MAANEET FF Ek Main hoon aur Ek Tu#3 EPILOGUE pg62 - Page 29

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Posted: 12 years ago
sorry dear but it took me a long time to post

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regrding the update the description of love was done very beautifully

geet's pain and the extent of hurt was depicted very beautifully and in a heart touching way

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Posted: 12 years ago
wow di how beautifully you wrote geet's lines in article๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
very hearttouching!!
chalo maan finally knew the truth n he realised his mistake๐Ÿ˜ƒ
geet is going to us๐Ÿ˜ญ oh no will maan come in time before it's too late??๐Ÿ˜•
waiting for epilogue
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Posted: 12 years ago
awww my dearest Piyu...
moi loved the update...
finally Maan has realised that Geet truly loves him... infact worships him ..(thanks to Amrita๐Ÿ˜†)For her he is her world...her everything...She beautifully poured her feelings in that article...loved every bit of it...I am sure Maan will not let go away from him...as he too loves her a lot...
and what are you planning for epilogue...moi can't wait for it...
Edited by namita25 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Read all, and i loved it
It was full of fun, romance - all equally balanced

Waiting for epilogue
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely update
Waiting for epilouge pls i want Maaneet together bas ...
What i loved in this story hmmm
Geet salad dieting for Maan n Maan's revenge on Geet by making her eat out of limit ...
How maan took care of Geet when her foot was burn
How Maan was jealous to see Geet with Karan
Yaa Maan's guru Dr.Asthana to control ur anger laughter therapy
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Posted: 12 years ago
grt part
but cliff hanger
waiting for epilogue

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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice one ..lovely writings ...still waiting for an epilogue๐Ÿ˜ƒ..thanks
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Posted: 12 years ago
atlast maan came to know the truth
dats awesome update n luved it to core
waiting fr epilogue
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely ending ๐Ÿ‘
Finally Maan realises Geet loves him truly.
Waiting for Epilogue ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 12 years ago

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Here is the epilogue hope you'll will enjoy reading it ๐Ÿ˜ณ


EPILOGUE

10 years later,

Nature was admiring the most divine relationship that existed in this world; the relationship of a mother and her children

Two innocent 7 year old kids Jahan [meaning world] and Dua [meaning blessing] were listening to a story that their mother Geet was narrating to them

Jahah: Mumma aage kya hua? Prince apne princess se mila ke nahi? [Mumma what happened after that did the prince meet his princess?]

Dua: Haan mumma batauna iss story ka end kaise hua? [Mumma pls tell what was the end of this story?]

Geet caressed the cheeks of her innocent kids and uttered

Geet: Uske baad wo hua jo agar nahi hotha toh shayad aaj zindagi ka rukh kuch hotha [Whatever happened next if had not taken place then probably the current life would have been totally different from what it is now]

She touched her mangalsutra while uttering this truth

Jahah: Mumma kya bol rahi hai? Kya alag hotha? [What is mumma trying to say? What would have been different?]

Dua was observing the union of her mom's fingers with the mangalsutra from after thinking for few minutes she announced innocently

Dua: Bhaiya agar jobhi hua na wo nahi hotha na toh mumma ki favourite golden black chain unhe nahi milti aur jaise chocolate nahi milne par hum udaas ho jaate hai waise hi mumma bhi udaas ho jaati [Bro whatever happened if it had not taken place na then mumma would not have got her favourite blackand golden chain and like both of us get sad when we don't get our chocolates similarly mumma would also have been sad]

Jahah: Dua sach keh rahi hai ma? [Is Dua's guess right mom?]

Geet placed her kids on her lap and kissed their forehead

Geet: Jaanna chahte ho aage kya hua? [Want to know what happened at the end?]

Jahah and Dua (together): Haan [Yes]

Geet: Toh suno iss kahani ki princess apni jannat ko peeche chodkar jaa hi rahi thi keโ€ฆ [Fine then listen the princess of this story was about to leave her paradise behind whenโ€ฆ]

FLASHBACK [10 YEARS BEFORE]

By the time Maan reached the airport the shadow of Geet was also not traceable for himโ€ฆ

The announcements were still going on and hence Maan was confident that Geet's flight had not taken off

He knew it would be impossible to find his Geet in this huge airport if he simply roamed here and there

He could not even think of contacting Geet on her phone since she had left her mobile at Amrita's office so that no one could contact her and trace her whereabouts

He had to be quick and finally he knew exactly what he was supposed to do

Meanwhile,

Geet was just about to board her flight when she realized that her chain that Maan had gifted her was missing

The airport officials requested her to get into the flight but she was in no mood to leave the last memory of Maan in her past even in her dreams

She excused herself for few minutes and rushed to get her possession back

She reached the area where she was seated few minutes before and was successful to find her chain in one corner of the chair

She held the chain lovingly near her heart and was just about to leave when her approaching footsteps were brought to a halt by the voice of her heartbeats

Maan: Is it so easy to walk away Geet?

Geet's heart skipped a beat as she recognized the voice of her love; her Maan

Geet turned around in a hope to see her Maan but her eyes failed to glorify themselves with the light of his charming face

She could only hear his voice

One of the high officials of this airport was a very close friend of Maan and with his help in a very short time Maan was successful in making a quick and perfect execution of his plan

He had connected all the loudspeakers and TV screens present throughout the airport with one main output device and a camera that he had kept with himself so that as and when he roamed in the airport searching for Geet his voice will get echoed in every corner

This was the only hope and trick through which Maan's message could reach Geet successfully

Maan continued to narrate the tale of his heart as his eyes started scanning the airport to search the angel of his soul

Maan: U handed over the article to me leaving a question behind pls give me a chance to answer those questions atleast

Geet couldn't understand the direction from where Maan's voice was coming but after few moments of hesitation she started walking in a particular direction as her heart gave her signals that this was the perfect route that could lead her to her Maan

Maan continued with his confession

Maan: Geet u termed my love to be sacred and mentioned that my one admiring look makes u more superior than the word "beautiful" but do u know the secret of those admiring looks of mine?

Maan: My admiring looks gets a divine touch as soon as the radiance of your angelic face falls on them as my prayers are written all over your face and nothing can be more pure than a prayerโ€ฆ Yes Geet I am a simple wish but u are a blessing and together we create the holy sacred divinity of an innocent prayer

Maan: The moment I allowed my hand to escape your folds my life has turned into a curse. Give me some moments of closeness with your soul; allow me to heal the wounds that have my name on it with the touch of OUR LOVEโ€ฆ

Maan: I promise I won't betray u; I promise I will stay with u till the last moment of my life

Maan: When the day arrives wherein the wrinkles of my face shout on top of their voice and snatch away the bliss of youth from my folds I promise nothing will change between us; u will still remain the most beautiful lady and the soul owner of my heart

Geet drank her saliva as she knew her love had emerged victorious; she was dying to surrender herself in the cocoon of Maan's loving folds but the wish of her eyes remain unheard as they could not locate Maan

By that time Maan had finished searching for Geet in one major section of the airport; he was now heading to the other major portion of this area

Geet too entered a different part of the airport wherein TV screens were placed at appropriate positions

A tear drop rolled down her cheek as finally she succeeded to get the glimpse of the sunshine of her life; her Maan through the screens

Maan continued his confession

Maan: Our love story was always perfect Geet till the day u were a part of it. Together we gave birth to the best word in the dictionary of true love; the word "US" forgetting our individuality our souls got merged in a unision of a never ending promise

Maan: When u held my hand my strength was doubled; when u hugged me I entered the safest paradise of the universe; when u kissed me my rock stone heart sensed the first rhythm of a heartbeat

Maan: Its true u made me what I am. I am an epitome of flaws u make me perfect with your love .If u reject me I won't be able to improve; without u my life is deserted.

Geet went and stood very close to the TV screen; Maan looked straight towards the screen with a hope that maybe his Geet was standing in front of it and confessed

Maan: I don't want to change u even a bit; u don't need any rectification; nothing needs to be added or taken away from u as I love u the way u areโ€ฆ

The purity of Maan's words gave a new fragrance to Geet's breaths; she knew she need not roam anywhere to search him. The essence of their love was getting dispersed in the breeze and she was confident that very soon she would be where she actually belonged in the solace of Maan's arms.

She was right and this was proved as Maan entered the same area where Geet was standing right now

His heart skipped a beat as soon as he saw the majesty of his love in front of his eyes

Geet knew he was standing right behind her but this happiness itself was acting as a hurdle of her path as she was not able to move; maybe she was scared that she was living a dream and her one movement will splash water on the most innocent wish of hersโ€ฆ

She gulped her saliva as she saw Maan's approaching footsteps reducing the unnecessary distance between them

Maan:

"I am your dusk but u are my DAWN

I am your universe but u are my LORD

I am your moment but u are my TIME

I am in your breaths but u are my LIFE

I am your dream but u are my FATE

I am your fragrance but u are my TALE"

She closed her eyes as Maan decorated her belly with the garland of his arms and whispered her last poem huskily in her ear but with slight modifications

Maan:

"True love does not mean having your love by your side

It means to be assured that your love is happy and smiling in whichever part of the world he is

Geet held Maan's arms possessively as Maan uttered the first line of her poem

Maan: (modification) Without u every dream of mine will turn into a nightmare; every blessing will take the form of a curseโ€ฆ if u r by my side every painful grief will turn into a blissful smile

Geet's changing breathing patters were a proof of her healing heart

Maan read out the next two verses of the poem

U love me that's your Honour

Once upon a time I considered u as a friend that's your Pride

Geet parted her lips as she was desperate to hear the modified version of Maan of these two lines

Maan (modified) If you allow me to worship you throughout OUR life my life will become a living paradise

A tear drop rolled down her eyes with this soul searing words of Maan

Maan:

U would consider dying with the happiness that U love him rather than living in the pain that U forced my love on me

Geet's heart started to pace at a rapid speed as she her anticipations of Maan's answer increased


Maan: (modified) I wish to die in your arms but not at the last moment but by growing old with u so that my last breath will turn into a bliss thus completing our story in a perfectโ€ฆ We started our life together, we walked together, we grew old together and we are ready to embrace death together โ€ฆ

Maan:

U will wait till eternity in the hope that maybe one day arrives in my life before your death that I will happily confess I LOVE U TOOโ€ฆ"

Geet rested her head on the cushion of Maan's chest as she wanted to hear his reply to the last two lines of her poem more clearly

Maan: (modified) Why wait till eternity when every moment of my life is dedicated to u? Will u believe me if today I confess that yes I don't want to breathe without u, I don't want to welcome any morning of my life without u, Its true I love u more than the word love can holdโ€ฆ yes I love u till the last boundary that the sky can unfold โ€ฆ

These words were enough to lay the perfect healing touch to the deepest wounds of Geet's innocent heart. She turned around and submitted herself in a soul searing kiss which declared the beauty of their divine relationship

There was urgency in this kiss that removed the traces of uncertainty from their life; there was a passion in this kiss which marked the importance that they held in one another's life; the love; the need, the desires gave rise to the harmony of their souls thus completing their incomplete formโ€ฆ

As soon as their liplock ended they allowed their foreheads to kiss each other by placing it in close contact; their eyes met and words died at that very moment

Maan removed the best gift that he could decorate Geet with at that particular moment from his pocket; it was the same mangalsutra that he had purchased for her almost one month back and without any hesistancy he wrote the true meaning of his love on the canvas of Geet's heart with a permanent ink by placing the mangalsutra on her neck

Maan: Thanks for coming in my lifeโ€ฆ I โ€ฆ

Geet placed her palm on his lips and stopped him from saying any further words

She embraced him with an ocean of love that was enough to declare WITHOUT EACH OTHER WE ARE INCOMPLETEโ€ฆ

Cocooned in each other's folds; locking their hands in a tight grip both of them once again stepped into the magical paradise of their loveโ€ฆ

PRESENT

Jahah and Dua happily clapped their hands and declared

Jahah and Dua: Yeah Prince ko Princess mil gayi aur kahani ki happy ending ho gayi [Yeah finally the Prince was successful in getting her Princess back and the story got a perfect happy ending]

Before Geet could say something Maan entered the room and mentioned lovingly

Maan: Prince aur Princess ki story itni special hai ke wo kabhi end ho hi nahi sakti [The story of prince and princess is so special that it can't be over]

Jahah n Dua: Dadda aa gaye dada aa gaye [Daddy has arrived]

Maan gave a loving wink to Geet and went and sat besides her and their kids

He placed the kids lovingly on his lap and garlanded Geet's waist with his arm

Maan: Isske baad jaante ho kya hua? [Do you'll know what happened after this?]

The kids nodded their head in a big no

Maan: Iske baad Prince aur Princess ki shadi ho gayi aur unke pyar ki gehrayi din bhar din badti gayi aur shaadi ke 3 saal baad unn dono ki zindagi ke gulistan mein 2 pyare se nanhe phool ugge jinka naam Prince aur princess ne jahah aur dua rakha [After this incident price and princess got married and with every passing day the depth of their love went on increasing and after 3 years of their wedlock two innocent flowers got blossomed in the garden of their love who were named Jahah and Dua by both of them]

Jahah: Iska matlab Dadda aap iss story ke Prince ho aur Mumma iss story ki princess? [So this means Dadda is the prince and Mumma the princess of this story?]

Before Maaneet could give any reply Dua continued

Dua: Par bhaiya aisa kaisa ho sakta hai Dadda ki princess toh main hoon na aur Mumma k prince aap hmmโ€ฆ main samaj gayi Dadda aur Mumma iss story ke king aur queen hai aur hum dono unke prince aur princess [But how is this possible? I am Dadda's princess and u are Mumma's prince hmmโ€ฆ I got it Dadda and Mumma are the king and queen of this story and both of us are their prince and princess]

The kids applauded in happiness innocently as Maaneet admired the flowers of their love with immense appreciation

Jahah: Par Dadda ek question ka answer dijiye Dua aur main aapki story mein kaise aaye? Aap logo ne aisa kya kiya jisse ke hum bhi aapki story ka hissa bun gaye? [But Dadda I have one question what did both of u do that Dua and I became a part of your story?]

Geet was embarrassed to the core with this innocent yet naughty question of Jahah; she hugged Maan and hid her face in his chest

Maan: (whispered huskily in her ear) Kya khayal hai jaan batadu humari naughty raat ki secret? [So what do u think love shall I disclose the secret of our naughty passionate night?]

Geet hit him playfully on his cheat and bit his earlobe giving him the well deserved answer

Maan: Ahhโ€ฆ

The kids looked at Maan with a questioning look to which he replied

Maan: Ab prince aur princess ke sone ka time ho gaya hai kyunki ab dada ko aapki mumma ko ek pyara sa punishment dena hai issliye ab aakhein band karke swwet dreams dekhne ki taiyaari karo [Now its sleeping time for prince and princess as Dadda wants to give a sweet punishment to Mumma so like good kids close your eyes and enter the world of dreams]

Geet bit her tongue as she understood the double meaning hidden in her charming husband's words

She held her ear and apologized for her naughty love bite but Maan took the liberty to tease her upto the extreme limits making her face completely red with a blushing tinge

After few minutes Jahah and Dua entered the world of sleep and without any delay Maan scooped Geet in his arms making it clear that this night was yet another beautiful chapter of their romantic naughty tale wherein their love will be blossomed to yet another majestic levelโ€ฆ

PLS PRESS D LIKE BUTTON N DO COMMENT


WRITER'S NOTE

So this was the end of yet another Maaneet journey. I hope you'll have enjoyed reading the epilogue. This is the last time I am requesting you'll to give me big comments it will just help me to improve as a writer. I have tried my level best to give a different epilogue I hope I was successful in bringing a smile on your face๐Ÿ˜ณ

Pls tell me how was the journey? Did u like it? Which was ur fav character? Why? Which character u disliked the most? Was this story different or no? Did u like the epilogue? What was the best part of the epilogue? Were you'll satisfied with my writing?

Once again thanks for being a part of this journey and standing by my side and supporting me in every ups and downs of my life. Will start updating Jaane tu now love u stay blessed.


Love- Divya (aka Piya)

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