Beauty2..Note for the readers-page 160,Feb 1 2014 - Page 25

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Posted: 12 years ago

So the driver was afraid of his job that why he did not tell anybody about this accident….now I came to know how anybody form his family doesn't know anything about who saved Vicky….but geet realized it

Now I got to know why everytime he writes something and then throwing 'crushed paper' in dustbin, b'coss his mother told him to do so to lessen the burden

Geet forgave him for his teenage mistake...but what if maan comes to know about the 'someone' he hit that day is geet only…!!!

Again geet had not read the 'crushed paper'….palin now you are making us very curious about crushed papers

Maan is restless about her marriage proposals and not the question she was going to ask

TFP

Cont soon

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Posted: 12 years ago
another fab part...

an accident weaving their destiny... gave a person physical scars and for another guilt of hurting an innocent... maans fear to loose his brother or rather should say to hurt his own brother was beautifully portrayed...geet is such a sweet heart and also immensely in love with maan ... may be thats y her outlook for the accident was like this... she is not bothered about her scars but happy that she saved not one but two that too, her loves life!!!!

i loved the concept of discarding ur thoughts after expressing or after pouring ur heart out! i always used to imagine y maan discarded his stories instead of preserving them... here comes the answer

though now geet knows about the truth of the accident and also have taken a positive approach to it but what about maan? how maan will react when he will know that the scars of his lady love is given none other than him? am sure he will be guilty hope geet will help him recover... but will geet again think that maan is loving her because of this???? only questions arising in my mind

and todays crushed paper is kept as a mystery from us too... as he was writing a story of sameera or to say a physically beautiful but shallow person, and now end of the story? am eager to know how the conversation with geet about past plays a role for the end of his story
Edited by -lakshmi- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

another fab part...

an accident weaving their destiny... gave a person physical scars and for another guilt of hurting an innocent... maans fear to loose his brother or rather should say to hurt his own brother was beautifully portrayed...geet is such a sweet heart and also immensely in love with maan ... may be thats y her outlook for the accident was like this... she is not bothered about her scars but happy that she saved not one but two that too, her loves life!!!!

i loved the concept of discarding ur thoughts after expressing or after pouring ur heart out! i always used to imagine y maan discarded his stories instead of preserving them... here comes the answer

though now geet knows about the truth of the accident and also have taken a positive approach to it but what about maan? how maan will react when he will know that the scars of his lady love is given none other than him? am sure he will be guilty hope geet will help him recover... but will geet again think that maan is loving her because of this???? only questions arising in my mind

and todays crushed paper is kept as a mystery from us too... as he was writing a story of sameera or to say a physically beautiful but shallow person, and now end of the story? am eager to know how the conversation with geet about past plays a role for the end of his story


He picked his notepad and pen as he moved towards the couch to write the "End" of his story which was revolving in his thoughts since a long time..

His conversation with geet won't decide the end of his story..he had already decided it a long ago..since he was working for orphanage designs since last few nights,he could not pen it down...
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow...that's the spirit geet...!

He he he he...loved the last sentence 😳

Over all...

Awesome update...!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
update so maan was cause of that accident and scars waiting for maan to know this truth also geet marriage talk left maan shoked



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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update...
teenage mistake n regret...
loved d portray of emotions
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
so maan is the reason 4 d accident.i could not imagine how maan will react if he comes to know d truth.the guilt may eat him alive.
Geet has such a nice heart that she forgive maan. W8g 2 read more
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Posted: 12 years ago

ohhh that was amazing... ohhh la la.n.. boy..marriage..n. n...maan beta jaldi kar warna deer hojayega...seriously what a fate and destiny...it playss a big role in everyones life...the man she love haf cousef her scars..and he will be the only person to heal them...beautiful one...plzzx plzzz updatebsoon... cant wait now...
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Posted: 12 years ago
fabuls update. waiting for maans reaction.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: palindrome

What was what dear??? Update! Off late your updates have left me with jittery feelings and cravings to read more. So my reaction was just my reaction of wanting to see the next update of your favorite show, wanting to have a glimpse of tomorrow's test's question paper. Nothing serious😆
What has surprised you this much??geet's reaction towards the truth??or maan's unawareness about the person whom he hit???or sudden arrival of marriage proposal for geet???

You can't call it a surprise, because surprises are those which you'd experience when something happens which you don't anticipate. I don't want to forecast anything in this story so there's no point of I anticipating something and thus no point of getting surprised😆. I want to be a mere audience and travel through it. Maan's awareness about the person is justified, and Geet's knowledge is obvious. Her loosing her cool and yelling no one died fetched a whistle from me. The beginning of his writing habit stuck a chord and made me fall in love with this guy. Sudden arrival of marriage proposal for Geet was much needed. There must be a push and what more than a warning bell saying that you are going to lose something you hold dear? But I am definitely interested in the guy who is interested in this match. I want to know if he knew about her scars and is still willing to go ahead. There you go, weird me again.😆



Edited by Cloud9. - 12 years ago

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