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congrats 4 new ff
i love theses type of stories
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The Palace of secrets Part 2

Friends...most of u have misunderstood what i wrote.This FF is not based on Aaptarakshaka.What i wrote is when i saw this film i felt like writing a supernatural thriller.That's all.This is my story.




After few months….
The whole palace was busy preparing to receive Geet and Maan.They were going to visit them.Finally Maan and Geet reached.Ganga and Rano received them with a lamp.
They saw luggages with them.
Rano:Hey…you both have brought luggages .
Geet smiled:Yes Maa.We are going to stay here for a month.
They all were excited.But Aloknath's heart beat fast due to tension.
A:What?No…this is not possible.
Geet and Maan,also others became dull.
A:After marriage,a lady's house is her husband's house.You should stay in Maan's house Geet.
M:Dadu…What you said is true.But just becasuse of marriage,Geet can't ignore you all.She cannot forget you all.I respect her for that.And I am not going to stay here as a ghar jamai.We are here to enjoy our vacation.Nothing else.Geet said there is a story behind this palace.I also heard that there is a locked room where a lot of secrets are hidden.I was curious to study all these.That's why I am also here.
Aloknath was tensed.
A:You both can enjoy your vacation.But it's better not to dig up the past.Never opened that locked room.It is not good.
Maan and Geet became dull.

Maan was sitting in the room.His face was gloomy.
Geet went to him.
G:You are upset about not being able to explore our palace.Right?Don't take Dadu's words seriously.I stole the room's key from Dadu's cupboard when he was sleeping.
She showed him the key.Maan's face shone.
M:That means we can open that room?
G:Yes.
They were excited.They ran towards that room.
Maan opened the door.They both got inside.
It was dusty.They started coughing.
They saw a big box.Maan opened the box.
They were surprised to see grand clothes.Both male and female clothes were there.Lots of precious ornaments were also there.
G:Wow!So beautiful.
Maan looked around.
M:There is not even one framed photograph of the people who stayed here.I mean…this room.
G:Those days photography was rare.Right?
M:This is not just a dusty room.There are hidden secrets in this room.
G:Yes.But dadu did not tell me anything.I asked him so many times.But….
M:I am dying to know the hidden secrets.
G:I heard that there is a book which is available in the library about this room…about the people who lived here.
M:Cool.Tomorrow itself we will go there and search for that book.
G:Sure.Dadu did not allow me to take that book from the library.Now you are there to support me.

At night….
Aloknath woke up from his bed with a shock hearing the foot steps of a dancer…her tinkling anklet's sound was haunting him.
He opened his cupboard.
A:The key is missing.Oh!

The next morning….
Aloknath:Did you all hear the tinkle of an anklet from the locked room?
Mohindar:So dadaji…
A:How can you all hear that?You all are always in deep sleep.You all will not even hear the sound of bomb blast.
Aloknath looked at Maan:What about you damad ji?
M:I did'nt hear anything like that dadu.
A:So even you also sleep like the others in this house.
Geet:Dadu…you simply feel like that.It's only an illusion.There was no such sound from that room.
A:Nooo.It's not an illusion.I knew that if that room gets unlocked something like this will happen.
Everybody was confused.
Sahil:That room was unlocked?
Maan and Geet got tensed.
A:Yes.I know that it's Geet who took the key from my cupboard to open the door.Damadji…you look mature.At least you should have listened to me.
Everyone was shocked.
Maan and Geet were embarassed as they were caught red handed.
G:Sorry dadu.
M:Dadu…please forgive us.
A:I can forgive you both.But I can't stop the danger which is awaiting.
He left the room.
Ganga:Don't worry.Actually we all wanted to clean that room and use it.But dadaji did'nt let us do that.We don't believe in such superstition.
Mohindar:Actually it was Dadaji's cousin brother Rameshwar and his wife Madhubala's room.He is very much attached to that room.He does'nt want that room to be used by anyone as he can't imagine earasing their memories from that room.
Sahil:But I can't understand why dadaji thinks that there will be danger if that room gets unlocked.He thinks that whatever he predicts comes true.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Dono ne room khol diya ab kya hoga waiting 4 next dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
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jaise jaise story aage bad rahi hai curiosity bhi badati ja rahi hai
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Posted: 12 years ago
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interesting part..
love it...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing Update
Continue Soon
Thanks For The PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice part..wats w8ing 4 maneet
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It was nice update
pls cont soon
Thanks for pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Its soo nice and interesting...
plz update
eager to know
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Posted: 12 years ago
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APTHARAKSHAKA...i think its VISHNU VARDHAN'S movie...i heard of it but not able to seen it...its kanada version of NAGAVALLI...i dont knw correctly...i heard of it...

so nw d curse will begin...m curious to knw...wht will happen nxt...who will stop d curse...

awesome n lovely update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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