-diljale- thread 3 LAST PART /150 jul21

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custodian75

@custodian75

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#681

I really really can't believe that Maan was the culprit. I really thought there will be a twist. 😭

So they start on the path to recovery.

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Priya

@Priya204

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#682

For some reason I still cannot digest the part of maan actually doing that with geet I mean on their first night the way you had described it showed that it was maan's first time as well infact he was even reluctant to start any relation with her waiting for maan's monologe on that incident and if he actually is guilty then he deserves every bit of indifferecne of geet.

About ending it I think there is still a lot more if not more then it should be extended to atleast five parts if not more as I am still unable to fall for this maan his remorse guilt should be shown in details as it was only geet who has been sufferring from part one so please only a request as a reader.

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honeygrape

@honeygrape

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#683

ayyo why last part>?? 😭😭 nice one...

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love2_soma

@love2_soma

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#684

maan tumne jo gunah kiya...gunah bhi nehi...its a sin...woh kabhi mafi k layek hi nehi hai...tum kahe bhi kaise sakte ho...tooo much...magar punishment toh milna chahiye...

superb n beautiful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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pal_maan

@pal_maan

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#685

There's so much in this story, how can it be the last part...

Me so confused and the next update can only clear all the confusions..

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vrinda22

@vrinda22

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#686

waiting 4 new thread

next update

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Anubhuti

@tellyme

Sparkler

+ 19

Posted: 12 years ago

#687

Sent you my comment dear

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KhanAtiyah

@KhanAtiyah

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#688

Nooo ! Don't end it so soon !!

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Niharika

@Niharika.Nair

Rocker

+ 9

Posted: 12 years ago

#689

Brij loves his sister a lot and he can never forgive Maan for what he did... I feel really bad for Geet she is not able to stay away from Maan no matter how bad he was to her in the past...