MG Untouched Desires#2 (Thread 3 link on Pg 149)

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ritzy09

@ritzy09

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+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#701

I am happy that Maan's misunderstanding is clear and they are sharing their lives with each other...

i wonder will Maan be forgiving when he will find out what kapoor did to Geet...

awesome update

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tamannA

@tamanna1391

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Posted: 12 years ago

#702

update maan past painfull geet concern awsem

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Remya

@Remya_Pillai

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#703

he s hiding his uncle's deed just b/c he helped him..
After noeing his uncle's advances towards geet i dont think maan vl forgive him...
Loved to c their mu clear..

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Sharmeen

@SheenGcian

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#704

Awesome Update De ar 😛
Pheww shukar hai misunderstanding khatam hogai 😳
Update. Next Part Soon 😉

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Tarana

@TaranaGeet

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#705

I loved the comparison you made between the dark clouds and Maan's mind and finally when he told her about his past... the clouds in the sky cleared up and the bird was chirping outside denoted Geet entering in his life...
Beautiful description of sunrays entering his room with dancing dirt. I have always noticed that in the sun rays and you putting that in words just made my heart skip a beat. You have a very keen observation and a gift to express that in words.
Keep it up!!!
Will be waiting for your next update.

I just read that you have pain in your hand... please take car of your health first and we will keep dreaming about your story characters Maaneet. :)

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shri12

@shri12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#706

Fabulous maan suffered alot bcoz of his near ones in the past

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maanluver

@maanluver

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#707

amazing update dear

geet clarified now maan's turn to clarify

n wash out all her doubts

maan's past is really horrible

he has also suffered so much in his life

god know's how that little soul bore all this

even the person whom he respected so much

ditched him n turned out to be a money freak

but still maan dint do anything to him

because he now also respects him so much

for what all he did

geet is in so much pain only listening to him

n maan is finally in a good mood

feeling light and calm after almost 3 days

ab geet bhulo mat maan ne kuch khaya nahi hai

want 2 see geet forcing maan to eat

precap is interesting

maan kahan chala gaya

update soon

waiting eagerly

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soma.gurti

@soma.gurti

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#708

very emotional update lovu...awesomeee👏

awww...poor maan uspe kya kya beete...😭...jis uncle ne usko sb se bachaya wo v usse use kiya...cheee...aur maan ko pata nehi hai k wohi uncle geet ki life barbaad karnewala tha...😡...jis din maan ko yea pata chalega wo kamina kapoor to gaya😡...

hayeee...geet maan k bare mein kuch bura nehi sun sakti...uski feelings bahar aa gayi...☺️😳😊

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sona rai

@sona-rai

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#709

god maan gona be in dilema after knowing his uncle's deeds in orphanage.

lovely update yar.

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shruthiR

@shruthiR

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#710

It was a very nice chp.Maan opened upto Geet about his past.Atlast their misunderstanding has been cleared and they are on good terms with each other.Looking forward to the next chp and update soon😊

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