Pt1 Forbidden Fire(A Devil's Tale) thrd1 Pg68 - Page 47

Originally posted by: PariNain

finally the most awaited ff is here
You dont knw how eagerly I was waiting for devil
u changed my dreamy prince charming to a devil. No one will believe that a girl like me want a devil instead of her prince charming
I think enough of my praising now back to update
by the way wapda also celebrating Return of Devil as its powercut
nd Im using my cell to edit this comment
ok so she is getting married with her childhood frnd nd lover
but why she is confused?
She does not love her never would b hurband?
Then where is Maan? Hurry up man she will b married to some stupid guy
aha think of devil and DEVIL is here.
What he will do now? Kiss?
Ayen he kidnapped her
ballay ballay kiss se sedha kidnap? Progress haan
no one dared to stop him
wah g kaya tehka hy
wait a min did he really kidnaped her?
But why? Does he knw her?
Silly me of course he know her tabhi to lidnape kar raha hy
i think he is in love with her nd kidnapped her to make her his bride
nice update
continue soon

Originally posted by: anshra

just commented

do check

Originally posted by: sdlife19

Annie

first part mein hi dhamkha

Maan kidnapped her in front of hundreds and tat to on her wedding day

noone even dared to stop him oyeh kya chakkar hain

feels like they know each other and maan wants her to burn in the same fire he is burnig

Originally posted by: neha5058

checked di and replied too

Originally posted by: anshra

wow

thanks

Originally posted by: anshra

u know u r a very good writer

and i am really waiting for this one

and i forgot to mention that i loved the banner too

Originally posted by: neha5058

aww, , thanks a lot di for the compliment...
will try to start this one soon...
ohh, thank you so much di for liking the banner but which one, , that maaneet with moon or the only moon wala?

Originally posted by: keerthi90

Now that's what we call an update..to be precise annie's devil update...

Har story ki shuruwat main u make them kiss and in this one geet was abducted by him on the marriage day that too in a caveman style...OMG...i was like what is happening here...geet was also not protesting and from her expressions it is clear that she is not meeting him the first time...isn't it???

Maan ki ebtry tho ekdum rocking thi yaar...i could visualise him entering with his bodyguards around him...a perfect devil...haan...

Update soon...Waiting for the next part eagerly...