Pt4'Forbidden Fire'(A Devil's Tale) Thrd3 Pg23

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Khusluvsmaaneet

@Khusluvsmaaneet

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#201

Maan got her lie and gave her the gun to kill herself..
He wants to ruin her soul, her heart dat means he wants her to feel the same as he feels about her..
He is hurt after seeing hatred towards him in her eyes..
poor geet is not getting anythng..totally confused..
Geet ne ye kya kiya?dinner table mess up kar diya..ab devil kya karega..

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anks_ams

@anks_ams

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#202

OMG.. I am speechless.. Another devil story!!!!

Just loved it !!! Amazing concept!

Continue soon!! waiting eagerly...

The way you wrote the conversation just bowled me over!!

"Yes, I want to ruin you. But I want to ruin you more than that. Few minutes back, I could have ruined your body, anyone could have done that. And I am not anybody, I am Maan Singh Khurana. My desire is to ruin your heart, your soul, your everything. I want to ruin to the extent where you will find peace nowhere but to burn in this fire along with me, on your own accord."

just loved it:)

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music

@music_girl

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#203

😎 I love Maan's speech of what made him a man out of MSK

Aha...Geet, big talks only...but I feel sorry for her...😒 She's a pour soul...

I wonder what is Maan's future plans...

👏 awesome update...continue soon please 👍🏼

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#204

Again new home...? 😊

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Arthi

@ar_art

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#205

Wat abt maan'S family... No Dadi here I think... God geet has to angry him all the time.. But can't blame her too anyways waiting ur next dear...

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Gurti_Maaneet

@Gurti_Maaneet

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#206

Awsome update
loved it
Maan is strange

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#207

Wow…400 likes….Congrats Aniee

Loved the part

First I thought she will really try to shoot herself with gun….

Their convo. Is super…yes he is a man of uncertainty, unpredictable

Ufff…..ab kya hoga …geet ne to dinner ki wat laga di

TFP

Cont soon

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monika

@monikaseth

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#208

superb like all ways mind blowing convocation between maan geet

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AmElOdI

@AmElOdI

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#209

Maaneet conversation superb👏
maan is behaving like insane prsn
bt i am totally in love with this devil...he he
N Congrats for 400 likes