MG Untouched Desires#2 (Thread 3 link on Pg 149)

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MonaSWrites

@MonaSWrites

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#711

Originally posted by: TaranaStyle
I loved the comparison you made between the dark clouds and Maan's mind and finally when he told her about his past... the clouds in the sky cleared up and the bird was chirping outside denoted Geet entering in his life...
Beautiful description of sunrays entering his room with dancing dirt. I have always noticed that in the sun rays and you putting that in words just made my heart skip a beat. You have a very keen observation and a gift to express that in words.
Keep it up!!!
Will be waiting for your next update.

I just read that you have pain in your hand... please take car of your health first and we will keep dreaming about your story characters Maaneet. :)

thanks dear .. m totally fine.. just some pain in hand ...

m glad u noticed those lines ..nd liked ... 😃

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alekhika

@alekhika20

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#712

Wow superb & fab update,cont soon,luv it.

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Alicia thelwell

@alicia212

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#713

wow great story plz update soon
it's an amazing story to read i really enjoy reading this story of your keep going when u have time and you are a very good witer

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tabby999

@tabby999

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#714

👏👏👏 nice and sweet

chalo baat karne ki shuruat toh hui

soon everything will be fine

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Infinity.

@Infinity.

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#715

Awesome update..Loved it

Waiting for next...Continue soon

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Guzara Waqt

@Mango_Melody

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#716

I get so much relief after reading it b'coz i was praying that they don't misunderstand eachother...

OMG!!! First time they did candid talk and i love Geet concern...Wohooo!!! Maan teasing her and she got all sharam se pani pani😳😆
Waiting for next part

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6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#717

I was so engrossed in Maan-geet pain, confusion, emotions, that I almost forgot about Maan's that Kapoor uncle...

thank god misunderstanding between Maan-Geet is cleared...

awesome update...

thanx for pm...

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Tabinda Areeb

@t_areeb

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#718

so maan opening up with geet

nice part

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kavya.sravya

@kavya.sravya

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#719

loved maan's opening up to geet. so, he knows his uncle is not a good person. what would he do , when he comes to know , his uncle's deeds with helpless girls and especially geet !