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Divz

@dazzlingdivz

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#481

love u love u love u soo much

will read it in a while n cmnt for the ty being mere eyes ka quota finish 😭

abhi pain hoying so thode der main wapis aa k read krta hu 😃

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Silence

@SecretKhabri420

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+ 9

Posted: 12 years ago

#482

Very different start and this hotty Maan ufff ☺️

I am wondering he knows Geet, Did he kidnap for some revenge or coz he already attracted to Geet as in pervious Devil's stories?...

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seemamary

@seemamary

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#483

Iam so confused does maan and geet know each other and why the hell maan kidnapped geet on her wedding day.

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Uday Lovie

@Udaylovie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#484

heya i just loved this ff plzz do pm me wen u update ...

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kiran_rati

@kiran_rati

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#485

oh god geet kidnapped

i am sure maan did that

such a cute kidnap😆 if maan kidnapped

beautiful update

cont soon

thanx for the pm dear

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Pooja Verma

@impoojaverma

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#486

yee!!!!!!!!!!!!

devil is back

m missing the DEVIL so much

while reading i was so lost in it dont know wen d update was over

its was brilliant...outstanding...

love it...

waiting for next eagerly

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sweetysaran

@sweetysaran

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#487

That was awesome di...

different starting...

i just loved it...

maan taking geeet on her weeding day😲...

does she know him? very interesting...

beautifully written...

waiting for the next update eagerly...

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Sampa Ghosh

@sweetsampa39

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#488

After d end of CTL,I was eagerly waiting for dis FF.Thank u very much to start d story soon.
I ve always loved Maan fm d core of my heart but u made me CRAZY abt His DEVIL Avatar also.
Now coming to d update,it was fabulous as always.First i thot geet was getting married to Maan but as always i was wrong.And her confusion,restlesness and denial told that very soon we are gonna witness d unexpected.And ...Bang on...THINK OF D DEVIL AND D DEVIL IS HERE...What an entry by MSK...I mean wat an entry...spinechilling,blood freezing and wat not.Nobody dared to move in His presence let alone stopping Him.And He jst abducted d bride wid so much ease.

Wat else to say,the update is jst outsanding and i m gonna have a gala time going thru dis MAANEET journey.So pls cont. soon.

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Anjali

@Gurlygirl

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#489

finally update ..
wow ...love it a lot ...
already part 1 is packed with so much of suspense ..
I wonder how will be others parts...hehe..
omg... its geet's wedding ...
I was totally shocked .. very unusual starting ...
geet's restlessness was another mystery ...
I thought that geet is getting married to maan but...
to my misery its karan .. another shock .. hehe
I was like god please do something that the marriage won't happen..
coz I thought that maan won't entry at time ...
but today annie sis was all set to make me wrong ...hehe
and the most awaited moment came ...
our devil entered in full power ...
awesome entry ...
time for another shock
omg... awe ... maan carried geet out of her own wedding and none was able to stop him...
its called grand devil entry...
me totally in shock ...hehe
in my mind it was like first part mehi diwale dulahaniya lejayenge ...
very mysterious update..
but me happy .. thank god geet's marriage didn't happened ..
"Yeah, this is hell, and I am your devil.WELCOME TO THE HELL."
"I am already burning, baby. Now it's your.turn to burn in this forbidden fire ."
oh god.. this dialogue totally floored ...
it refreshed the memory of our old devil ...
love devil a lot ...
the next is out of my imaginations..
so like good child waiting for next update (:
Hats off to you Annie Di...
ur writing and concept are out of the world ..
just wanna say love u a lot ...
keep on writing..
loads of kisses and hugs ...
tc...
love u more ...
-Anjali (: