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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice update.eagerly waiting for maan n geet meeting.continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
congrats on the new story
loved the update
nice start...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sekhonpuneet

Vry nice...


Is it a simple lov story?



a simple love story with a twist
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Posted: 12 years ago
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superb
loved it dear
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow
amazing
waiting for geet and maan to meet
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice concept...
cotinue soon...
PM me ..pls...
Edited by sanam1234u - 12 years ago
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will be updating today any one interested
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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART:2

AT THE SAME TIME THEY HEARD SOME CAR SOUND

Chachu cachu agaye 'agaye..

Kids were running towards the main door

At the same time all stooped seeing some one there

They saw one girl standing

All are shocked seeing her

Maan was seeing her as if she is an alien

The girl is wearing some loose kurta and baggy pant , her hair do not how much oil she applied is tied up like a plaits a big power spects was her on the nose, may be for the eye sight, do not what is the power but it is looking like she is having high power, with one figure she is trying to adjust the spects which was falling from her nose,

And with the other hand she is licking one lollipop in the mouth making sounds

Maan gave one glare the girl standing

Who are you whom do you want

Seeing his glaring she started to cry

Shh.. why you are crying now

At the same time priya came there

Why you are crying ' what happened

Ye muje dant rahe hai 'inti bade bade anke ghoor kar '

Maan was getting irritated with her behavior

Nahi beti isa nahi hai

App shant hojaye

She stopped her crying and started licking her lollipop making sounds

At the same time Vicky with holding lots of bags and suitcase came inside

Vicky who is she

Bahi do not ask me, ask dadima pata nahi kya bana diya muje

I became a driver , coolie

Glaring at the his father .dadima


Oh she is our close relative geet handa

Haina geet

Ha mai geet ho

Saying she forwarded her hand for handshake towards maan

Maan looked at the hands which are full of dirt and some sticky substances may be the lollipop which she was eating , he glared at her

Ma I am going going to office iam getting late saying that he immediately left the house

Everyone were staring at her as if they are seeing some wonders of the world

Dadima is the one who felt very depressed seeing geet like this

She kept a high hopes, she thought may be geet will be around 23 would be perfect match for his pota, but seeing her, she is looking as if she in just 15 years girl ,she quietly settled on the sofa

But the kids seeing her lollipop, started crying

Ma I want lollipops

Do not cry , see I will give you a lot see ihave more

Saying that geet immediately took lollipop from her bag and gave to the kids

Friends

Kids were very happy seeing they became friends immediately

Priya took geet into the mansion

App ka ghar inta bada hai

Priya was smiling with geet talks

Didiappko hum ghar dhikate hacome

Saying that kids dragged her from that place , geet followed them

ma is she really our relative

kyo Vicky kya hogaya tha

nahi ma apoko pata nahi , I am wodering the same girl I met her

, may be she is having some split personality or mental disorder

Vicky ' itna acha ladki why you are talking like this

You do not believe me ma how she with me behaved with me

When I went to pick up her form the station she behaved as if iam going to kidnap her

Luckily I could convince her I am savitri devi pota nahi to apko pata nahi apka beta kahi ksii police station me ''

nahi maa I am not going to take risk I will maintain distance from her, any way within one week my vacation is to be going to completed , and i have to leave any way be carful with her



precape: still thinking


ok guys if you want to know whether geet is really is having mental problem or split personalty you have to give lots of comments and likes

Edited by rsusmita - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Yeyyy... I m second here...
Nice update

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