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Short OS Might complete today or next week with All ffs

She vowed to herself that she would never step a foot in this place. She vowed to herself that she would forget she ever had a relationship with this place. She vowed to herself she would never cross his path. She vowed to herself she would never see his face. She vowed to herself she would never come to him. And the biggest vow she made was that she would never need him. As she stepped inside the Khurana Mansion sweet and horrible memories were coming back to her. They day she first enterered as a bride and the day she was humiliated and thrown out as a piece of garbage. That day she had decided she would never even turn to her past.

She held herself together and rang the bell. She had to do this. It was the last resort. Nothing not even her vows were not more important than this. The door opened and Nakul, the loyal servant of the mansion opened the door. He was shocked to seeing her there. He had tears in his eyes as he saw her as his daughter. He noticed one difference though. She was not the same person. The sindoor the mangal sutra was missing. She was pale and thinner from before. Her eyes had bags like she had not slept and cried for ages.
'Geet bitiyaa' Nakul started. She allowed her to enter when Geet stood where she was.
'Kya woh yaha par hai?' Geet asked knowing his timings he should be walking down the stairs right now. And there Geet saw him. Her ex love, ex life snd ex husband coming down the stairs towards the dining table. Nothing about him had changed. His demeanour, his walking style, his dress sense. It was like he was the same Maan Singh Khurana. But what Geet failed to notice was his eyes were full of angguish and anger and pain.
'Nakul, kaun hai' Maan asked seeing Nakul at the door. Nakul moved out the way and there he saw her. His ex wife, ex life and ex love.
'Geet' he whispered shocked at her being there. He looked at her apperance and saw nothing in his name was worn by her but not even anything else. He walked towards her and remembering the past and anger he had for her.
'Miss Geet Handa, what brings you here?' he asked in a professional yet mocking tone. Geet looked at him and saw the hidden anger in his eyes. She sighed to herself and began to speak putting all her strenght into saying this.
'I need your help' Geet meeked out looking down.
Maan looked at her and smirked
'Really and what happened to that Geet who said she would never see my face or ask me for help. Anyways lets leave all that. I knew someday you will be back when you and your lover will be out of money. Im not that stonehearted not to give charity, how much do you need 100, 10000, 1000000,10000000. Nakul get my cheque book' Maan mocked at Geet and asked Nakul. Geet clenched her hands together and felt like why did she come here to get humuliated more, to have more wrong accusations thrown as her. She cried in her heart thinking how her life could have been. She noticed Maan filling out the cheque and throwing it at her. Geet looked at the cheque as Maan smirked to himself and thought 'moneydigger.. I knew she and her boyfriend will be back one day' Geet looked at the cheque and held it infront of his eyes and tore it into pieces shocking Maan.
'You never understood Maan my feelings and what i needed. Truth be told i never wanted to see you again, But you are the only person in this world who can help me. I hate myself but...' Geet fell to his legs as tears started falling out of her eyes and she cried and said
'Mahj has cancer...' Maan was shocked. He picked Geet up as his heart pinched with her tears. Maan looked at her and said
'What who is Mahi?'
'My daughter. She is 4.' Maan stepped back shocked. 'She needs bone marrow of either her father or mother. Mine didnt match. I promised myself i would live for my daughter only. She would not need anyone else' Geet continued,
'Geet where is Yash? Why hasnt he given bone marrow...isnt he the father ?' Geet looked at him disgusted.
'Maan, only you can help me,., only now the father of my daughter can save her' Geet cried.
'Ha so why are you here? Im not stonehearted Geet i can arrange best doctors for you did Yash leave you?'
'Why are you asking about Yash? Maan you always misunderstood me the purity of our relation and the relation i shared with Yash. He has nothing to do with me, he is married to meera, you remember her my best friend. He is not the father of my child Maan... i told you before Maan i am still pure to you. I never cheated on you but you never listenerd that night nearly 5 years ago, you called my child bas***d and me a wh**e, you thought i betrayed you. You humiliated me and almost made me lose my child... Maan you broke our relationship over your insecurity' Geet shouted at him.
'no i didnt ...those pictures proofs evidence...proved what you did to me Geet. Im sure today your lying about everything even Mahi dont know what dirty blood she is and where she came from...as far as i know you might be and still are sleeping around this is your plan isnt it' Geet had it, she came for. Reason. His help to save her daughters life. She took out her hand and slapped him hard.
'Mahi is dying... She has cancer, she needs her fathers bone marrow. She needs your bone marrow she is our daughter Maan' Geet finally said before breaking down.

Maan just stood there shocked at Geets outburst. He wanted to believe her but his heart said to trust her she was saying the truth. But his mind. There was only one thing to do. He grabbed her and took her to the hospital..



Precap: truth out...Maan devasted...and he finds out thebplays

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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow great story plz update soon
my name is alicia pm me
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lovely it reminds me lil bit of pak blockbuster drama humsafar
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Gr8 concept.

do continue soon.
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omg fab os hun.. precap is scary but waiting.. cont soon hun..
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Part 2...

Maan tried his hardest to avoid looking at Geet. He knew if she was right he had done a big sin. He had deprived a child of her father, and more importantly he had killed the wife he loved.
They arrived at the hospital and Geet walked alongside him at the doctors cabin. Dr Parineeti walked out of the childrens ward and into her cabin,
'Geet she is fine, she is sleeping. She was asking for you?' Dr Pari said as she saw what Geet was going to ask. Dr Pari had taken Geet into her home and allowed Geet to stay. The day she met her sitting at a park bench Pari saw the innocence and pain in her eyes. Pari never asked about her past but she knew it was painful. She didnt want Geet to think about it. Pari turned to Maan and asked
'And you are'
'Maan Singh Khurana, Dr i am here for two reasons. First reason is dna test with myself and Mahi to determine if I am her father and secondly bone marrow test' Pari looked at Geet and saw tears and pain in her eyes, she had guessed what had happened to Geet during that time,. Geet pleadede and looked at Pari not to say anything. Pari led Geet and Maan down the aisle and to another room. She asked Geet to stay put as she took Maan in and did the neccessary test.
After the test Geet and Maan stood outside Mahi's room. Geet was feeling faint seeing her child like that and ran not being able to see her. Maan looked at Geet and saw her motherly love for her. No matter what he said to her, today if he is the father of her child Geet had a lot of strengh to face him after his harsh words.
Mahi coughed and woke up asking for her mother. Maan walked into her room and gave her water and stroked her head,
'Aap kaun ho aur mamma kaha hai...' Maan didnt know what to say. He looked at her and saw the resemblance of his Geet in her.
'Maaan singh khurana aur aapke mama bahar hai... Woh abhi aajayenge,, apka naam kya hai beta' Maan started to feel a bond with her. Mahi smiled weakly
'Mahi... Mere mama ki Mahi,,, aap mere mama ki friend ho?' mahi asked,
Maan looked at her and nodded.
'Ek secret batao... Main janti ho... Sabkuch.. Mama bohot rohti hai,,,, main marnewalii ho na...' Mahi said as tears came into Maans eyes at how strong this girl is. She is four and she knows the truth and is smiling.
'Chup bilkul chup kuch nahi hoga tumhe'
'Aree aap bi roh rahe ho...mama ki tarah,, apko pata hai,,, main chali jaongi to mama ka khayak kaun rakega,,mere pass papa bi nahi hai' that shocked Maan. He wanted to ask more when a nurse came in and told him he was needed in the doctors cabin. He sat inside and saw Geet was already there. She had not said a word since theyve arrived. Pari came in with the reports,
'Maan your bone marrow did not match with Mahi 100% im sorry Geet...' Maan looked at her in anger as this meant he was not the father of Mahi. Geet looked shocked and tears came out as the last chance to save her daughter had died away..
'However, the DNA reports matcha. Maan you are Mahi's father. There is no doubt about that.' Maan was shocked he looked at Geet with guilty as a few drops fell out, in one day he found his daughter and knowing she is in danger,
'Geet Maan there is one last way you can save Mahi... If she has another sibling the bone marrow will match 100%...do you have any other child?'
Geet nodded no,
'Are you prepared for another child to save Mahi..' Geet looked at Maan. Maan who was already guilty for so much pain he caused Geet.
'Yes... I am whatever it takes' Geet looked at Maan shocked.


Precap:: confrontation and last part
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Posted: 12 years ago
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lovely update
update last part soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Edited by punam2712 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved both the updates...Continue soon dear...
Abhi toh mujhe maan ko ek maarna hain chance milega kya????
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Posted: 12 years ago
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The first two chps were really sad.I just hope that they can save the child.Looking forward to the next chp😊

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