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Posted: 12 years ago
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mistakes of spelling,gender or tense is ok dear...we are here to enjoy not to take ur class...

u are trying to entertain us with ur stories that is enough for us...

but one thing I will point out is that which dialogue who is saying I don't understand sometimes...yah we can guess but sometimes it becomes difficult to understand who is saying particular dialogue and when dialogue of one person started and where it ends...see this example from ur update---
maa i am telling i am okay with her staying , but tell her not to inter fear in my matters,
vusko boliye ke vo muje se door rahena
maan it is not good you should not talk like this
no papa , please i cannot tolerate her
bro you not worry she will not come ...
how can you tell that vicky
see bro she is alrgey towards men
what ...
how can you tell that
dekho bro...when i went to pick up her from the station, that time only i undestood ,
she behaved as if i came to kidnap , after that the way she behaved with you after entering the house
okay in that case no probs
i will be happy
dadima was not happy with the conversation
what happned ma why you are looking dull since from morning
kuch nahi priya
maa muje pata hai , dadima aise kyo hai
then you tell vicky
it i becasue she has kept much hopes on geet
but seeing her bro will never agree to this marriage
what ...shadi... geet se
are you insane vicky
saying that he immediately went into his room


very interesting update...

I think Daadi will change Geet into a maiden...

thanx for pm...


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Posted: 12 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: tushti-kiran



mistakes of spelling,gender or tense is ok dear...we are here to enjoy not to take ur class...

u are trying to entertain us with ur stories that is enough for us...

but one thing I will point out is that which dialogue who is saying I don't understand sometimes...yah we can guess but sometimes it becomes difficult to understand who is saying particular dialogue and when dialogue of one person started and where it ends...see this example from ur update---
maa i am telling i am okay with her staying , but tell her not to inter fear in my matters,
vusko boliye ke vo muje se door rahena
maan it is not good you should not talk like this
no papa , please i cannot tolerate her
bro you not worry she will not come ...
how can you tell that vicky
see bro she is alrgey towards men
what ...
how can you tell that
dekho bro...when i went to pick up her from the station, that time only i undestood ,
she behaved as if i came to kidnap , after that the way she behaved with you after entering the house
okay in that case no probs
i will be happy
dadima was not happy with the conversation
what happned ma why you are looking dull since from morning
kuch nahi priya
maa muje pata hai , dadima aise kyo hai
then you tell vicky
it i becasue she has kept much hopes on geet
but seeing her bro will never agree to this marriage
what ...shadi... geet se
are you insane vicky
saying that he immediately went into his room


very interesting update...

I think Daadi will change Geet into a maiden...

thanx for pm...






thanks dear for pointing out my mistakes
but as i mentioned it i updated this story in my bro lappy in fast as my desk top is out of order so so i got little time to update so ii updated in hurry
so form the next time onwards i will take care
or i will not update in a hurry

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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
amazing update...
not able to undrstand geets character...
loved it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44

Update...
But whats wrong with Geet...????
Love d update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
beautiful part

liked it

thnx for pm

cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
nice update dear
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
updating the story any one interested
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
guys i have written story
but samll helps needed wants maan photos wearing his track pants and vest ,
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49

PART-4

When geet was returning from her morning walk she saw

Dadima was in the puja room and singing slokas from bhagvat gita

She quietly went near her and sat beside her

Dadima saw her

Dadima can I recite them along with you

Ha geet kyo nahi

Geet started singing the sloka in melodious tune

Dadima was staring at geet

At the same time maan was coming from his work out

He stopped his steps when he heard the voice

He knows normally his dadima only recites slokas of gita but never sings but he did not understand who is singing

He slowely went near to the puja room he saw geet was singing the songs

Maan beta app

Geet who was busy looking at the book was surprised seeing him like this

Maan was in his track pant' and vest coming out from his workout his six pack body is full of sweat ' geet immediately stopped her singing and started searching for something'..

Geet beta what you are searching '

Dadima vo.. mera spects.. iam not able to find it out'

Geet it is in your pocket ' see

Geet immediately put the spects on her nose and immediately ranned from that place'

Dadima what happened to her

I do not beta I think so she has seen some ghost '

Dadima app bhi' you too started teasing me

Okay I will go and fresh up and go to office today I have some urgent meetings

Okay beta '

But dadima was too surprised with geet behavior , the way geet was searching for her spects, when she could able read the book with out spects, then seeing maan why she has put her spects and why she was running away from him

I have to find out these ' come on savitridevi now you have lot of work to do

Maan left the office early

When geet came downstairs kids are making lot of mischief , even their bade papa is not here so they are no one to scold them

She saw meera (meera is dev wife) was also not well

Kya hua didi you are not feeling well

Ha geet I am having slight cough and cold , and these kids when their bade papa will not there in the house they will become more naughty

And they have to get ready and go to school also

Okay didi you do not worry I will send them to school

Kids now you have competition who ever will win in this will get a surprise gift

What is that didi

That competition is, whoever first get ready and come here for breakfast

But who will help us in getting ready

I help you okay

Geet took kids with her to their room

Kya hua meera ..who you are starring

Kucha nahi maa.. geet ko dekha rahi thi

Itna cute hai'she has taken care of the kids, I do not know what the magic she did, kids are listening to her

Ha meera she is very cute girl

With in half hour every got ready and eating their break fast quietly

All are surprised

Seeing kids eating their food quietly with out any tantrums,

After 15 days Vicky went to Mumbai when his vacations are over

It is almost 1 month that geet has come into their khurana mansion

She became fav didi for the kids, kids used listen to her words

She used take care of kids, their studies, everything..

Dadima nowadays noticed that geet would never come before the gents of the house even before ram.. she was never comfortable with maan, whenever they come she tries to avoid them..

Maan started observing geet how she is getting attached to the kids 'but her strange behaviors .. made him curious

Her way of dressing long baggy pants , her full hands loose shirts and the hair , if we squeeze her hair definitely atleast half liter of oil will come out , is she like this before also

Now a days he is geeting pressure from dadima and from maa and papa to get married

But he felt he need time, he so busy in his life, that he never thought about any girl, his only concern was to bring khurnana industries in top position, so whenever family used bring this topic he used to avoid the topic by telling that he wants bring khurana industries in top position

At the time of dev marriage it was different issue ,

Both dev and meera used to love each other in college days, and meera parents wants to marry her immdietaley , so he made his parents agree for this marriage telling that he do not have time for marriage , and do not put conditions that elder one should before younger one

So their family has to agree to this point , but he cannot avoid now , dadima now days putting a lot of pressure for marriage , and started searching for the girls



thanks you freinds for your lovely comments and likes

please give me lot of comments and likes

Edited by rsusmita - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
nice update
geet aisi kyun hai???
loved it..

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