Pt4'Forbidden Fire'(A Devil's Tale) Thrd3 Pg23

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d_sonia

@d_sonia

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#181

Awesome update
Loved it
Haye maan was amazing...what an attitude...
Poor geet is so scared...
Continue soon
Waiting

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SRK

@KINGKHANFAN

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#182

Congrats for 400 likes

Great update👏👏

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love2_soma

@love2_soma

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#183

oh no geet...why u r tempting d devil to do something with u...he is devil...he will burn u wih him...beware...

awesome n beautiful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Natasha

@drunkiiebabe

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#184

fantastic update thanks for the pm

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anmirza

@anmirza

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#185

Woah!!! To be honest not only Geet I was also confused with what Maan was saying but he is different than all your other devils which is great! But this time the devil has too much depth in his words n everything he says has some sort of philosophy behind it!

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Divya

@april12

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#186

Part 4!!!!!

He gives her a gun to prove her 'I'd rather die statement'.

oh my

and all this talk of fire and burning confusing our Geet

she threw everything down.

What will maan do?

waiting for the next one

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PujaShree

@PujaShree

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#187

ohh God Annieee kya mast update tha...:):):)
Its Awsme...:):):):):):):):) Geet not only u ,evn me too unable to undrstand what he is upto...
EK AJEEB SA JUNOON HAI MAAN KI AANKHON MEIN, EK AJEEB C KASHISH...
But jo b hai I LOVE HIM...;);):):)
AHAA THAT SCENE WAS AMAZNG whn he handed Pistol in Geet's Hand n C back out...SACHHHIII MAANNN U R DIFFRENT Kuch toh baat hai tummmee...:) )
Thnx for succhhaaa wondrful update Dear...:):)
UPDATE SOONNN,,,...:)

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Downhill

@Downhill

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#188

simply brilliant.loved it..absolutely breathtaking..loving the dialogues...keep writing😃

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jenny

@ajenn

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#189

Congratulation Annie for your increasing Likes!!!!

Maaneet's convo was really superb. It is getting interesting.

Maan sounds very dangerous. He wants to burn Geet together with him. Very scary. He doesn't seems to understand the feelings since the day he saw Geet. He is hating the feelings and for that he don't mind burning Geet and himself together to get rid of the unnamed feelings.

Poor Geet she is trapped with Maan. She is already scared, here Maan increase it with his extreme speech. Moreover he gave her gun to kill herself.

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#190

"You know, this is the difference between you and me." He walked towards the table and threw the gun lazily.

"When I say something, I mean it. This is what makes me Maan Singh khurana,"

"Always do what you say or this world won't take you seriously and eventually a point would come when even you would also stop taking yourself seriously."

beautifully update the obsession has started the way he speak to her he wants her to hate him like he hate him self why is it we could never hate your devil he is just utter sexy devilish hot and dangerous awesome update loved it

Edited by dumas - 12 years ago