Pt4'Forbidden Fire'(A Devil's Tale) Thrd3 Pg23

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billy_ritu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#211

awesome

nd congrats for 400 likes

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jasraj123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#212

AWESOME UPDATE AS USUAL
OMGGG MAAN JUST DID NO LEAVE ANY CHANCE TO MAKE GEET MUM😆😆😆

THE WAY HE MADE HER REALIZE THAT IT IS NOT EASY TO GIVE UP LIFE AS SAYING
WAS WOWWW ANIEE
UR WAY OR WRITING AND EACH WORD SHOWS IT'S IMPORTANCE

OMGGG GEET THREW EVERYTHING FROM THE TABLE

WONDER WHAT WILL MAAN DO NOW😕😕😕😕

WAITING FOR NEXT UPDATE
I WAS EXPECTING UPDATES FASTER BUT I GUESS NOT HAIN😕😕😕

I WILL TRY TO CALL U TODAY

MISSING U SOOO MUCH🤗

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kiran_rati

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Posted: 12 years ago

#213

vow awesome dear

u r an marvelous writer

this is from my heart dear

u r an rocking writer👏

thanx for the pm

cont soon

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maaneet5

@maaneet5

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Posted: 12 years ago

#214

Wow Nice update

well maan kya karna chahtha hi

Caught her lie and so that he wanted to prove her wrong..

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ExpectoPatronum

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Posted: 12 years ago

#215

oops!!! geet is in a mess now...😲 and maan's anger has reached its peak😡 ab kya hoga geet ka???😆

still i luv the devil in maan!!!❤️😈

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keerthi90

@keerthi90

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Posted: 12 years ago

#216

Beautiful update!!!!!! Iss devil ke baare main kya kahe...jitna kahe utna kam hi hain...

He wants to hate her because of the feelings she stirred in him...he wants to destroy her peace of mind,her din ka chain and raaton ki neend but still in his own devil style...kya style hain yaar uska...annie's devil...😆...

Haa...yeh geet ne kya kar diya😲...pure khane ko neeche gira diya usne...aur yeh devil toh gusse se lal pila ho raha hai...ab geet ko kaun bachayega babaji......

Update next part soon dear...Waiting for it...