ho gai teri..
Baithi hai tu gupchup..
Pyare pyare chehre ne karde ishara..
Dekha teri aankhon ne hai spana koi pyara..
Hum se gori na tu sharma..
Aa keh de hum se zara..
Hum se gori na tu sharma..
Aa keh de hum se zara..


She stood in her room..unsure if she should do this or not. Her heart wanted her to do it, where as her mind was warning her against it!
Atlast her heart won & she moved towards the window. Moving the curtains aside, she peeped out.. But didnt find anything. Her egarness got better of her..and she took a chance & opened the balcony door. Hesitatingly she came out in the balcony and looked around..searching for something. But was disappointed when she didnt found the object of her interest anywhere in the view!
She stood there for a few seconds..hoping to get a glimps atleast..but then thought of going back. She was about to turn back..when she spoted, what she was searching for.
Instantlly her breathing quickened in nervousness and in fear of getting caught like that! She got so scared that she rushed back in her room. Once inside...she leaned on the door closing it behind..breathing heavily. Putting a hand on her heart, she closed her eyes..trying to clam her uneven beats.


Kehna hi kya..
Ye nain ek anjaan se jo mile..
Chalne lage..
Mohabbat ke jaise ye silsile..
Arma naye aise dil me khile..
Jinko kabhi main na jaanu..
Wo humse hum unse kabhi na mile..
Kaise mile dil na jaanu..
Ab kya kare..
Kya naam le..
Kaise unhe main pukaroon..


She had been searching for him..but he was no where around. And when she was about to go back..all of a sudden, he came out of his house. And the most shocking thing was..he looked up at her direction!! As if he already knew that she was standing there.
She felt caught and in her nervousness..she rushed in, without glancing back at him.
Though she was quick to move away..but somewhere her heart was telling her that he had saw her! What if he got to know that she was looking for him only?? That thought itself was enough to increase her heartbeats!


It wasnt the first time that she has done this. She often found herself peeping to get a glimps of him. It has become a habit now.
She didnt know when & how all this started exactly. But it was that day..when she saw him for the first time...and everything started to change suddenly!


Kehna hi kya..
Ye nain ek anjaan se jo mile..
Chalne lage..
Mohabbat ke jaise ye silsile..
Arma naye aise dil me khile..
Jinko kabhi main na jaanu..
Wo humse hum unse kabhi na mile..
Kaise mile dil na jaanu..
Ab kya kare..
Kya naam le..
Kaise unhe main pukaroon...


Till a week before..she was living her normal life! She was busy in her own little world..unaware of anything else around her. Never had she thought that one moment..just one moment can change her life! Never had she thought that just by looking at a pair of stranger eyes..she will change..for forver..!


Flashback:
She was playing with aayu & other kids. In between, she casually looked around & noticed two boys who were at a little distance from them. She didnt thought much about it and continued with their game.
She was about to throw the next ball..but stoped as she saw those boys coming their way. She waited for them to pass by. As they were passing her..she felt a gaze on her and on impulse..she turned her face..only to look directly in a pair of chocolate brown eyes.
She hadnt intended to stare..but for some unknow reason..she wasnt able to move her eyes. And strangely..the owner of those chocolate brown pair also didnt averted his gaze.
There was something in those eyes..something which she still cant explain. She kept looking at those brown eyes which for some reason, were making her restless..but not uncomfertable..!
Their eye contact broke when the other boy called him. Finally he moved his eyes away from her..and left. But she thought that she saw a smile on his face..!

That was the first time she had noticed him! She didnt knew who he was? Where he lived?? What was his name?? She simply knew nothing about him!
Though he was gone..but those brown eyes lingered in her memory..!


Continued below..
Edited by Shonameet - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Pehli hi nazar me Kuch hum kuch tum..
Ho jaate hai yun gum..
Naino se barse rimjhim rimjhim..
Humpe pyar ka saawan..
Sharm thodi thodi humko..
Aaye toh nazarein jhuk jaaye..
Sitam thoda thoda humpe..
Shokh hawa bhi kar jaaye..
Aisi chale..
Aanchal ude..
Dil me ek tufan uthe..
Hum toh lutt gaye..
Khade hi khade..


After that encounter with him, she often saw him! At first she thought it to be a coincident but then she always found him around, whenever she would be playing with aayu. And sometimes even in the park too!
She got suspicious..but then from her friend, she got to know that he lived in the same colony and was her neighbour actually. So she thought that may be he has been always around..and it was just her who never noticed him before!


But she swear that she had found him looking at her many times. Whenever she would be outside, in the porch, on terrice or in the balcony.. She had noticed that he too would be around always..either on his terrice or in his balcony. All these realisations constantly made her awaer of him & his presence!
And she never realised when she herself started expecting/searching him everywhere! May be it was coz of the knowleged that he must be looking at her from some corner!


She wanted to confirm doubts. So she used to hide behind the curtains & used to peep out..if she found him in the balcony.. Just to see if he would look at her balcony or not. And sure enough..she had found him looking at her room..may be searching for her!


That realisation made her nervouss and also an unkown feeling took over her heart..which was totally new to her!
After that..her sense used to get alert on having him around..however hard she tried she couldnt ignore his presence.
If he would be there, she would run away from there feeling shy & nervouss. She wanted to look at him..but never got the courage, fearing what she may see in those chocolate brown eyes.


There was this hide & seek game going on between them. She would look & search for him and on spotting him..she would hide away.
And when he would kept looking at her house to get a glimps of her..she would be standing behind the curtains..peeping through it! And if by chance they came across..they would paas by quickly and she wouldnt even dare to look at him that time!


Kehna hi kya..
Ye nain ek anjaan se jo mile..
Chalne lage..
Mohabbat ke jaise ye silsile..
Arma naye aise dil me khile..
Jinko kabhi main na jaanu..
Wo humse hum unse kabhi na mile..
Kaise mile dil na jaanu..
Ab kya kare..
Kya naam le..
Kaise unhe main pukaroon..


Present:
After claming down her heart.. She dared to remove the curtains to peep once again..after being sure that he was finally gone..she opened the door & came out..and checked around once again.
she was relishing the fresh air and enjoying the view.. Her breath caught in her throat.. when she saw him leaning on his balcony door..staring at her!
And this time she was too shock to run away !


Kehna hi kya...

Edited by Shonameet - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Naya ehsaas...usko chup chup ke dekhna...dekhte hi chup jana...hay ,marjavan!!

Unse Mili Nazar
Ki Mere Hosh Udh Gaye
Aisa Hua Asar
Ki Mere Hosh Udh Gaye
Jab Woh Mile Mujhe Paheli Baar
Unse Ho Gayi Aakhen Chaar
Paas Na Baithe Pal Bhar
Phir Bhi Ho Gaya Unse Pyar
Itni Thi Bas Khabar
Ki Mere Hosh Udh Gaye
Unki Taraf Dil Jhukne Laga
Dil Mein Jagaye Sau Toofan
Dekh Ke Unki Surat Ko
Hay Rah Gayi Mein Hairan
Tadpun Idhar Udhar
Ki Mere Hosh Udh Gaye...

Ab to hai...hello...karva do ...

Edited by sheetalvasa - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely update! Well written! Superb song! update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely update !!!
superbly written n ofcourse song is one of my fav !!!

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