Pt1 Forbidden Fire(A Devil's Tale) thrd1 Pg68

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rubykatariya

@rubykatariya

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#781

yeeepppiii

one more devil

or i say devil returns..

but superb start

love devil alot

geet reaction was superb

maan's entry omg it just mind blowing

anni di waiting for this mystery to disclose soon

how this devil fall for this angel..

waise i love ur signature dialogue

yup its indeed a hell and i m ur devil...

the intensity of this make anyone fall for ur writing...

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#782

Ahh finally u updated! Thanks 4 da pm n rocking intense update! Loved it! superbly written! Geet abt to get married n Maan abducts her! Geet tries to get him to leave her to no avail! Naina tells Brij to leave them! MSK da angry devil ! Update soon

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rockin_gal

@rockin_gal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#783

Wow great start.. Please update soon cant wait to read more 😃

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ana56

@ana56

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Posted: 12 years ago

#784

wow amazing update ainie dear

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kareena32

@kareena32

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#785

fabulous part annie love it maan's entry was great and he abduct geet before everyone and no one dare to say anything .i guess maan knew geet before thats why ha has stop the wedding and abduct hercont soon .me very glad devil is back😉

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vrinda22

@vrinda22

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Posted: 12 years ago

#786

awesome start dear..

geet was getting married

maan stopped it

he was taking with him

none could stop..

the devil welcoming ANGEL TO HELL

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dhwanimehta23

@dhwanimehta23

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Posted: 12 years ago

#787

Awesome update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1😊😊😊😊😊😊

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SRK

@KINGKHANFAN

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#788

finally the most awaited ff is here👏
You dont knw how eagerly I was waiting for devil
nice update
continue soon

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Sweetdebi

@Sweetdebi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#789

Thnx di fr d super hit update...wow pehela over...pehela ball..n a sixer...truely awesome...bt u no di when i read dt geet gonna get married to karan my heart skiped itz beat...bt when my maan entered...my heart stopped beating...i think this is the karizma MSK has..where others can make ur heart react..MSK can control it fully...n this MSK is only here bcoz of u...u have portrayed him like this...who can rule over our heart...so it won't be an offense if i call u THE ULTIMATE CREATER/GODDESS OF SUPER MSK..
So thank u Di for giving us such lovely n deadly devils...love u a lot...muaaahhh