Pt1 Forbidden Fire(A Devil's Tale) thrd1 Pg68

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nanvi

@nanvi

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#801

Congrats for one more new story and a lot of thanks for writing a devil's story. I have been a constant but silent reader of ur stories. I really appritiate ur writings. This one is awesome loved the start verymuch. Pls cont soon. One more request to u when will u update DOP. Pls update it also.

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aali

@18mypride

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#802

👏 WONDERFUL👏kya begining hai... hit superb hit !

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hellgirl

@hellgirl

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#803

Omg...that's awesome u r back with devil...
Loved the update...
The way u describe maan's aura hv clean bold my mind...
Geet is abductud b maan on her wedding day...
Waiting to read more...

I was a silent reader but now i think i hv to be more regular...
Becoz after reading that part i just can1t help myself from replying...

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noaccount

@noaccount

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#804

OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG

😲

when did u even wrote this FF annie????

just opened my PM box and read this FF

and ia m like...OUT OF WORDS!!!!

TOOO GOOD!!!!

JUST LOVED IT.

beautifully written.

OMGGG maan abducted geet in her wedding day????

something sounds fishy

plz do cont soon and PM me

love

esha

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PujaShree

@PujaShree

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#805

Wooowww annieee awsmmm start...luvd it...
Rocking start dear...
Nw waiting for next update...

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Aatiya

@PaintedSky

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#806

Hayyy...what an attitude! Geet know him already?

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namita25

@namita25

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#807

awww moi loved the update...it's simply superb...

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Tinker ;)

@TinkerBella

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#808

"I am already burning, baby. Now it's your turn to burn in this forbidden fire" i just love this dia 😆 hehehe

superv update uff i'm already fall n love with this DEVIL 😳

UPDATE SOON 😃

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RedChillie

@RedChillie

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#809

Devil is coming
wow Aniee is writing devil
origional Devil is back
oye devil woha
well that was the reaction of readers when u posted prologue
I was confused what is with this ff so ppl r so excited
I never read ur devil in love or devil's desire
so i was unaware of the effect of Devil.
Nd I like others was also waiting for the devil
I want to see what this Devil package contained.
Nd then it came
nd I was astonished
wow what an update
i love the way U described Maan's character in such a way that he did not utter a word but his action spoke volumes.
His action already proved him a devil.
Hey I read ur CTL but this devil is totally different.
A writer should b inovative nd that is what u r.
Im in love with ur Devil
next update plz