Pt4'Forbidden Fire'(A Devil's Tale) Thrd3 Pg23 - Page 18

Originally posted by: PariNain

burahhh
ballay ballay ballay ballay
I am the first I am the firsttt
wowww after a looonnnggg time I am the first I am the first. I ammm the firsssttt
aaha aaha aaha
uff faizie back to business, I mean back to comment
wohoo Devil aaya devil aaya
O god Not again Faizie
back to comment otherwise readers and Aniee will surely throw u out
I am sorry guys. me back to comment
but did u ppl knw I am the...
ooye put ur jooties down
I am not saying I am the first. I was saying I am a die hard fan of Devil
poori baat to sun lia karo

ok ab serious wala comment
here we goes
welcome to the world of Devil
well all of u are officially welcomed by Aniee in the world of devil where its a strong chance that you will fall in love with Devil.
I am already in love with Devil not now but from Devil in love.
and this Devil is more ruthless than ever
he kidnapped her just for a dinner
he threat her he can do anything to her
and he is right in his words. Yes he can do
But he did not why is the question which is in Geet and no doubt in every reader's Mind
well he is a devil and he has his own ways so we cant perdict anything abt him
hain na
he is unpredictable but the way he asked her is she determined on what she said
and Oh here come the DEVIL
he is giving her his gun to shoot herself because she said she cant breath in the same air he is breathing😲
so rude and cruel
he is giving her choice
nice 👏

"Right over your brain, who is compelling you to run away from me?" He asked as his hands guided the gun towards her head.

"Or, right above your heart, who is convincing you to despise me," He asked, placing the gun right above her heart. But she jerked the gun away.

I doubt he has some feelings abt her
but here he comes again

he has a doubt abt his feelings towards him

but the helplessness in his words tells us clearly that he has some feeling for her

right now he is denying it and he is giving the name of HATE to his feelings but its love

or should I say the start of some love????

but again we cant perdict anything abt devil

for u Aniee

fabulous update amazing

you knw what one thing I love abt you devils is "Their philosophy of life". their dialogues. no doubt how rude or ruthless they are but the way they see the world is a very correct way and this is what I like abt your devils.

2nd this devil of your is totally different from previous devils. more curel, more ruthless more bitter and hope more possessive

and this took my heart

I want to hate you...half as much as I hate myself."

"I will never forgive you for this as long as the word hatred exists,"

"The way you are affecting me with your eyes and with the fear in your eyes, I will never forgive that."

"Believe me; I will never forgive you as long as you exist,

as long as I exist,

as long as this world exists,"

and these

"Yes, I want to ruin you. But I want to ruin you more than that. Few minutes back, I could have ruined your body, anyone could have done that. And I am not anybody, I am Maan Singh Khurana. My desire is to ruin your heart, your soul, your everything. I want to ruin to the extent where you will find peace nowhere but to burn in this fire along with me, on your own accord."

Originally posted by: drrose31

😊

After reading this part .. only one sentence is coming to my mind "he is the man of words"'😉

Caught her lie and so that he wanted to prove her wrong..

"Yes, I would punish you, as long as I live, I would never forgive you for what you have done.

Was thinking what did she do ???😕

And his ans' thud🤢

You burned every inch of my existence in a blistering fire so mercilessly that within two days. I want to burn this whole world in it, along with me. I will not forgive you for this, as long as this fire exists."

Ops geet is completely trapped ..

"I will never forgive you for this as long as the word hatred exists,"

"The way you are affecting me with your eyes and with the fear in your eyes, I will never forgive that."

"Believe me; I will never forgive you as long as you exist,

as long as I exist,

as long as this world exists,"

maan is totally out of mind..😲

My desire is to ruin your heart, your soul, your everything. I want to ruin to the extent where you will find peace nowhere but to burn in this fire along with me, on your own accord.

So basically maan wants her to love him'

Hailaa what courage geet showed messing with his dinner plans😲

wondering will maan be soft with her after all this mess???

well umm yes... dinner tou karna hai naa... 😉

awesome part aniee 👏

love yaa

Originally posted by: 786muskaan

heyyy Anieee yah0oo0o0o
finally u updated ...ufff after almost 2 dayz wait sara wondering*😲
me doing bhangraaa sab ajao letzz doo Maaneet's signature bhangra step😃
chalo my tummy full hogaya uff dinner karnay ke baad comment karnay ka maza araha😳
Aniee soch rahi hogiii comment to kar sara😆😆
oyee excitment to batanay deee⭐️
pheww

now my comment
u rocked aniee
tumhe to hollywood mai hona chahyee LOL😃
haiyeee me insanely,madly,and umm apni taraf sy laga doo ...in love wid this devil what to doo your updates are sooo
damn unpredictable ...mai nay kuch orr socha orr result haiyeee😕
haaawww😲😲😲😲😲
ye kyaaa "Here it is. I say that from today onwards you would have to spend each and every minute with me. You said that you would die instead of spending a minute with me. Now go on and kill yourself"
khud hi ussy gun dediii just to test her determination
haiyeee ayse devil ke sath rahtay kis ko marna acha lage gaaa...😳
poor geet traped in the devil's den😲😲
haiyeee me inlove wid these linesss
"When I say something, I mean it. This is what makes me Maan Singh khurana,'
"Always do what you say or this world won't take you seriously and eventually a point would come when even you would stop taking yourself seriously"
thats true MSK this makes u our ruthless devil
but one thing jo wo bhi nahi janta that he is in love wid this angel
"You burned every inch of my existence in a blistering fire so mercilessly that within two days. I want to burn this whole world in it, along with me. I will not forgive you for this, as long as this fire exists.
i love this madness he wants her to burn wid him in this forbbiden fire the way he is burning...
kabhi kabhi kisi kay aik nazar dekhnay say hum apna ab kuch kho bethtay han orr jis aag ki garmi ko kabhi mahsoos bhi nahi karna chahtay jaanay anjaanay usshi mai jal ke sukoon ata hai 😉😉 hailla mai to poet ban gayiii Anieee😆😆
here the devil comes again ufff koi too rok looo
"Yes, I want to ruin you. But I want to ruin you more than that. Few minutes back, I could have ruined your body, anyone could have done that. And I am not anybody, I am Maan Singh Khurana. My desire is to ruin your heart, your soul, your everything. I want to ruin to the extent where you will find peace nowhere but to burn in this fire along with me, on your own accord." OMG OMG anieee wanna hug you tight 😳😳

ufff want to comment more n more but phir baki sab ka kya hoga lolzz
loved ur update to the core
my unpredictable queen btw u deserves this title
now eagerly waiting for the next
more hotness n intense n passion on its wayyy yahooo
chal now me going finally
luv u lotsss
tight wala hug to my Devil😳

Originally posted by: srirad

Congrats for 400 likes

Great update👏👏

Maaneet conversation superb👏..Loved their dialogues..👍🏼

Maan is real devil..He is full of desire and want geet to burn with him..Geet is really trapped

Geet is so innocent..not able to predict maan...

Maan does whatever he thinks...Poor geet not able to think anything..Full of confused😕

Omg😲...He scared geet by gaving gun..😆

opps. Geet throw-ed all foods. Maan is full of anger😲..Now what he is going to do..How will geet escape..

Continue soon

Eagerly waiting for next😊