OS- Just Like Any Other Day - Page 2

nice start
i think geet is narrating the story...
continue soon

Beautiful
Enchanting
Musical
Sweet
Precise
Well sketched
Endearing
Short
Cute
Meritorious
Brilliant
Astounding &
Enigmatic


I guess the person described is a man coz its mentioned that he /she drove a bike

Any plans of continuing this OS?

wow amazing. Just with sm few no
of lines u stirred so many emotions
in me. Really its awesome. I don't knw whether u wil continue or nt bt pls gv the other person's pov also.

Wow Shikha! I don't know what to say it! It's probably the shortest thing I've read which has so many emotions in it. :) And the last paragraph pinched my heart. :( It's so painful when someone is the centre of your world and you don't even exist for them! Alas! All's not happily-ever-after in real life! Sigh. :(

Great piece to have woven in just ten mintues! :)

Originally posted by: Cloud9.

Ki hoya🤗

kamini..why do u have to write such tragic stuff, so beautifully..u should roasted in hell for attempting such stuff😡

Originally posted by: palindrome

I counted the lines btw..😆

I always love short and sweet to read...and besides being short and sweet it was very much impactful...

Believe me you have created magic with in ten minutes...😛

Coming from you these lines are really a honor. Come on baby gimme a hug *Spreads hands in slow motion like SRK*😆

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

you know what dera

you r the best writer

who got this ability to write

most simple story in most amazing and

in most different way

be it any of your writing

let me tell you one thing about me

i m very lazy reader

as i love to read but same time want something easy

so i don't have to use my brain and imagination during reading

and this both thing

always have to be in reader while reading your work

so i always tried to leave it

but can't able to do that

that 's the magic of your writing

so here i m again reading

and

yesss

it's really

to read it more

as may be

you write more

Thanks a lot for the wonderful comment Nishu🤗
I hope to write and entertain you guys more. Thanks for reading

Originally posted by: Tyro

beautiful...

Thank you :)

Originally posted by: Alicia2001

wow great story plz update soon
thanks for the pm

I am sorry buddy this is a One shot. So this story is completed.

Originally posted by: sanjh89

Random...
Endearing...

love

SANJH

Thank you :)

Originally posted by: CutieTeju

So nice... Liked it.😃

Thank you :)

Originally posted by: mansi.tripathi

nice start
i think geet is narrating the story...
continue soon

I would leave it to your imagination as in who's narrating the story and yeah this is a One shot so this story is completed :)