Pt4'Forbidden Fire'(A Devil's Tale) Thrd3 Pg23 - Page 16

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Posted: 12 years ago

mysterious devil ...ALAS ..!!
geet babes you won't be able to understand this Insane devil soo soon ..

after all last 2 season mien humien bhi devil aadhi story aur 2 twisty turns ke baad hi thora insanely sensible or predictable laga tha ..

tou yahan tou abhi sirf 4 updates huyi hai ...

me wondering jab tak yeh wahan tak puhanchega mien zinda bachoongi ya nhi ...🤢🤢

Aniee di ...u better watchout ur dialogues plzz ..😳😳
its soo damn effecting that i lost myself in them ...!!

Here we go. Humans! Big intentions, even bigger claims and a very small heart and even smaller courage.." ..

bravo from the begin-inning ...👏👏

i am just remembering one quote here ..😊

"..a man will do what he will but not will as he will .."

uff he actually asked her to kill herself ...truely a devil he is ...

"When I say something, I mean it. This is what makes me Maan Singh khurana,"

n thats what i like about him the most ...😳😳

I want to hate you...half as much as I hate myself."

me wondering he WANTS to ?
n why HALF ..??

My desire is to ruin your heart, your soul, your everything. I want to ruin to the extent where you will find peace nowhere but to burn in this fire along with me, on your own accord."

tou eventually he wants her to be with him on her own accord ...
waoo what an explanation for ur heartily wish ..

awesom narration di ...
this is getting interesting to know ..

dialogues were as good as ever ..
as i said i was drown into it ...😃

devil is going grt pace ...me loving it ..⭐️⭐️

Congoz 4 reaching 400
may u have much more than that ...

plss keep updating regularly ...

waiting for nxt as always ..

Luv Ya
Sobia ..🤗



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Posted: 12 years ago
nice part...
really yaar maan is insane...
poor geet she dosent evn know wat is hr fault bt still shr is bearing his punishment...
she must b cursing d tym whn she met him...
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Posted: 12 years ago



Edited by singh24 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome Update
Continue Soon
Thank You So Much For The PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
this part was totally amazing
the words u chose was different
maans way of expressing his burning fire
n to make her feel it
he is showing his devil nature
loved this devil so much
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Posted: 12 years ago
congrats on new thread dear
wow this sure is getting interesting
well lets see how much wil they both burn in this fire man
or will one of them perish even before they know whats happening to them
he doesnt know what he is feeling since he saw her
was it love lust attraction infatuation
but one thing is for sure he doesnt like whats happening within him or what she is emotions she is arousing in him
well am surprised thatshe hasnt got what he means
but be sure he will burn you and himself in this fire for sure
cheers for pm

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Posted: 12 years ago
wow great story plz update soon
what is going to happend in your story next
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks fo the PM ...
the devil is in full action ...
waiting for the next update
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome part...love maans dialogues...wonder what maan will do next...plz update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
okay geet too became sherni in front of her sher ... luved the obessession in devil. she shud have turned the tiger to see devil's reaction he wud have let her die so easily ... lets see wats next happens how is hse going to bear devils wrath

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