OS- Just Like Any Other Day

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ki hoya🤗
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Thirteen sentences to tell the entire story..
I had never read so beautiful till now...
Each sentence stirred a different emotion in my heart..
I was smiling reading the start..
I felt warm when I imagined the bike scene..
Something pinched my heart after reading the pillar line..
and tears welled in my eyes at the end...
This was amazing dear!!!!
Hats off to you...👏
and thank you so much for writing something like this...😊
Edited by palindrome - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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now who is this unnoticeable person

but he seems to know everything about her
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: t_areeb

now who is this unnoticeable person


but he seems to know everything about her


Or it can be a she you know😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: palindrome

Thirteen sentences to tell the entire story..

I had never read so beautiful till now...
Each sentence stirred a different emotion in my heart..
I was smiling reading the start..
I felt warm when I imagined the bike scene..
Something pinched my heart after reading the pillar line..
and tears welled in my eyes at the end...
This was amazing dear!!!!
Hats off to you...👏
and thank you so much for writing something like this...😊


I didn't count the lines and went back to do just that after reading your comment.😆
I wrote it because of two things. It was plaguing my mind since Y'day. After today I can't write for at least ten days again. I wrote it in ten minutes literally.😆
Glad you enjoyed it🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Cloud9.


I didn't count the lines and went back to do just that after reading your comment.😆
I wrote it because of two things. It was plaguing my mind since Y'day. After today I can't write for at least ten days again. I wrote it in ten minutes literally.😆
Glad you enjoyed it🤗

I counted the lines btw..😆
I always love short and sweet to read...and besides being short and sweet it was very much impactful...
Believe me you have created magic with in ten minutes...😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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you know what dera
you r the best writer
who got this ability to write
most simple story in most amazing and
in most different way
be it any of your writing

let me tell you one thing about me
i m very lazy reader
as i love to read but same time want something easy
so i don't have to use my brain and imagination during reading
and this both thing
always have to be in reader while reading your work

so i always tried to leave it
but can't able to do that
that 's the magic of your writing

so here i m again reading

and
yesss
it's really
to read it more
as may be
you write more
Edited by 9n9i9s9h9u9 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow great story plz update soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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So nice... Liked it.😃

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